Volmorous

It still needs a lot of work, definitely!

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/4863/mysketch0013mr.jpg

Thanks, I'll show you how far I have gotten with your dragon so far... I well, "Supped" it up a little... I'll upload it on photobucket or something, I'll give you the link.

No i don't expect you to have seen those movies. (ring wrathes are from lord of the rings-btw)I like your story idea though, and it's impressive for a ten year old. I know people my age who couldn't come up with something that good. So feel happy. And about the fact you need ideas well i could ask you to try and draw my dragon or if that's too hard you could try Carse. (he's another one of my book charas i haven't told you about yet. he's in my section under Carse) And if they are both too hard draw me a wolf, if you want to, that is. You wanted suggestions so i'm giving you some. The idea of you drawing my charas is not a request, it's just something that may challange you as an artist. Although you are very well developed already as an artist for being a ten year old.

Sounds cool!

Well Di doesn't know what to do-except keep his elvin village safe. So he grabs his things and goes out to fetch the other fang. When he gets back to the forrest he's met with a nasty surprise as the dragon attacks him. He gets knocked out and the only reason he doesn't die is because an elfin half-bred magician named Maho shows up and saves him. He finally restrains the dragon and gets Di to safety. After a fight scene involving Di and Maho the two become friends, they are worried though, cause they don't know what to do with the fangs or the dragon. But little do they know there's someone hunting them... To Be continiued (only if you want to know more about the story) If you want to know about the characters go to my section and their desciptions and profiles are there...

PS-this summary is only the tip of the iceburg...

My book dragon fangs is about a young elf (young being about 300 years old) named Dinochu who is out hunting and he finds a fang. But it isn't just any fang, it's a Zasidi Dragon fang. Zasidi dragons being the most fearsome and rare creature on Terrison. The fang is about three feet long and comes from the dragon in the pics you like. (The big fang) The Dragons name is Zazzy after her race. Well lets just say no one has survived a Zasidi dragon raid. And if they say they did they were lying. Well Dinochu is scared to death so he drops the fang and runs home thinking everything will be alright. Well it isn't that night while he's sleeping the dragon calls out to him telling him to go back and get the fang. He refuses of course but then he sees the horrifying image of his town being burned to the ground. He snaps awake and finds the other fang glowing on his bedroom floor....To Be Continued..

Lol, out of those three movies the only one I've seen is The Ring, c'mon, you think a 10 year old would see all of those?

I like your story Idea. It is very creative, though when I read it I imagined The Ring, Ring wrathes, and Final Destination 1 all comming together. Not saying your story's unoriginal, that's just what my mind thought up. Here I'll tell you a little about my book Dragon Fangs. (Since you love the dragon(s) ^.~) On next post...

Yeah, My account there is Volmorous, I don't have any drawings up on there yet, I just got it two days ago or something... Well, if you have any requests or suggestions, I will do the requests, and I'll take the suggestions. Thanks,

-Volmorous

hello =)
hehe tanx for all the coments ^^ your dragon pic looks good by the way =)

I'm sorry I can't reply to all of your coments =( I would like to but my life is really busy ><

I'm allso at deviantat.com =) do you have an acount there? =)

Hello It's me again. Thanks for commenting on my dragon pics I'm glad you liked them. Now i'd like to ask you to go my section and go to the pic titled Silent Night.(last pic) I think you'll like it.

I think your dragon is great for a 10 year old. I wasn't that good when i was 10. Im fifteen and I think by the time your my age you'll probably surpass me if you keep working at it. As for having a scanner yeah i think it's a good idea but it's okay if you don't, whatever works for you. anyway do you want to be friends? drop me a line on my profile.

about my above comment, upon closer inspection of you dragon pic i see that you DID shade it. And i wanted to just say my bad, i'm sry i forgot. (and maybe it's just my computer but i couln't see your pic too well which is why i left my previous comment.) I like the fact that you added scales to the neck it makes your dragon look cool. I tried adding scales to mt dragon and it just looked weird so i erased them. BTW-just a random question: Did you use a digital camra to take this pic or did you scan it? (I have a realy bad habit of leaving really long comments sry. But i do this because i believe it gives alot more feed back then a two or three word comment.)

Thanks, and as for your question on how I did that pic so good...well that's pretty hard to explain cause i only get a good pic like that once in a while. But I'm getting better. I liked your picture of your dragon head and the only thing I can say is i'd like to see what it would look like if you colored and/or shaded it. Here's the best hint i can tell you about how i drew my dragons head well; have you even looked at a horse's head? Though it doesn't have as much of a resemblance as my Dragon of fire and ice does to a horse thats what i based the anatomy on. cause i used to draw horses all the time before i got bored with them. and again all i've got to say is i'd like you to try and at least shade your picture, maybe copy your pic on a scanner if you think shading the original might ruin it and shade the copy. It may take some time to get the hang of it but the end result of shading it could drastically improve your pics. (sorry about the long comment I just wanted to gve you a tip if you wanted one.)

BTW-since you liked my dragons head check out the first 2 pics on my third page, i think you might like them.

Thanks... it's appreciated.