Shinobi or anime style me

Not bad. The torso and leg areas are a little plain as people have said, though I think belt is a nice toutch. I also think the sword could be straighter though the face area is really good.

As with your other picture possibly the best part of this pic. The detail on the wingtips is nice.

Again, a pretty good picture that could well be imporved upon by shading and/or clouring (but if you really are clourblind as you say then that could be a problem).

i wish i could draw like that you are really good

Cloof, clarify for me, you mean like...the pants are too flat? (folding clothes is something im working on haha) feets..? like his shoes are short? or what? they're supposed to be coming toward you

take Cloof's comment as "constructive" criticism. -_-
anyways, that's ICE COOL!!! xD mah word. awsome design of the clothing and wings and sword and(blah blah blah) lol very cool!!

Too Fat and short feets

i like ur clothing designs, ur hair, swords and wings. very nice wngs, ^_^ smexiness.

Ah! ^^ This is really cool, I really like the sword, and I love how you did the wings! ^^'

very cool,keep up the good work!!!!

^^ You have a great feel for the basic proportions of the human body--sometimes people will draw the eyes too small or the ears too high, etc., but you demonstrate a great knowledge of the fundamentals. The facial features are fantastic. ^^ Also I love how you did the wings and you created the illusion tha they were 'folding forward'. Foreshortening yayness! ^^ You're pretty good, ya know. And thankies for your comments--I'll try to do an original character (I've got too many) and put it up or something. *gives you a brownie*