Oliver's destiny fanfic

Ok I've started Oliver's destiny again for the third time,in hope that it will turn out better.The first three chapters are up,and I'm working on my fourth.I'm trying really hard on this one so if there aren't updates for a few days it's because I'm either really busy with school work,or because I'm stuck on part of the story and working in it.I will appreciate ideas on how to improve so if you have any do tell! Thank you!