An undecided path

Man.. It took me about two hours to make this piece of art. Yes it seems a bit long, but that's just because I had my PS2 running for the Jak 3 game, and I used that one program where you can look at all the charactors in 3-D and stuff (well duh they're already 3-D) and I tried to copy the charactors by 2-D... I drew Torn real good don't you think??? lmao when I started with Erol his face was way to wide. I just had to fix it. OH, ant this is the first time I attempted to draw the cyber erol one. I first drew Laona, then Torn, THEN the 2 Erol's last. Oh man, I drew them at my best. Laona looks real good too. I love this picture. AND I USED PEN FOR ONCE. Oops.. I just realized I didn't color in the backround yellow on the patch thing on Laona's right side of her torso. Oh well. Not the biggest flaw. COMMENTS PLEASE AND THANK YOU