my poem- Emotions

I'm gonna write one of my poems. the one I thought is very good. If you like or have any comments please go ahead and tell me

i hide my feeling from the world
but my heart is dying
from holding too much
but if i let go of my emotions
i will show the world
what i really feel about them
i'll kill the ones
i call family
i'll cry a river of all the sadness and pain
i feel
i'll just go insane
if i let go of my emotions
my feelings where
never to be hold in
but they're not to be
let go
my heart wish
it didn't have emotions
it thinks that my pain
is because of everything
i kept inside.

is it time to let go
or will i ever find peace
with my emotions and this life?