You Won't Do What?
You Won't Do What?
You Won't Do What? by SeanHalnais
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General Saber threatens Edward by tell him that Alphonse and Winry would be killed if he did't do as he ordered. A scene from my fanfic "Final Confrontation: The Dark Alliance." To give you and example of the story, here's an excerpt I put in of the scene itself.<br />
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Saber took another sip of his brandy and placed the cup back on his desk. “I feel it would be more advantageous if you actually had someone who at least knows the interior of the palace itself.” Saber walked up to Edward Elric. “I have another mission in store for you, Edward.”<br />
“I’m not gonna do it, Saber.” Fullmetal growled, turning away from the general with a huff. But Saber quickly grabbed the front of his shirt’s collar, forcing the young alchemist to look at him.<br />
“You’re not going to do what, boy?!” There was threat behind his words indicating the consequences if Fullmetal didn’t cooperate. “You forget, young man, who I have held hostage. Now if you wish to be stubborn from here on out and endanger the lives of your friend, Miss Winry Rockbell, and your younger brother Alphonse, then by all means please rebel. I’m sure they would be happy to know that you rather preferred to be pigheaded than sensible in thinking about their lives when I have them killed.”<br />
“You bastard…” Edward uttered, angrily.<br />
“I knew that you’d see it my way.”
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Scene:<br />
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Saber took another sip of his brandy and placed the cup back on his desk. “I feel it would be more advantageous if you actually had someone who at least knows the interior of the palace itself.” Saber walked up to Edward Elric. “I have another mission in store for you, Edward.”<br />
“I’m not gonna do it, Saber.” Fullmetal growled, turning away from the general with a huff. But Saber quickly grabbed the front of his shirt’s collar, forcing the young alchemist to look at him.<br />
“You’re not going to do what, boy?!” There was threat behind his words indicating the consequences if Fullmetal didn’t cooperate. “You forget, young man, who I have held hostage. Now if you wish to be stubborn from here on out and endanger the lives of your friend, Miss Winry Rockbell, and your younger brother Alphonse, then by all means please rebel. I’m sure they would be happy to know that you rather preferred to be pigheaded than sensible in thinking about their lives when I have them killed.”<br />
“You bastard…” Edward uttered, angrily.<br />
“I knew that you’d see it my way.”
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Category Anime/Manga » Fullmetal Alchemist » Fan Characters (OC's)
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Category Anime/Manga » Fullmetal Alchemist » Fan Characters (OC's)
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Pidge on May 4, 2006, 9:39:02 AM
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Your fic looks all the more interesting.Saber's not nice.Not nice.Put gum in his hair,Eddd!!Still excellent coloring.*munches nacho*
TheSilenzio on March 8, 2006, 5:26:29 AM
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Darkmasterbabe on March 8, 2006, 4:17:28 AM
KichigaiNeko-Chan on March 7, 2006, 4:21:02 PM
Wow, this looks good! So does the fic!
Pretty clever...giving the viewers a little taste of it. Expecially this part. VERY clever...-smokes pipe-
Ed: o__O Who the frack are you suppose to be?
...no one, my little shrimpling, no one.
Ed: WTF DID YOU CALL ME!?!?
Oh...sheet. o_____O;
.:This next scene have been blocked due to heavy violence:.
~KNC
Pretty clever...giving the viewers a little taste of it. Expecially this part. VERY clever...-smokes pipe-
Ed: o__O Who the frack are you suppose to be?
...no one, my little shrimpling, no one.
Ed: WTF DID YOU CALL ME!?!?
Oh...sheet. o_____O;
.:This next scene have been blocked due to heavy violence:.
~KNC