a picture of me by LoverOfLife

a picture of me

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this is the seconed time i submitted this picture but i fixed some major things like his arm was messed up in the first one and i did feet in the last one but they sucked i loke this one alot better and am partly glad the other one isnt on the site.
sorry i havent posted any art b4 this one but i jus got a scanner ^_^ i am so happy i hope all my friends see this thats u zakuman,honeypossum,bullsnake,siberian tiger ect.
comments please harsh ones are accepted as long as they are teaching me sumthin not jus like.....this sucks please say y it does and how to correct it

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Male)
Date Submitted December 6, 2004, 7:36:42 AM
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Bullsnake on December 6, 2004, 5:39:04 AM

i wouldn't worry about making it more realistic since you seem to be focusing on the manga/anime style..

perfect realism isn't an issue, and there are so many ways of doing something it's very hard to give any kind of "overnight success" pointers.

Improvement comes with time, especially when you're doing a comic style.Like I said, there are so many ways to do something. I can't explain how I draw a face and expect it to be correct because there are a bajillion other artists who draw a face entirely different. It's tough.

however the numerous lines in the jacket and pants and shirt don't really fit the anime style I think you're going for.

but just work on it, take your time, check the proportions/symmetry by using a mirror or holding the drawing up to a light so you can see the reverse on the back of the paper, study how other people do things.. etc etc.

that's a mouthful..but I was in a typing mood for some reason.

HoneyPossum on December 6, 2004, 1:53:57 AM

Ah, first comment ever!

All in all this isn't as bad as you think it is. The major things to work on are to make it more realistic. For example, the face is a bit round, and the eyes seem a little high.

But, on the plus side, the outfit is done pretty well. There seem to be a lot of wrinkles, but that's just me.

Draw more, and upload it!! ^-^

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