Fish
Fish
Fish by Jack
![Fish by Jack](http://pictures.fanart-central.net/j/Jack/523980/Jack-523980-Fish.jpg)
Description
Description
General Info
General Info
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Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 15 hrs
Reference none
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 15 hrs
Reference none
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taurus92 on December 9, 2006, 1:45:11 PM
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Cthatya on December 9, 2006, 10:25:48 AM
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Papercut_Dragon on December 9, 2006, 9:33:28 AM
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(If you don't like critiques, then please stop reading and disregard the rest of this comment. I know it may sound silly to tell you this, but there's a lot of artists who would rather not be critiqued and I don't want to make you angry. ^_^ Also, I'm not pointing out mistakes that you say you know you made, just ways I think you can improve, based on the rest of your gallery - which is nice, by the way - not only in this piece but in all your future artworks.)
That said, the woman looks like she's not really a part of the scene, but just placed in there. Yes, the light hitting her face is coming from the right direction, but it's not the same light. "Warm light, cool shadows." Late afternoon light comes strong from one direction, and it's a nice, warm light. Late afternoon shadows tend to be cool - blues and purples. Look at your clouds! They are a beautiful example of this type of light. Her skin should contain some nice oranges and purples for the shadows - and her dress would have blues and browns (blue shadows go well with the color of her dress, anyway). And, some light blue light being relected off the ocean, shinging onto her and her clothing - especially in areas that are nearest the ocean - would integrate her into the scene very well.
Sorry if that was a little wordy! :) But the end result is: good job!
SxK_YGOfan on December 9, 2006, 9:08:23 AM
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SoloAzume on December 9, 2006, 9:01:44 AM
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SaraJane on December 9, 2006, 8:44:35 AM
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GAARALUVZ on December 9, 2006, 8:36:03 AM
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CrescentMOON33 on December 9, 2006, 8:00:30 AM
chibibreeder on December 8, 2006, 10:33:53 PM
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saturn13 on December 8, 2006, 2:06:06 PM
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