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YOUR DRAWING SKILLS ARE HORRIBLE!

YOUR DRAWING SKILLS ARE HORRIBLE!

YOUR DRAWING SKILLS ARE HORRIBLE! by Candycane9
YOUR DRAWING SKILLS ARE HORRIBLE! by Candycane9

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Candycane9
"YOUR DRAWING SKILLS ARE HORRIBLE!" cried the girl I drew. XD

Sorry. The skin color, and the way I colored it is absolutely horrible. I didn't think it looked this bad when I was finished with it. But when it got scanned, looked terrible.. = 3= I will draw her again! Just make a better version of it. ^^'..Please try to enjoy..?

~Thanks for views\votes\favorites\comments. <3

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Female)
Date Submitted
Views 1446
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 2
Comments 9
Media Colored Pencil / Crayon
Time Taken ..took a bit.. since I colored it.
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Devon11 on August 15, 2009, 5:40:19 AM

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Devon11OK good! ^^
Awesome! Those critiques are actually critiques that I've recieved. lol.
Oh. are you feeling better now? What was wrong?
and you're very welcome, m'dear. :)

TailsFanatic on August 9, 2009, 5:26:23 AM

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TailsFanaticI saw this on the front page, and looked. Nehhhh..

The eyes are waaaaay too far apart. You need to push them together a bit, but not too much, you don't want them to look squished.
The coloring itself is pretty good, but make sure not to criss-cross the coloring with a different color over the original color. That just makes it look weird. Color over in the same direction as the original color.

Otherwise, it is pretty good. 7/10~

Candycane9 on August 14, 2009, 3:17:25 AM

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Candycane9Wow, thanks you're right! XD I thought blending the colors around would look good. But instead it made the drawing worse. The eyes are way too far apart. So I definitely know where you are coming from. ^^; I'll try to redo this again, so it'll look better. Thanks guys!

TailsFanatic on August 14, 2009, 9:40:47 AM

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TailsFanaticYou're welcome. <3

Devon11 on August 9, 2009, 8:09:38 AM

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Devon11This is good. I like it. But, I don't wanna come across as mean, but I'll give you some critiqes.

Back to TailsFantastic's critique, the eyes are too far apart. From what I know, the eyes are exactly one eye length apart. So, say that both the eyes are one inch big, then the space needs to be one inch thick.
When you first start out, I don't know if you do this or not, but draw a circle and then extend the chin below.

Instead of making the chin straight down, just give it a slight curve. And don't forget the cheekbone.
With the 3/4 view, The nose actually cuts off a small part of the eye farthest from you. If the camera was on the right, it would slightly cut off the left eye, vice versa.

When you work with hair, hair isn't flat against the head, it's lifted. Start with the part, and extend it from the head aboout maybe an inch. Then, give it the basic shape.

When you go into details, you can then add the fly away strands, lines to show hair seperation, and the decals in the hair if any. Then, you create various wave sizes on the part and erase the straight line.

The eyes also are very shiny, which you did a GREAT job on the shine. If you want to add shading, which gives it a more anime look, I make little black scribbles just about two millimeters from the biggest eye shine. I bring it directly across and I don't fill it in all the way. I leave some white spots in the scribbles. Also, not going all the way to the outside of the eye really helps give the dhading it's effect.

The neck also extends to the bottom left or right of the circle and a half an inch close to the chin.

That's all the critiques I have. I hope I didn't come across as mean! I'm so sorry if I do! ^^'

But I do love her concept. The hair is relly cute. The hands are a LOT better than mine! The blushing is really cute and she does look scared. Hm.. wonder what's freaking her out. It's not your drawing skills because they're pretty good! I'd give this an 8 or 9!

Candycane9 on August 14, 2009, 3:24:01 AM

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Candycane9O.O I never got such a long comment before on my drawings. XD Thank you so much for telling me the things I have to work on, I appreciate it a lot. And I don't mind critiques at all, because I know that I gotta improve. ^^ So when I get criticism on my pictures, I think that's good and I try my best to listen to what they are saying. XD
I kind of rushed this picture, that's the thing. :\ Which made me lose my focus a lot since I wasn't in the best of mood, lol, wasn't feeling good.
Thanks again! I'm definitely going to use what you gave me and I'm going to try to fix the other problems in my drawings.

Living_Dead_Girl on August 10, 2009, 5:23:24 AM

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Living_Dead_GirlXDDDDDDD That's uber hilarious! It's pretty bad when your picture yells that LOLOL! Good luck on making the second one and always keep improving. I don't think it was mentioned in the other crits, so I'll bring up real quick that I think the hand is just a tad too big, which isn't a huge issue because the hand isn't the focus, yupyup! I had a lot of fun looking at your piccies! You are improving a lot, just keep updating! ^^

Falconlobo on August 9, 2009, 3:53:03 AM

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Falconloboi think it's pretty good i like the hair eyes and expression

Tuntun422 on August 9, 2009, 3:49:19 AM

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Tuntun422I give this an 8.