Sonic Unleashed
Sonic Unleashed
Sonic Unleashed by TheGameArtCritic

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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Characters (Fanart) » Sonic
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Characters (Fanart) » Sonic
Date Submitted
Views 4520
Favorites... 7
Vote Score 10
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Time Taken 2 HOURS!!!
Reference PLAY Magazine May Cover (Sonic Unleashed)
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Time Taken 2 HOURS!!!
Reference PLAY Magazine May Cover (Sonic Unleashed)
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mechadragon13 on August 29, 2008, 12:13:10 PM
TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 2:59:34 PM

Mr. Inderretta: I actually have some stunning news that I have realized should help the hedgebat and i bond a little more...
Rosette: oh YEAH? What's that, you pompous PIG?
Mr. Inderretta: badger. Anyway, that piece of information is a secret... but I'm at the same time upset that my good pawn was taken off the chess board...
Rosette: WHAT???
Me: it means he knows Eclipse is going to die.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 30, 2008, 10:56:18 AM
mechadragon13 on August 31, 2008, 11:49:33 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 3:30:26 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 1, 2008, 4:08:08 AM
mechadragon13 on September 1, 2008, 11:42:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 12:07:55 PM
mechadragon13 on September 2, 2008, 10:47:40 AM

Everyone else: *confuzzled*
Acid: ehhhh... *gets up* oww..... what happened?
Me: *listen, listen, then smiles* you didnt. you did? no freaking way. are you joking around with me? *listens* ......you arent, arent you? *listen* medical room D? okay. i'll take him over there. *disactivates watch* ACID!!
Acid: *starts, then relaxes* ...what?
Me: come 'ere. *walks off to a different hallway*
Acid: ...okay then... *hesitantly follows*
MEANWHILE!!!!
Fang: *is searching for mikki* where in the world did he fly off to?? *looks down and sees him standing near the outskirts of town* MIKKI! *lands near him*
Mikenno: ....leave, fang.
fang: whatsa matter with you mikki? this isnt like you.
Mikenno: i have to leave.
Fang: why?
Mikenno: *turns to his demon form* you wouldnt understand.
Fang: why not??? stop treating me like a kid, mikenno.
Mikenno: i dont want you to get hurt. *suddendly slashes at the air in front of him, and a large slash appears in the air, and it grows slowly until it is a sort of diagonal portal. thw rold beyong is almost exactly like this one, but looks very bleak.*
Fang: ...mikki...?
Mikenno: leave. he's coming........
Fang: who?
Mikenno: *under his breath* ryu...........
TheGameArtCritic on September 2, 2008, 2:54:56 PM

((Ryu?))
menwhial
Rosette: what? What's going on? *follows Inderretta also*
Mr. Inderretta: *his shoes make a click-clack noice against the floor, echoing in the empty, now peacful halls of Hybrid Nation HQ* *he enters the medical room, and places Eclipse on a bed*
Me: Vera. *grin spreads across my face*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 2, 2008, 8:19:46 PM
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 8:44:40 AM

Neo: O.O you're kidding.
*a loud "no f-ing way!!" and a delighted squee are heard from down the hallway*
Me: does that answer your question? ^^
Twilight: *cringes from the high pitched squee* oww. yes.
Me: you can go over there if ya like---- *looks down the hallway and sees an orange aviwolf and a red-orange avichidna walk out of the room, if this was an anime, they'd have HUGE sweatdrops* umm.... lets give them some time XD *gets serious again* so..... has indy done anything?
Neo: we just got here. we're gonna have to wait.....
Zenith: umm, guys? has anyone seen fria?
Twilight: *looks around* scorch is gone too!!!
Me: ...crap.
MEANWHILE!!!
Fang: ryu? who da frick is ryu???
Mikenno: someone i'd rather not have you meet. go. *urgently* NOW. she's a vicious demon. she will destroy you.
Fang: i'm not gonna leave ya alone! if she's as dangerous as you say, you'll need all the help you can get!!
???: yes you will mikki...yes you will..... *malicious laugh*
Mikenno: *immediately turns back to teh portal and growls*
???: *slides smoothly out of the portal, is wearing a long hooded cloak, so she is not visible* well well well. if it isnt my little buddy mikenno...... i missed you.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:53:54 AM
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:07:57 AM

Neo: ..so...... whats gonna happen with eclipse? why do we need to strap him down?
me: like he said. you'll see. *door opens and she goes out. she comes in with a rolling heart moniter, a lenth of somewhat clear rope slung around her shoulder and a muzzle clanched in her teeth* *muffled* can fumeone grad fiss?
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:22:11 AM

Me: i really can't believe you're going through with this...
Mr. Inderretta: *straps the muzzle onto Eclipse, then ties him down to the bed. He hooks him up to the heart moniter, and turns it on, automatically making it emit a forever "eeeeeeeeeeeee...", and showing a flat line, upsetting Rosette even further*
Me: ok, what now?
Mr. Inderretta: now we give him a little "kick" to get him back up. *gives Eclipse a temporary rabies shot*
Everyone: WTF????????????????????????
Eclipse: *a quick shiver runs through his body, but suddenly, his eyes snap open. They are bloodshot*
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:32:39 AM

neo: O.O
Manny: OoO..... *leaves*
Meanwhile!!!
MEANWHILE!!!!
Mikenno: what do you want ryu? you messed with my sight. WHY?
Ryu: i wanted to mess with you, thats all. *grinz* who wouldnt wanna mess with their favorite slave?
Fang: *thinking* slave? what??
Mikenno: i dont belong to you anymore. that contract ended long ago.
Ryu: thats where you're wrong, mikki. you left before the contract ended. so technically, you still belong to me.
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:41:08 AM

Mr. Inderretta: oh do shut up. *places Project Nocturnal on Feral*
Feral: *colors fade to a reverse color, and he becomes puppy-like, and calm. Feral still feels uncomfortable with the muzzle, though. He sneezes. It itches.*
Heart Moniter: *shows the heart beating at a pace much faster then it should be*
Mr. Inderretta: *gets out a styringe and takes a sample of blood from Eclipse/Feral* I'll have to clear out the rabies later...
Rosette: *suspicious* um... what are you doing?
Mr. Inderretta: hm? Oh! Nothing! Nothing!
Rosette: >:(
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:52:57 AM

Neo: *stops the sryinge from shattering against the ground and floats it up to mish*
Me: *grabs teh sryinge* thanks neo. *hands teh sryinge to critic* do with it what you will........
Meanwhile!!!
Mikenno: *eyes widen, then narrow angrily* you lie.
Ryu: no lie. see? *grabs his right arm*
Mikenno: hey! *at first, nothing. then, a red flame-like mark appears on his shoulder. his eyes widen in disbelief* no.....
Ryu: *grins* yes.
Fang: *stars backing into an alley* *thinking* i gotta get to HQ.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:59:12 AM

Me: *hands the styringe to Inderretta*
Mr. Inderretta: hey, thanks :D
Rosette: WHY DID YOU DO THAT??????
Me: because i need another villain other than Inderretta and Incogneto.
Rosette: *facepalm*
Mr. Inderretta: When Eclipse turns back to normal, i wish not he attack me, so i will leave. *does*
mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:03:41 AM

*from outside the room* MIIIIISH!!! TWILLYYY!!! LIIIIIIIGHT!!
Me: O.O wtf what? *goez out of the room* fang!!! where's mikki???
Fang: *gasping for breath from flying so fast* mikki........demon.....slave......ryu.......contract........gahh......
Lightning: what? who's ryu???
Twilight: what contract???
Me: *eyes widen* RYU?! ...........f#$%. we have to get over there. NOW. CRITIIC!!! we gotta GO!!! *runs like hell to the airplane hangar, closely followed my fang, lightning and twilly*
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: .....so now what? you just gonna take me back?
Ryu: *grinzz* no.. i have other plans.....
Mikenno: *wide eyez of disbelief* on=h no you wouldnt.
Ryu: *devilish grin* oh, i would..... heheheh......
Mikenno: i refuse. i wont. not in a million years! AUGH!! *falls to his knees, clutching his shoulder, the flame mark burning brightly*
Ryu: *suddendy serious* you cant disobey me without facing the consequences, mikenno. *grinz again* you have no choice.
Mikenno: *disgusted* you're sick.
TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 8:35:56 AM
mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 10:59:32 AM

Lightning: *hops in next to mish*
Twilight: *gets in behind lightning*
Fang: *gets in next to twilly*
Me: aria and fugue are comin' too.
MEANWHILE!!!!
Mikenno: grrrr....
Ryu: come on, mikki..... lets see if this still works. mobian. now
Mikenno: *growls at her, but when the fire symbol burns again, he reluctantly turns back to his mobian form* i hate you.
Ryu: *grins* oh, i know you do.....
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 5, 2008, 10:03:14 AM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 10:10:19 AM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 10:10:50 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:22:04 AM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:27:48 AM

Me: *opens the hangar door and flies the hell outta there*
Lightning: ...i hope mikenno's ok.....
Twilight: he can take care of himself. so...
Fang: who's ryu?
Me: *cringes at the sound of the name* ehh...... it's a very interesting story....
Ryu is a Chaos Demon with extraordinary power. She's pretty high up in the Demon Ranks...... Mikenno, on the other hand, is the opposite. he has quite a lot of power, but his ranking was almost rock-bottom. Ryu took a liking to him, so she took him in, but also put her symbol on him to make sure no one would try to harm him. in reality, she was marking him as her property....
Meanwhile!!!!
Mikenno: .....so what now? you just gonna take me back? just like that?
Ryu: i have other plans.......... *malicious grin*
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:34:55 AM

Me: it's so ironic. The fact that he's part bat, AND has the ability to fly, and yet he's terrified of flying in machines... anyway, Mish, please go on with your story.
Eclipse: what story?
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:12:09 AM

MEANWHILE!!!!
Mikenno: what do you want ryu? you messed with my sight. WHY?
Ryu: i wanted to mess with you, thats all. *grinz* who wouldnt wanna mess with their favorite slave?
Fang: *thinking* slave? what??
Mikenno: i dont belong to you anymore. that contract ended long ago.
Ryu: thats where you're wrong, mikki. you left before the contract ended. so technically, you still belong to me.
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:25:08 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:31:14 AM
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:43:36 AM

Mikenno: *is staring at eclipse then acid, his eyes barely open. the blackish-purple stuff is almost across his chest*
Me: *to herself* when it reaches his heart, it's all over....
Fang: *is silently sitting by mish*
Manny: *runs up to where mikenno, fang and mish are, and sits by mish* we can't save him, can we?
Fang: *shakes his head*
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:49:00 AM
mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 4:58:28 AM

Me: *bows her head* goodbye, friend.....
Manny: *closes his eyes and sobs quietly*
Acid: *senses mikenno's passing and raises his head. he looks over to where he lies, and then..........he completely loses it* HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! *his eyes turn a bright purple, and he glares at those in the room* you all will die........... HISSSSSSSS!!!
Lightning: oh no..... acid's gone berserk!!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 5:02:24 AM
mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 5:14:09 AM

Fang: i wont let you hurt my friends!!!!! *bite harder*
Acid: HISSSSSSSS!!!! foolish child. *swings his tail around and prys him loose*
Lightning: *thinking hard* berserk, berserk..... how did we deal with berserk??? *lightbulb* THATS IT!!! Twilly!!
twilight: yeah?
Lightning: we need to immobilize acid!! it'll calm him down!!!
Twilight: yes, sir!! *goes daemon and jumps for acid's head*
Lightning: everyone!!! we need to get acid immobilized!! it'll stop his rampage!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 6:13:32 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 24, 2008, 12:37:55 AM
mechadragon13 on August 24, 2008, 9:56:41 AM

Lightning: that gun might work.... if it doesnt, we gotta try to hold him down.
daemontwilight: i'm on it. *leaps up on acids head and lands HARD, forcing his head to the floor*
Fang: *bites down on acids arm*
Zenith: *is trying to get acid's tail to stop moving, but it getting tosses around* this guy's strong, man!!!
Manny: hiiiiiiiYA!!! *delivers a strong kick to acid's back, causing him to fall over* who's all tough NOW????
Acid: *starts pushing himself back up with his arms, hissing argrily*
Fria: (NO YOU DONT!!) *freezes his hands to the floor*
Acid: HISSSS!!!!! *is straining to free his arms* i wont get caught like this again!!!!! *open his jaws wide and spits venom cobra-style*
Fria: (WHOA!) *dodge* (sheez.......)
Lightning: thats it guys, almost there!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 1:56:32 PM
mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 10:45:44 AM

Me: his scales are rock hard, nothing can penetrate them!! rosette, if you shoot him, you wont kill him! just give him a bad bruise XD
Lightning: *sends an electric current through acid's tail*
Acid: GGGRAAGH!!!! *tries to get lightning off, but zenith's holding his tail down* grrr.... AGH!! *cries out as he feels someone bite down on his neck. he turns around* HISSSSSSSS---- *stops dead as he sees his attacker* n-n-no way........
Everyone else: *looks and freezes* ....O.O
Mikenno: *stops biting acid and looks around. then he laughs* what? didnt i SAY i couldnt be killed?
Lightning: uhh... *nervous laugh* heheh, oops!
Acid: O.O b-but... you....... *he suddedndly goes limp and his head drops to the ground*
DaemonTwilight: *gets off his head* ......... did he just........ faint???
TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:16:32 AM

Me: you... you traitor.... *falls over*
Eclipse: hm. I never said i was your friend again... *hand charges up with lethal energy, and he gets ready to kill Acid*
mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 11:32:06 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:45:39 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 26, 2008, 1:25:44 AM
mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 2:34:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:04:45 AM
mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 9:06:16 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:08:59 AM
mechadragon13 on August 27, 2008, 6:43:05 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 8:57:46 AM

Eclipse: *does not dodge the energy in time. It hits him, shocking him with, like, i billion volts of dark electricity* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!!!!! *falls to the ground, twitching, and shaking as energy still pulses through his veins*
Rosette: *screaming so loud that her voice cracks* ECLIPSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: oh my god.....
Eclipse: *falls unconcious. His breathing is irregular*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 27, 2008, 10:00:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 11:26:48 AM

Rosette: *now sobbing* not again... oh god... i can't handle you dying twice...
Me: i know he was trying to kill Acid, and all.... but he WAS out friend.... we need to help him!!
mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 6:34:17 AM

Mikenno: *reverts back to the mobian form and stands quietly for a moment, then turns to aria* i dont think acid will be a problem. *pointz*
Acid: *has returned to his normal self, but is still unconscious*
Mikenno: *walks over to critic* *whisperz* eclipse will not die. if that blast could have killed him, i would not have countered. *starts walking back over to acid when he suddendly freezes*
Me: umm... mikki? mikenno?? OMG what happened???
Mikenno: *suddendly smiles* heheh..... it's a surprise..... *keeps walking towards acid and sits next to him, waiting for him to wake up again*
Fang: okay, lets recap....... eclipse could possibly die, we have a dead rattlesnake in the med room, and a possibly lethal hedgehog-hybrid that could possibly kill us. what now??
Me: ..........
TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 8:30:15 AM

Eclipse: *dying*
Me: oh well THAT sucks... fuggin heart-stopping electricity trick... gave him a heart disorder.
Rosette: O_O heart..... disorder? *breaks down sobbing again*
Me: *facepalm*
Mr. Inderretta: *comes running in the scene, then stops and stares at the after-battle. He looks full of anguish* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! NO!! NO!! NO!!! WHAT HAPPENED?????
Me: why do YOU care?
Mr. Inderretta: *completelly ignores me*
mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 8:39:44 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 9:28:57 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 29, 2008, 9:32:29 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 10:08:05 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 6:41:05 AM

Mikenno: acid's right..... eclipse SHOULD be scared.
Lightning: oh jeez. if mikki's saying that, then we should all be scared....
Acid: *voice echoes again* you should listen to the demon, eclipse..... heheheheh..................
*suddendly someone screams, causing a whole bunch of other people to scream*
Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! what the hell???
*there's a sudden hiss...*
Mikenno: ECLIPSE!!! DUCK!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 9:22:45 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 18, 2008, 10:47:05 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:30:02 AM

Daemontwilight: *still seems to be looking around frantically*
Lightning: what do you see, twilly???
Daemontwilight: acid. i can see him in the dark. my senses are better in daemon form. i can see him, hear him, and scent him. he's fast.............
Acid: *echoing again* heheheheheh........
Me: *singing softly, shaking slightly*
It's a thief in the night to come and grab you
It can creep up inside you and consume you
A disease of the mind it can control you
It's too close for comfort.......
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:55:49 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:59:21 AM

*everyone takes a few steps back*
Acid: heheheh. not scared of the dark? you should be...........
Me: *still singing, still shaking*
Your mind is in disturbia
It's like the darkness is the light
And it's scaring you tonight
It ain't use to whatcha like
Disturbia..............
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:18:58 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:25:33 AM

*stunned silence*
Me: *shaking even more, her voice wavers*
Oh what the pretty lights
Your in the city of wonders
Ain't gone play nice
Watch out you might just go under
You better think twice
Make sure you follow the alter
But if you may falter be wise
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:36:04 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:50:00 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:52:04 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 19, 2008, 9:41:39 AM
mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 3:54:58 AM

Acid: *hissssssssssss.................*
Mikenno: *his eyes widen, and he starts taking a few steps back* oh no..........
*silence, then, and unexpected noise*
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIP!!!!!
DaemonTwilight: *turns her head towards the noise* what the--- *she lets out a mix of a yelp and a gasp, and jupms back, her eyes wide. she's so freaked out, her voice cracks* umm...... guys? we have a BIG problem.
Lightning: how big????
Daemontwilight: VERY big....... bad bad bad bad bad....... *keeps backing away* mish... get the lights.......
Acid: NO! you touch that switch and you face the consequences........... *his voice is slightly different, almost like a hiss..........*
Me: O.O *is freaked out, she shuts her eyes tightly and keeps singing shakily*
when my time comes, forget the wrong that i've done, help me leave behind some reason to be missed...
Fang: I'll do it!!! *flies over everyone and goes right for the switch*
Acid: DONT TOUCH THAT!!!
Me: dont resent me, and when you're feeling empty, keep me in your memories, leave out all the rest, leave out all the rest.......
Fang: rrrrrrah!!!! *pulls the switch and all the lights come on*
*stunned silence, and a few gasps*
Acid: *is no longer just a hedgehog. he has become something similar to a rayquaza, a very large acid-green skake, with a pair of large spikes on it's head, and arms and hands with large talons. his fangs are now about half a foot long. his head was hovering over eclipse, his enormous jaws agape, but when the lights turned on, he recoiled and backed away from him* YOU IDIOTS!! I HAD HIM!!! *HISSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!*
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:36:45 AM

Rosette: ACID! WTF HAPPENED TO YOU???
Me: right now, Rosette, I think he should be focusing on not getting killed by Eclipse.
Eclipse: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! *shoots out short dark blasts like a machine gun*
mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 5:54:23 AM

BOSS BATTLE: Serpent Acid (Hybrid Nation and Eclipse)ok, acid just turned into a giant snake, and is seriously out to get eclipse. His strenth and speed have skyrocketed, and so has his bloodlust!! so ya gotta defeat him before he gets eclipse!! make sure you avoid his fangs, even a tiny scrape can be deadly. also, watch out for his tail, which can knock you around!!
Acid: *laughs like a maniac* HAHAHAHAHAAA!!! my scales are hard as diamonds. you cannot pierce them!!!! *lunges at eclipse, jaws open wide*
Daemontwilight: OH NO YOU DONT!! *bashes head-first into acid's head, knocking him off-balance*
Acid: AGGH! *HISSSS* stupid demon. *knocks Twiight away with his tail*
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:56:47 AM
mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 7:06:31 AM

daemonTwilight: *stands up* im ok!!! *faces acid again* ACID!! cut it OUT!!!
Mikenno: this requires my intervention. *goes daemon and stands at twilly's side*
Acid: i wont stop until HE *points at eclipse with one claw* is dead!!! *faces eclipse again, and sways back and forth like a cobra being charmed, then suddendly goes for eclipse*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 20, 2008, 8:35:48 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 9:56:50 AM
mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 7:33:39 AM

Mikenno: no you dont!!! *slams into eclipse, knocking him away*
Manny: MIKENNO!
Mikenno: *turns in time to see acid bury his fangs in his side* AAAAGH!!!!
Acid: *picks mikenno up, then tosses him across the room* HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! i told you not to get in the way. now look what you have done!!!
Mikenno: *hits the wall HARD, then falls to the ground*
Me: *is completely freaking out* MIKENNO!!!! *starts running over to him*
Fang: *picks mish up and helps her get there faster* i gotcha, mish.
Manny: oh no... did he get bitten????
Lightning: no......... *glares angrily at acid* LOOK WHAT YOU DID!!! YOU KILLED AN ANNOCENT!!!!! *eyes glow strangely, and he starts taking his gloves off* you're paying for this, Acid.
TheGameArtCritic on August 21, 2008, 7:38:49 AM

Eclipse: MIKENNO DIDN'T DESERVE THAT!!!!
Everyone: *looks at Eclipse, suprised*
Eclipse: HOW COULD YOU???? MIKENNO WAS ALL OF OUR FRIENDS!! HE WAS STILL MINE!!! HE WAS THE ONLY ONE I WASN'T TRULY ANGRY AT!!!! HOW COULD YOU?????????? *runs up and slams his fist against Acid's snout*
Me: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 4:47:56 AM

Lightning: *glares at critic, then his eyes return to normal, and he tugs his gloves back on* you're right. no more.
*mish and fang get over to where mikenno is lying*
Fang: *drops mish near mikenno*
Me: *practically leaps towards mikenno* MIKKI!!!! *kneels down next to him and inspects his wound*
Mikenno: *groans. he has bite marks on his sides, and the area around the two largest holes was rapidly turning dark purple. he groans again, then looks up at mish* sorry 'bout that...... i just couldnt let him get eclipse.......agh...
Me: *is starting to tear up* i know why you did it, and it was the right thing to do, but..... i cant believe you're leaving us.......
Mikenno: *looks her right in the eyes, as if he was telling her something, then glances at his wound*
Me: *looks at his wound. then my eyes widen and my mouth opens as if to say something.*
Mikenno: *stares at mish for a bit, as if to tell her to be quiet, and suddendly, he hisses in pain. the purple area had spread almost up to his arm, and across to his back*
Fang: that looks terrible....... is there anything we can do?
Me: *tears are flowing freely, but she keeps her voice even* no....... there's nothing we can do for him now...... *she lays his head against his side, and begins to sob*
*everyone who was watching from the sidelines bows their head*
Daemontwilight: *returns to her normal form and goes to lightning, resting her head against his shoulder, her eyes watering*
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 6:14:56 AM

Me: Eclipse... please...
Eclipse: NO!!! I'M NOT BOUND BY YOU ANYMORE!!! *goes full Condemned* you will PAY for what you've done, Acid... YOU WILL PAY.
Rosette: no... NO! NOT AGAIN!!!
Eclipse: *charges at Acid, eyes intent on slaughtering him*
Me: NO MORE DEATH!!!!! STOP IT!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 6:41:33 AM

Acid: *is having a mega guilt trip* i didnt mean it..... i swear i didnt....... *eyes widen* oh no...... *realizes it's the second time he's caused a death* grr.... again... not again........ AGH!!! *starts bashing his head against the wall*
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:06:48 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:52:05 AM

Me: *small yelp*
Mikenno: *turns to mish* you ok?
Me: *nods* yeah........it's just....... i'm scared.... *shakes head, then starts singing again*
I dreamed I was missing
You were so scared
But no one would listen
Cause no one else cared
After my dreaming
I woke with this fear
What am I leaving
When I'm done here
Mikenno: *to critic* she sings to calm herself down..... she must really be scared....
mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 1:03:16 PM

Daemontwilight: *stops next to him* what happened, mikenno. TELL ME!
Lightning: *stops next to them, still on all fours* *in a sort of growly voice* are we too late???
Mikenno: *his eyes are wide, and he is silent for a moment. then, he nods*
Daemontwilight: oh god. what did he do???
Mikenno: everyone at the base is in danger. WE GOTTA GET BACK!!! *immediately turns around and starts a dash to the base*
daemontwilight: oh no!! *starts running after him*
Lightning: *follows, and thinks* why is the base in danger??? is inderetta attacking?? or worse. is condemned out of control? oh god, i hope we get there in time.....
MEANWHILE!!! at the base.....
Me: *is talking into teh watch/communicator thing* yeah i need that preserver, like, right now.
Neo: what are you doing?
Me: we need to make sure that nothing happens to vera while we're away. so i'm getting talon to fix it for us.
Neo: oh. doe she need help?
Me: nah, dio's workin' on it too.
Manny: who're we talking 'bout?
Neo: some good friends that helped start the Nation.
Acid: *shudders* i have a feeling something's... not right.
*a white and black shadow appears in front of them*
Me: Mikenno? oh god, what happened??
MikennoIllusion: the base is in danger. if you see eclipse, do NOT, i repeat, do NOT let him get into the base. we'll explain when we get to the base. *disappears*
*Acid, manny, neo and i look at each other with horrified looks*
Me: CRITIIIIIIIIIIC!!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:37:12 PM

MENWHIAL AT TEH BASE :D
the doors: *blast open with a loud explosion*
Eclipse: *strides right in. He wears a red trench coat, and pants. He also wears an extremelly angry expression*
Rosette: E-Eclipse...?
Eclipse: *shoots her a glare of pure rage, so intense, it could have made Sephiroth shudder*
Rosette: *backs away a bit*
mechadragon13 on August 15, 2008, 12:05:22 PM

DaemonTwilight: *stands by rosette* eclipse isnt himself. inderetta implanted a chip into him.
Lightning: *stands on the other side of rosette* he found our about your...... *glances at her* job.
MEANWHILE!!!! somewhere else in the base.......
Me: ACID!! get vera to room D13. then, meet back by the north entrance. eclipse is in.
Acid: ...got it. *rus to where vera is, picks her up and runs down a hallway*
Me: neo, come with me.
Manny: what about me???
Neo: it's too dangerous for you. stay here.
Manny: but---
Me: thats an order, manny. you're part of the Nation now. your priority is to save as many lives as possible, not go out and risk your own.
Manny: *opens his mouth to argue, but then nods* yes sir, ma'am.
Me: *smiles and nods* lets go. *runs to where the confrontation is at*
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 1:04:50 PM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 2:57:25 AM

Neo: this whole thing has INDERETTA written all over it.
Mikenno: it's true. inderetta implanted a chip into eclipse's head. it turns eclipse's sorrow into rage, nd gives him full control over condemned.
Lightning: *surprised* full control???
Mikenno: sad to say, but yes.
Acid: *runs in and sees eclipse* whoa. what happened to HIM?
Me: he's been turned against us.
Acid: what?? i swear it wasnt me.
Me: we know it wasnt you, acid. but we gotta make sure eclipse doesnt hurt any innocents.
Manny: *runs towards them* EI!! 'perame!!
Me: *between gritted teeth* i thought i told you to GIT OUT.
Manny: hey, you cant kick me out without lettig me see some action first!
Me: *exasperated sigh*
DaemonTwilight: *ear twitch* someone's coming through the south entrance.... *eyes widen* i know who it is!! neo, go get her.
Neo: *nods and runs off*
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:24:46 AM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:31:06 AM

Neo: *runs back with an enormous grin on his face* hey, guys, look who came to visit!!
Shidako: *walks in, her enormous sword in hand* hey guys. miss me?
DaemonTwilight: knew you'd come ^^
Lightning: sweetness.
Zenith: *lands near them* OY! dont leave ME out of the fight!!
Scorch: *runs in with fria* hey, you ain't leaving US out either.
Fria: *nods in agreement*
Fang: *swoops in and lands next to lightning*
Lightning: how ya doin' little buddy?
Fang: not bad, not bad. *competitive grin*
Me: alright eclipse. bring it on.
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:37:47 AM

Me: OH MY GOD!!!!!
Eclipse: *then raises his hand all the way up, and does the same thing to the base, cutting the power, and making the whole building go black with darkness. The only light there is now is Eclipse's glowing hands. Of, course, those soon went out too*
Rosette: oh god... oh god... *is shaking*
Me: I can't even see my hand in front of my face...
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:43:59 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:48:09 AM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:55:10 AM

Me: oh phew...... *wipes brow*
Lightning: ok, we need power, NOW. *looks up at the ceiling* twilly, i needja to give me a boost. get me to the roof. *turns to her* room's gonna go dark for a bit, so watch the others.
DaemonTwilight: *nods, then grabs lightning and throws him to the roof, the light goes out* stay close you guys, i can hear him....... *snaps her head to wherever condemned is and growls*
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:58:12 AM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 4:00:32 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 4:07:41 AM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 4:44:51 AM

*suddendly, the lights come back on, and what seems like a bolt of electricity falls from the ceiling onto eclipse. It was actually a charged-up lightning dropping fist-first from the ceiling*
Lightning: *bounces off eclipse and lands on his feet* whoo!!! that was intense! *looks around and see twilight* TWILLY!!! *runs to her* twilight? *he puts his ear to her chest to listen for a heartbeat* still alive...... *stands up and glares angrily at eclipse* what. did. you. DO?
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 5:45:16 AM

Me: he knows his elements... he can't use dark energy on Lightning, or else Lightning will just absorb it, so he's using something else...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 16, 2008, 10:43:43 AM

Aria: This is worse than when I was bagged… can't see a blooming thing.
Me: *Sarcastically* No, I can't believe it.
Aria: *Rolls eyes and is very happy when the lights come back on* Be careful Lightning!! Clipsy's pulling a Benedict Arnold! Cept he's not doing this for more money or because of lack of recognition…
Me: We get the point. *A contemplative looks emerges on her face, she speaks to Eclipse* Thou art a traitor, and a miscreant; Too good to be so, and too bad to live. *Takes a step forward* Et tu, Brute?
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 12:24:50 PM

Twilight: *unconscious*
Mikenno: *has reverted to his hedgehog form, and is checking over twilight* she's uncoscious, but she'll wake up soon.
Me: ....this may not end well......
Acid: *clenches his fists and growls very quietly* grrrr.....
Everyone Else: *watches in freaked out silence*
TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 2:58:42 AM

Me: *is hit* ow. You suck Eclipse! YOU'VE BEEN FREAKING BLINDED BY INDERRETTA!!!!
Eclipse: he has not blinded me, but simply opened my eyes. I thank him, and shun you all as enemies.
Me: YOU ASSHOLE!!!!
Rosette: Eclipse... what on earth has that badger told you to make you act this way?
mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 7:05:00 AM

Lightning: *while dodging* ECLIPSE!!! WE'RE NOT YOUR ENEMIES!!! INDERETTA LIED TO YOU!!!
Mikenno: grr..... he wont listen.......
Acid: *clenches his fist tighter, and growls audibly*
Manny: umm... acid?
Acid: *snaps his head towards manny, and glarez*
manny: O.O .........
Acid: *looks back at eclipse and lightning near the middle. still trying to contain his anger, but is beginning to fail*
Scorch: heh. fire? no problem. *jumps out between Lightning and Eclipse* rrrrrrrAGH!!! *spins once and draws all the fire towards him and concentrates it all into a ball. then, he shoots the ball at eclipse*
TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 10:04:03 AM

Me: pfffff hahahahahahahah....
Eclipse: *shoots a nasty glare at me*
Me: hey, when you turn on us, we show.... um... Acid?
Eclipse: *looks at Acid, and notices him growling* angry? Is it because I killed Vera? Maybe I should end your misery... *charges up some dark energy*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 17, 2008, 10:39:25 AM

Aria: I'm burning your Shakespeare when we go home… honestly. *Looks at Eclipse* Least he has a sense of fashion now…
mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 11:41:48 AM

Me: whoa, whoa, WHOA!!! guys! outta the way!!!! *gets out of acid's way*
Everyone else: *gets the heck outta his way*
Acid: *snarls loudly, then slowly but surely starts making his way towards eclipse*
Lightning: oh hell no. *runs to twilly* twilight.... git up.... ya gotta get outta here....*
Daemontwilight: urrrg........ *comes to* whahappened?
Lightning: nothing yet, but somethings gonna happen soon. *tilts his head towards acid*
Daemontwilight: *eyes widen as she sees his rage* eclipse didn't... remind him about.......?
Lightning: unfortunately he did. comeon... move! we dont wanna be in his way.
Daemontwilight: *clambers to her feet and moves out of the way*
Acid: *is still advancing towards eclipse*
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 4:45:03 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 4:49:58 AM

Me: ...what??
Acid: DO IT!
Me: what are you gonna---
Acid: *hisses loudly* JUST DO IT!
Me: ehh...... *hesitantly goes to the main power switch and heaves it to the off position*
*all the lights go out, acid's laugh echoes off the walls......*
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:13:06 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:23:13 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:31:20 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:35:31 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:43:16 AM
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:25:57 AM

Lightning: *is still trying to comfort her...... but seems to be failing*
Mikenno: *punches the wall with both hands this time, but then falls to his knees as his hands slide down the wall* goddammit...... *a tear rolls down his face*
Me: oh god... i've never seen mikenno like that...... *slowly starts going towards him*
Neo: ......this really isnt a good day....................
Manny: O.O *is trying to grasp the fact that someone has died* did.... did that snake girl.......is she really......?
TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:29:01 AM
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:43:22 AM

Me: *over by mikenno* critic!! i need some help here......
Mikenno: *is grumbling angrily and incoherently at himself*
Daemontwilight: *still sobbing*
Lightning: come on, twilight, he's still alive!!
Daemontwilight: *shakes her head, says nothing*
Lightning: *sighs* rosette? i need some help.
TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:48:49 AM

Me: *to Manny* yes is does. *runs off again to Mikenno* Hey Mikenno... this isn't your fault... I don't think Vera could have been saved anyway... you know how Condemned is, he's unpredictable... no one could have seen this coming...
Rosette: Hey Twilly... I'm sorry for what has happened... but i know you didn't do this... you just weren't in control... that's all...
mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:02:33 AM

Lightning: *sighs* .....rosette? we need to show her that eclipse is still alive. so you think you could...... you know...... make him regain consciousness?
Mikenno: no....i could have done something........ i should have SEEN this coming.......... am i weakening.....?
Me: NO! mikkeno, you're not getting weaker. that was an on-the-spot decision, there's no way we could have known.
Manny: *finally realizes the severity of the situation* people.... DIED..........
Neo: *puts a hand on his shoulder* it's ok, manny. here, lets go find you a room....
Manny: NO! ....no. i wanna help.
Acid: ..........................................
TheGameArtCritic on August 10, 2008, 8:11:03 AM

Eclipse: *wakes up, but immedietelly winces in pain. There is a puddle of blood growing slowly beneath him* Ugh... Rosette... thank god...
Rosette: *notices something and gasps* Eclipse! Your eyes are a darker shade of blue!
Eclipse: they are? Nnnngh... *rubs them a bit*
Rosette: it's probabally from Condemned, but never mind that, you need to see Twilly...
Eclipse: *gets up real fast, and nearly falls down again, but regains balance* what's wrong?
Rosette: uh... just... come on... *supports him*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 10, 2008, 11:25:31 AM
mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:42:09 AM

Lightning: come on twilly........
Daemontwilight: *skakes her head and whimpers some more*
Lightning: gahh...... *stands up and walks around to her head, then kneels down in front of her* twilly........ *grabs one of her paws and lifts it off her head* twilly.......... look at me.......
Daemontwilight: *opens her eye slightly, but closes it immediately at the sight of lightning* hrrr.... *gently takes her paw out of lightning's grip, then puts it back over her head*
Lightning: ....this is impossible....... *sees eclipse* eclipse? eclipse!! *stands up*
Mikenno: *is attempting NOT to tear up, he looks at Fugue with one eye* ...................you're right. *is now
attempting to compose himself*
Me: there. thats more like it.
Acid: *is still kneeling by vera's body, crying quietly* ...........................................
Manny: *confused* abilities? OH! im a ninth-degree black belt ^^
TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 10:00:57 AM
mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 10:08:21 AM

Lightning: yeah, it's him.
Manny: *to critic* ajá!! ill show you later, if you like.
Acid: ............
Mikenno: *stands and brushes the dirt off his knees, then walks over to acid and stands next to him, putting a hand on his shoulder*
Acid: *glances up at mikenno for a split second, then looks back to vera* ..................................................is there any way to save her?
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 11, 2008, 10:50:31 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 1:52:17 PM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 1:47:47 AM

Daemontwilight: eclipse!! it IS you!! I DIDNT KILL YOU!!! YAAAY!!! *pounces on him, then immediately gets off* whoops. sorry, a little overexcited...... *grins a big wolfy grin, then lies down sphinx style with eclipse between her front paws* i am SO glad you're still alive. *wolfy nuzzle*
Lightning: ^^ shes back to normal ^^
Mikenno: *nods to fugue* yeah.
Acid: *sighs deeply* then i guess thats it, then. *starts to stand up, then stumbles backwards*
Me: whoa there. *catches acid beore he falls and helps him up* be careful.
Acid: .......thanks.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 13, 2008, 2:20:58 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 2:28:41 AM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 3:41:37 AM

Lightning: she's right. we can only blame condemned and inderetta for that.
Acid: ..............so can we bring her back?
Mikenno: *closes his eyes and is deep in thought*
Manny: we can... bring her back?
Neo: they did it with lightning.
Manny: O.O lightning died???
Lightning: yeah. *moves his chest fur around to reveal a long scar* condemned stabbed me with his claws. *smooths his fur out again*
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:11:31 AM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 4:22:46 AM

Lightning: *nods in agreement*
Mikenno: *still deep in thought*
Manny: *waves hand in front of mikenno's face* hello? whassup wit 'im?
Neo: he's looking into the future, manny. dont touch him.
Manny: oh. coooool..........
Mikenno: *eyes suddendly open* i....... i couldnt see anything.
Everyone: WHAT???!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:29:45 AM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 5:11:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 5:28:36 AM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 8:41:39 AM

Mikenno: *eyes widen* she did. *goes demon and is immediately in pursuit of inderetta* GET BACK HERE!!!!
Twilight: mikenno only gives chase if he knows we have a chance. *goes daemon also* come on!!! *runs after them*
Lightning: oh well. time for instinct. *takes his gloves off, and his here glow* here GOES!! *gets down on all fours and is immediately running faster than his normal speed*
Me: everyone who cant run as fast follow me!! *runs back into base*
Manny: wait up!!
Me: *stops* manny, you stay here. we need you to watch the base, okay?
Manny: okay.....
Acid: *picks up vera's body and carries it inside, then lays her down near a wall* i'm coming. *dark glint in his eye* i'm gonna get a piece of that inderetta if it's the last thing i do.
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 9:17:12 AM
mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 12:48:16 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 13, 2008, 4:30:18 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:47:26 AM

Aria: *Stops* What's the paradox???
Me: Who cares!!??!!! KEEP SINGING!!!!!
Aria: *Shrugs, then joins back in*
Together: A paradox,
A most ingenious paradox!
We’ve quips and quibbles heard in flocks,
But none to beat this paradox!
A paradox, a paradox,
A most ingenious paradox.
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha,
This paradox.
Me: *Looks at the staring of nameless other hybrids* Maybe we should stop…
Aria: Yeah…
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 6:39:23 AM
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 7:48:31 AM

Twilight: too right, manny.
Neo: who do you think is responsible??
Lightning: *through gritted teeth* inderetta.
Mikenno: i believe that is the case....
Me: O.O oh no. *panics and her voice cracks* WE GOTTA GET ECLIPSE OUTTA HERE!! NOW!!!
Acid: O.O oh no, he wouldnt.
Vera: O.O he would. *binds eclipse with her tail and starts dragging him out*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 9:42:12 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 9:56:49 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 10:00:59 AM

Me: *Eyebrow tick. The anger from earlier resurfaces. The next words are bellowed* GET ROSETTE TO THE DOCTOR RIGHT NOW SO WE CAN FIND OUT WHAT D^&* POISON SHE WAS POSIONED WITH. AND CONDEMNED LEAVE NOW BEFORE I'M FORCED TO DO SOMETHING I WOULD RATHER NOT!!!
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 12:42:56 PM

Acid: i'll help ya. *grapples with eclipse to help drag him out*
Twilight: i dont think a doctor will help..... knowing inderetta, there's no helping her now.......
Mikenno: ....damn it!! *gets really angry*
Lightning: he hates feeling useless.......
Manny: GIT OFF!!! *takes critic's hands off his eyes, then sees condemned* O.O oh lord. *puts her hands back*
Me: WAIT!! *thinks* critic, dont we need condemned????
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:28:58 PM
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 1:33:29 PM

Acid: *winces in pain, but continues to grapple with him* grrr.... what do you need us to do with him????
Manny: *is shaking in fear from the sounds around him* ohhhhhhh..... god..........................
*other nameless hybrids are noticing the commotion and are backing up*
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:52:20 PM
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 2:02:20 PM

Vera: *hisses in pain also, but smiles at acid's remark* heheh. *becomes serious again and tightens her grip on condemned*
Twilight: crap. well, here i come. *goes full daemon and starts pushing at condemned with her head* comeon, you big lump, MOVE!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:07:40 PM
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 2:11:55 PM

Lightning: i gotta go too! *starts to leave*
Me: NO! *grabs his arm before he can leave*
Lightning: *surprised* what are you doing?? *anger starts building, his stripes start glowing* let. me. go.
Me: no. twilight wont bear it if she loses you again.
Lightning: 8realizes, the his stripes fade back to normal*
Manny: *whimpering in fear i-is it gone?
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:15:27 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 2:28:49 PM

Me: *Grumps, but gives a nod of acquiescence. Watches silently as Aria runs outside, before turning to look at Manny. Running a hand through my hair, I sigh* We should get Rosette to a Doc. Quick, before it really is too late. *Glances down at Manny* And we should get him settled too… *Another sigh* I'm going to have gray hairs before I hit twenty…
TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 1:25:17 AM
mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 4:45:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 7:09:44 AM

Condemned: *roars from being bitten by Vera* I'LL KILL YOU!!! *smashes her head to the ground*
Me: NO!!!!
Condemned: I hate mobians... i hate mobians so much... they're all too happy... who really gives a damn if i kill one...
Me: ACID WILL CARE!!! THE WHOLE HYBRID NATION WILL CARE!!! I WILL CARE!!! DON'T YOU DARE KILL VERA, OR I SWEAR TO GOD, CONDEMNED -
Condemned: you'll do what? You can't kill me...
Me: grrrrrr.....
mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 7:22:34 AM

Acid: *looks at vera, eyes wide and mouth agape* vera.... no..... *he runs to her* vera? vera!! NO!!!! you cant be dead... no..... you cant...... *closes his eyes and sobs over her*
TwilightDaemon: *is fighting, but glances over at acid, and stops, her eyes going wide* no..........*howling* NOOO!!!!
*inside*
Lightning: *head snaps towards the door* twilight? whats goin' on??
Mikenno: *is completely snapped out of his grumblings at himself and looks towards the door, his eyes going wide* oh no.
Neo: ....from the look on mikki's face, something bad just happened.
TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 7:27:09 AM
mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 7:37:12 AM

Daemontwilight: *a tear in her eye* you......... *suddendly enraged, in her triple voice* YOU'LL PAY!!! *pounces on condemned, ripping at him with her claws*
Lightning: *goes over to acid and kneels down, putting a hand on his shoulder* im so sorry acid......
Acid: she was... the only one who understood me..... the only one who wasnt afraid......... and now.... *trails off and keeps sobbing*
*inside*
Mikenno: DAMMIT!! god... oh god... *punches a wall. denting it* IM SO USELESS!!!
Manny: .....someone just died... didnt they.......?
Neo: O.O oh no.... but who.....?
Mikenno: *in clear view of all the other hybrids in the base, he goes into his full demon form* NOOOOO!!!! *he crashes through the door* CONDEMNED!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 8:53:13 AM

Condemned: n...nnnghrrghaaarrrrAAAAAAAAGH!!! *turns back into Eclipse, who is now seriously wounded* *immedietly falls over and blacks out*
Me: last time this happened, Eclipse didn't wake up until three days later...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 8, 2008, 11:14:00 AM
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 5:39:20 AM

DaemonTwilight: *realizes what she has done and immediately gits off* oh god, what the hell did i DO???? *tear*
Lightning: *runs over to her and leans against her side comfortingly* you just got angry twilight, its ok...
Daemontwilight: *crying now* NO!! IT'S NOT OK!! I COULD HAVE KILLED HIM!! HE COULD HAVE DIED!!! BECAUSE OF ME!!! *collapses on the ground from sheer guilt, she begins to sob, still in her daemon form* god... oh god....
Lightning: *drops to his knees next to her, and leans against her side, rubbing her shoulder* it's all right, twilly... it's all right.....
Acid: *manages to control his sobbing* ...........i miss her already.
Mikenno: *returns to normal, still wide-eyed* i..... *looks down, ashamed* i was too late to save them....... *punches the wall, leaving a large dent and drawing blood from his knuckles* DAMMIT!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:13:43 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 10:50:07 AM

Aria: *Ignoring Me for the moment* Go Sonic!!! Go Shadow!!! Put that demon in his place!! *Looks back at Critic* Where do you think that coward Inderretta went??
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 11:02:07 AM

Sonic: *is now super omg thisclose to Shadow*
Shadow: *his face is twisted with pain, and fear. The demon is making him FEAR Sonic's aura... it's not Shadow* S-ssstop.... p-please.... t-this pain... it's l-like my muscles are trying to rip out of my skin... please... no more... no more!!
Sonic: *sadly shakes his head, and touches Shadow on the Demon Claw arm*
Shadow: *his arm burns, making a loud hissing sound* OH GOD!!! OH GOD!!!!! AAAAAUUGH!!! STOP IT!!!! GET AWAY!!!
Sonic: 'fraid I can't do that, buddy.
Shadow: AAAAUUUUGH!!!!!!!! *a blue liquid slithers out of Shadow's shadow (lol), and hisses at everyone*
Sonic: *picks up the liquid. It has the consistancy of silly puddy*
The Liquid (or rather, the puddy-like goop): *catches fire, and burns away, releasing a foul smelling gas, and turning into black dust*
Sonic: aww... gross! It's like Mephiles cut the cheese or something! *blows the dust away*
Shadow: *is now shivering and wide-eyed. He stares at the ground, and is twitching a little in the eye* t-t-t-the pain... it's g-g-g-gone.... *falls over, unconcious*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 11:05:50 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 11:08:39 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 11:40:48 AM
mechadragon13 on July 25, 2008, 12:35:52 PM

Lightning: owww...... *is holding his face, which has lng cuts on it* man that really smarts............
Twilight: at least you're not dead...... *hugs*
Mikenno: *closes his eyes in deep thought*
Vera: *shivers* this place does give me chills.....
can we leave?
Neo: i agree. we should leave this dreadful place.
Acid: *is standing over by shadow* hey man... you're ok. ya remember me shad?
Me: somehow... i have a feeling this isnt over.......
TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2008, 6:31:10 AM
mechadragon13 on July 30, 2008, 10:43:47 AM

Me: OHMAHGAWSH it's good to be ooooout!! *stretches*
Vera: too right, too right.
Twilight: *sighs loudly* i never thought i'd miss being outside this much........
Lightning: same here. oww...... inderetta hits hard... *still has claw marks*
Neo: yeowch. that looks like it kills.
Mikenno: *points to where the plane is supposed to be.* look.
TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2008, 6:20:39 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 31, 2008, 8:19:34 AM
mechadragon13 on August 1, 2008, 12:05:52 AM

Lightning: ..... never thought you'd have to use that button......
Twilly: yeah me neither.
Neo: *starts humming that one song they play when someone dies*
Acid: does that meana you have to re-build it?
Me: naw.... i have another one......
Vera: thats still sucks though.
Mikenno: we still have to get back.
Neo: i got it. get ready for a warp! *holds hand out*
*everyone puts their hand on his*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 1, 2008, 8:49:45 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 1, 2008, 11:28:25 PM
mechadragon13 on August 4, 2008, 5:06:38 AM

Lightning: you guys are welcome to stay here tonight if you like--- whoa, hey!
*a black and white hybrid runs into Lightning*
???: *desperately* por favor!! ayudame mano, a los policias no les gustan los satos.. escondeme, mano, escondeme!!
Twilight: i dont understand what he's saying!!!
Me: wait, its spanish!!! *to the scared hybrid* que te pasa??
???: los policias me'stan persiguiendo mana! no quiero ir a la carcel, soy much chico!!!
Me: racist cops are after him, he wants us to hide him!
Mikenno: i have this under control. *changes his outline so he looks almost exactly like the scared hybrid, except his clothes are black-and-white and his eyes are red-brown* *in the other hybrid's voice* you take him to base, i'll be right back. *runs off to distract the cops* estoy aqui!! *runs*
Acid: come on lets go! *all run off to base*
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 6:28:37 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 4, 2008, 10:11:05 AM

Aria: *Nods, and starts running, scooping Fugue up. Fugue squawks in protest* I know you… you won't run you lazy bum…
Me: * Sighs and glances over at Neo* It's all right… the shop'll be fine without us for a bit…
mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 1:47:55 AM

Acid: phew. well, we missed them.
Mikenno: *walks in* im back. fooling those cops was much too easy.
Me: lol. *to the unknown hybrid* hmmm.... quien eres? 'perate. primero..... hablas ingles?
???: ingles? english? si!! uhh.. i mean.. yes. yeah! sorry.... i go to spanish when i get scared ^^;
Lightning: no problem, kid ^^
Twilight: so... whoa and what are you?
???: oh! my name's manuel. but you can call me manny, manny the badgewolf!
everyone else: *silence*
Manny: .... what?
TheGameArtCritic on August 5, 2008, 6:18:00 AM
mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 8:55:03 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 5, 2008, 9:16:47 AM

Me: Your deplorable grammar strikes once more. It's doesn't he… for future reference. And once should not judge a flock by a single bird… *Walks over to stand before Manny. She places a hand under his chin and forces him to look her dead in the eyes* The eyes are the windows to the soul, they say… *Pause* Hmmm…
Aria: Is that Fugue-ese for saying you approve??
Me: *Slightly disgruntled* It is Fugue-ese for saying I am going to watch and wait…
Aria: She approves!!
Me: *Steps away from Manny* Oh Shut up.
Me: *Sigh*
mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 10:56:09 AM

Me: fugue being herself, manny...... you're ok ^^
Lightning: yeah. just coz inderetta's the spawn of the devil doesnt mean all badgers are......
Manny: 'sperate. inderetta? hmm.....
Twilight: you know him??
Manny: hold up, ya gotta let me think.....
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:09:29 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:17:24 AM

Me: quite a rap, our little Mr. Mustard has...
Eclipse: I TOLD YOU NOT TO CALL HIM THAT!
Me: but it's SOOOO cute!
Eclipse: no.
mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:24:34 AM

Me: *wide eyes* oh no.... im so sorry..... *puts a hand on his shoulder*
Manny: it's ok........
Lightning: ....... would you like to join hybrid nation, manny?
Manny: *surprised, his voice goes up an octave* que?!
(note: i dunno if i said this before, so if i didnt, manny is 9))
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:34:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:37:02 AM
mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:43:19 AM
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:24:39 AM

Lightning: *looking out the window* TWILIGHT!!!! *freaks out* OHMYGAWSH!!!! we gotta catch her!!
Shidako: no need. she's freefalling.
Neo: freefalling?
Mikenno: it's actually very exhilarating. but also dangerous.
Acid: *looking ou tthe window* it looks fun ^^
Vera: dont go jumping out of planes, acid ^^
Me: ooh i LIKE dangerous!! i'm gonna do it too!!! *goes up, the dives at this weird angle that gives eyerybody a minute or two of ZERO GRAVITY!!!!!*
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 2:26:58 AM
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:36:46 AM

Me: ok!! landing time!! *pulls up the nose in time not to crash and land correctly* here we are!! *opens the cockpit*
Lightning: *jumps out* TWILLY!!!!!!! *runs to her* are you ok???
Twilight: yeah im fine ^^ WHOOHOO!!!!! XDD
Shidako: *leaps out of the plane final-fantasy style and turns into a silver-and-aqua blue dragon in midair. she lands gracefully* finally.
Mikenno: *jumps out* we have to get in there.
Neo: *nods* lets go. *all begin to approach the door*
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 2:42:55 AM

Eclipse: *pushes the doors open without flinching*
Me: *looks around* oh... my... god...
*inside, bodies litter the floor, and against the walls. All are terribly bloody, and only a few are still alive, and in terrible pain. Puddles of blue liquid also stain the floor, mixing a bit with the red of the blood*
Eclipse: this... this is horrific!
Me: yeah... sheesh... I guess Shadow has had NO practice before with these creatures... he's never had to face a battle within himself...
Eclipse: *is trembling* Inderretta's going to pay...
Me: hey man, those dark thoughts of yours is what got you wound up with Condemned in the first place!
Eclipse: but now that Condemned is gone, i don't have to hold my anger back...
Me: shoot. That's a good point.
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:48:36 AM

Lightning: *equally terrified* O.O ditto......
Neo: well, we cant just stand here. mikenno?
Mikenno: *already had his eyes closed, he opens them again* *points down a hallway* shadow ran that way. *points down some other hallway* inderetta hid that way. who goes where?
Shidako: critic?
Me: any plans?
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:00:25 AM

Eclipse: the invention room!
Me: *sweetly* what the f@#k are you talking about?
Eclipse: all mechanic-based companies have one! Also, it's pretty large!
Me: large?
Eclipse: the largest.
Me: WE HEAD THERE!
*as the group heads for the room, a monster's howls and roars echoe all over the building in a creepy manner.
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 3:15:39 AM

Lightning: *smiles at her* you're ok twilly.... you're ok.
Shidako: *has become a relatively smaller oriental dragon that can fit through thte hallways* *sniffsniff* i'm smellin' something....
Mikenno: i sense somthing as well.........
Neo: sheesh. this place gives me the creeps.
Acid: no kiddin'? this place is freaky!
Vera: ....... O.O
Me: ....... critic? are we any closer?
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:20:04 AM
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 3:25:59 AM

Lightning: git that door open! *charges up*
Neo: *mentally rips off a piece of the metal wall and forms it into a large solid rod* ready.
Mikenno: *nods*
Acid: *takes out his emerald* bring it!!
Vera: *shakes her rattle violently and hisses* open that door*
Shidako: *becomes a big bad crimson dragon with black-looking eyes* rrrrrrgh...............
Me: *takes out a wrench* wherever you're ready, critic!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:32:34 AM

Inside: *A rather grotesque form of Shadow is leering over Mr. Inderretta, who is bloodied and bruised. One of his arms is is the demakarr (the type of demon) form. He is on the ground*
Demon Shadow: NNNRRRRAAAARRRGH!!!!!! *his claws are drenched in blood, and, shockingly, so are his teeth*
Eclipse: *wide-eyed* DAD!!!
Demon Shadow: *turns his head toward the group, and snarls, spraying spit and foam everywhere*
Mr. Inderretta: oh thank GOD you're all here! Now he can kill YOU instead of me! *runs off to a safe spot*
Me: COWARD!
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:36:25 AM

Lightning: *to twilight* that might not work......
Neo: but then again, it was only a small piece of condemned that got put in.
Mikenno: *takes some steps back* i... suggest you put your guard back up......
Shidako: *growls* mikenno's right. this will not be an easy fight.......
Acid: *gets out of his fighting stance* brother... plaese, listen to us!! this isnt you. not at all. you should have more control over yourself!!
Vera: *thinking* please please work.......
Me: eeeek..... he doesnt look very happy......
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 7:46:14 AM

Eclipse: no... it's no use... Condemned is powerful stuff, even if it WAS a little bit... I just hope he can hear us...
Mr. Inderretta: what are you doing?! KILL THEM!!!
Demon Shadow: *snaps out of it, and slashes at the group*
Me: *is hit* HOW MANY TIMES MUST I SAY I CAN'T DIE?????
Eclipse: *is also hit* agh! IT'S OK! ow... I KNOW YOU DIDN'T WANT TO DO THAT! god...
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:58:38 AM

Lightning: *dodges slash* come on shad, fight it!!!!
Neo: *ducks* how do we got condemned out of him!?
Vera: *slides under the blow* ha!
Shidako: *gets hit, but blow doesnt inflict that much damage* RAWR!! *goes for inderetta*
Acid: *gets hit and flies a small distance* rrrgh..... *stands* come on shadow!!!! listen to us!! you may be possessed by a demon, but i know you're still in there somewhere!!! come on shad, fight it!!
Me: i think what acid's doing is working.....
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 8:09:51 AM

Demon Shadow: *doubles over again, clawing at his head to try to think clearly*
Mr. Inderretta: no! NO!!!
Eclipse: You can't let him win, Dad! You can't! Everyone looks up to you! I look up to you! Your giving a damn horrible impression to everyone now! I THOUGHT YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE THE ULTIMATE LIFEFORM!!!
Demon Shadow: *shrinks a bit, and turns into reg. Shadow, who is actually trembling, and has tears in his eyes* I- This - this has n-never happened b-before... how d-do i control it??? HOW??? *is curled up into a tight ball, and whimpering*
Eclipse: he's in shock. Since Condemned isn't FULLY inside him, he can remember what he did... he must be in shock from he lack of control...
Me: oy Shads! Make sure yeh don't turn into a foamy monster again - you're much hawter as you are now!
Eclipse: *shoots a dark glare at me*
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 8:20:22 AM

Shidako: F YOU!! *fireball at indy*
Neo: *launches the metal rod at indy* rrrrraaaagh!!!!
Acid: *runs over to shad* shadow!! *kneels down next to him and puts a hand on his shoulder* it's ok shad......
Vera: *goes and kneels next to acid*
DaemonTwilight: *sits all wolfy-like by shadow and the others*
Lightning: *stands next to Daemontwilight with one hand on her side*
Mikenno: *a very small smile*
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 8:28:49 AM

Eclipse: *sits next to his father* sshh... It's fine... just... just calm down, and think happy thoughts... that's how i got through it - now it's your turn...
Shadow: *tries* *can't* aaagh.... my head is KILLING me...
Eclipse: YOU NEED TO TRY AND STOP THE HEADACHE OR SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN.
Shadow: don't pressure me! *moans* agh... *manages to smirk* what the hell, Devon..?
Mr. Inderretta: I DIDN'T KNOW YOU'D TRY AND KILL ME!!
Shadow: I hate you. I think Condemned hates you. What makes you think we wouldn't try and kill you...? AAAAGH!!! *his face is in a pain-filled expression* *he twitches as tenticals start crawling up his body once more* GOD!! OH GOD MAKE IT STOP!!!! *clutches his head as if it was going to explode*
Me: shoot! HE'S TRANSFORMING AGAIN!
Eclipse: everyone back away! Once Condemned starts, he won't stop!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 23, 2008, 10:04:04 AM

Aria: *Backs up a foot, at the ready. She is holding back the nauseous feeling caused by the excess blood, but barely. There is a look of tightly contained rage on her face. Her words come out cold, precise, unlike Aria's usual attitude at all. They are as cold as a blizzard as sharp as the sharpest sword* What do you have to say for yourself Inderretta??
Me: *A look of disgust is spread across my face, combined with a haughty look. It may not look like it, but I'm tense, almost at my breaking point. The murders offend me, and Inderretta even more. The glare I'm giving Inderretta is one that is similar to one who is gazing upon the worst scum of the earth.* Are you afraid now, Mr. Devon Inderretta?? Is fear nipping at you, as a wolf nips at a deer?? You should be afraid, Mr. Devon Inderretta. If Condemned doesn't kill you… we just might. *Creepy smile* I hate presumptuous men… men who proceed to think just because they can, that they should… those that play God are burned… burned in righteous fire. Do you understand? *Spreads arms apart* Is your soul clean, Mr. Devon Inderretta. *Pauses, and turns her attention to Shadow, and thus Condemned* Fear… Fear is something, we all have… no matter how we deny it… What is your fear? *Tilts head, ears flattening against the top of my skull* Or is fear your fear? Is hate your shield??? *Laughs* It matters not… leave us Condemned. You have no place here…
((Can we guess who had a bad day?? My post seems to come off as a little psychotic… and out of character. They aren't out of character… They're really mad…))
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 11:02:25 AM

*everyone backs up*
Me: WELL?? what do you have to say for yourself, Inderetta??
Neo: *looking down* all you seem to enjoy doing is to ruin the lives of others. of other people who could have lived a normal, happy life. *looks up angriy and clenches fists* you just go and ruin it!!
Shidako: *solemnly* I have never seen such evil come from a person who could still have their heart. Not even the Nobodies and the Heartless have done something so cruel. *angry expression returns and she goes from the red dragon form into an extremely fierce-looking metallic black dragon with furious crimson eyes and demon-like wings. she grins, showing rows upon rows of huge, razor-sharp teeth* prepare to face your worst nightmare, badger.
Lightning: *his eyes are so full of anger you aren't sure it's him anymore* you will pay for all you have done, inderetta. expect no mercy from us.
Vera: *angrily* i have nothing to say to that monster.
Acid: i finally find my brother...... *shakes his head* and you............. *angry glare, but his voice breaks* you just had to ruin it didn't you??? *sorrowful* i always imagined this to be a happy moment. but NO. *gets into a fighting stance and takes out his acid green chaos emerald* you will be punished, inderetta. get ready!!
Mikenno: *closes his eyes* i'm ashamed to call you my bretheren. *he opens his eyes, but instead of being their usual dark brown, they are glowing blood red* you will pay for all the grief you have caused that family and their friends. prepare to meet your death, Inderetta. RRRRRAAAAAAAAAWRGH!!!! *turns from his hedgehog-like form into his true form: it still basically looks like him, but his quills are now enormous curved horns with the black design still on it, his hands and feet have huge claws, his tail is long and spiked at the end, and his mouth is much like condemned's, only it has a whole lot more, but smaller teeth. he also has big, feathered white and black wings.* *in a creepy growly voice* good bye.... Inderetta.
TheGameArtCritic on July 24, 2008, 4:27:54 AM

Eclipse: YOU'RE WRONG! YOU DEVIL! YOU SPAWN OF SATAN! YOU'RE WRONG!
Mr. Inderretta: am i, now? *cocks an eyebrow* *turns himself to Shadow, and jumps down to him*
Shadow: *gritting his teeth* lllleaaave mmmee allllonnnee....
Mr. Inderretta: *petting Shadow like a dog* oh my... you still have some emotions to release... may i help you, Shadow?..
Shadow: get out of here... please...
Mr. Inderretta: HAHAHAHA!! *bends down, and whispers in Shadow's ear* do you remember Maria...?
Shadow: *gasps*
Mr. Inderretta: I found her body, you know... the poor thing... she was only a skeleton with a blue dress... but i heard of her... I know what happened on the ARK...
Shadow: don't say any more... please... *more tears run down his face*
Mr. Inderretta: you really seemed to care about her, Shadow... hmm... a shame i BURNED THE BODY AND THREW OUT THE ASHES! *cackles in an insane manner, and leaps out of the way*
Shadow: *his eyes widen, then, with rage, turn glowing pure red once more. He shouts out in anger and pain as the tenticals on his body cover it's new host, and once more turns him into a monster. He goe insane, smashing up everything in sight*
Me: *voice gets low and dangerous* Inderretta... you just went too far...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 24, 2008, 4:53:22 AM

Aria: We ain't angels, we know that!! We learn from our mistakes!! But you never seem to learn from your wrong-doings… you just keep repeating it!!! You heartless ba&*^%d is there anything you care about besides power or money?? You twist and twist and twist and when the twisted breaks, you run… you're no more than a coward!! Always running from what you do!! You don't embrace anything!! You run… like a mouse!! You're a mouse Inderretta, you're no badger!! A simpering coward!! You disgrace all with your actions!! Go back to your mother, for she's the only one who loves you, if that love still exists, which I doubt. I hope the Devil has mercy for you, for we shall NOT!!!
Me: I never called myself a peacemaker. Those words never crossed my lips. You have a problem of the masses Mr. Devon Inderretta… you hear, but do not listen, you look, but you do not see… and you've made a mistake. Tell me Mr. Devon Inderretta… Have you ever heard of a creature known as a kitsune? *Starts stalking towards him, a dark glint in her eye*
TheGameArtCritic on July 24, 2008, 10:40:50 AM

Me: intimidated? Is that it??
Mr. Inderretta: *growls at me*
Demon Shadow: NNNNNRRRAAAAARRRRGH!!!!! *foam goes flying everywhere*
Eclipse: *scowling at Inderretta* you b@$&%@#... you f$%#&*% b@$&%@#!!!
Mr. Inderretta: *amused* do you want to kill me?
Eclipse: YOU HAVE RUINED MY LIFE, STARTING WHEN I COULDN'T EVEN TALK! YOU NOW DARE RUIN MY FATHER AS WELL??? HOW DARE YOU MENTION ONE OF HIS MANY GRIEFS! HOW DARE YOU!!! *growls at him loudly, his eyes are full of hate. If he still had Condemned, he would be rampaging by now*
Mr. Inderretta: *shrugs it off* oh well. *turns to Shadow* Hey there, old friend...
Shadow: *turns to Inderretta and snarls madly at him*
Mr. Inderretta: hmm... maybe i shouldn't remind him that it was i who killed Rouge... ah. But he probally already knows... hmmm to make him stop targeting me, though... *darts up to Shadow faster than the naked eye could ever follow, and rips Project Nocturnal out of his pocket. He then places it on Demon Shadow's chest. It's robotic tenticals dig into Shadow's skin, making him howl, but soon, he stopped, and lowered his head like a puppet waiting for it's strings to be pulled*
Mr. Inderretta: *in a cold, heartless tone* kill them.
Demon Shadow: *growls low at the group*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 24, 2008, 1:30:11 PM

Aria: *Sniffs in disdain* Denial seems to be the only thing you do well… that and running like a mouse. *Looks absently at Demon Shadow, then back to Inderretta* It will have blood, they say; Blood will have blood…
Fugue: *Calmly starts to take steps forward, towards Inderretta* To earn a kitsune's wrath is to earn a life of torment neverending… a kitsune is both kind and cruel, giving with one hand and taking with the other… Do you wish to be hounded forever more?? For I can promise one thing if you continue to traverse this path…*Walks forward, in spite of the Condemned Possessed Shadow* I will not rest, until your bones are bleach white in the summer sun, your flesh consumed by the Carrion, and your soul long devoured by Satan. I abhor you Mr. Devon Inderretta… for you are more of a demon than I am, you who murdered Rouge, you who damned Eclipsed, you who damned Shadow… My hands are not pristine, but yours drip with blood, as a faucet turned on fully. *Slaps Inderretta across the face* Try to make us doubt ourselves Mr. Devon Inderretta, I care not. Your words are futile here. I fear neither death, nor dying. *Glances at Shadow* Would you make us another stain?? Another memory of death? *Stands silently, back straight, hands shoved in the pockets of her vest*
mechadragon13 on July 25, 2008, 7:06:56 AM

DaemonTwilight: *in the demon's double voice* We have never taken lives, devon. we may be demons, but we are not monsters.
Shidako: i have faced death, and come back to tell the tale. but those YOU kill aren't that fortunate. you find the cruelest ways to torture people, ruin their lives, until they can't take it anymore. and you say we are alike. pah! *dragon-spit*
Neo: I come from the future. i have seen the horrors of wars and death tme and time again. but you... you are many times worse than all the wars from now to fifty years from now combined! at least they fight for a reason! but you. you kill only to please yourself.
Acid: *shakes his head* i..... *glares angrily* i have never killed anyone directly, Inderetta. but when i did, i had the most horrible feeling of guilt. did you even feel guilt, devon? well?? oh and, guess what? that death i caused, lightning's death, was because of YOU!
Vera: i agree with acid completely. we may be criminals, but we are NOT senseless killers.
Me: indy, indy, indy......... F*** YOU!
Lightning: inderetta........ *walks right up to him, ignoring shadow completely* will this ever end? i'm sick and tired of all this fighting. will you ever stop? *angrily* will you ever stop killing?? *slaps him across the face* well??? will you???? you have a choice, inderetta. you cna either take it, or face the consequences. *crosses his arms and stands his ground. *the others glare threateningly*
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 7:26:12 AM

Eclipse: Lightning!
Demon Shadow: *pounces at Eclipse*
Eclipse: *quickly gets away*
Demon Shadow: *uses a tentical to trap Eclipse. He slowly walks over and hisses loudly at him*
Eclipse: *his eys goes wide with fear, and a dose of sadness*
Demon Shadow: *raises his clawed hand like he's going to strike at Eclipse*
Eclipse: *tightly closes his eyes, waiting for the blow*
*and then the blow never comes*
Me: look!
Eclipse: *opens one of his eyes*
Demon Shadow: *his clawed hand is being held back by his slightly more Shadow-like hand. Demon Shadow growls in frustrasion as he struggles to try and slash at Eclipse. Unfortunatly for him, Shadow just won't strike at his own son deep inside himself*
Mr. Inderretta: ah... Shadow still suffers from being held back by love. COME ON! KILL HIM ALREADY! ONCE ECLIPSE IS GONE, YOU WON'T HAVE TO LOOK AFTER HIM! YOU'LL BE FREE!!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 8:36:48 AM

Me: *I withdraw my hands from my pockets. Held in one of my hands is a homemade bomb.* Mr. Devon Inderretta. I have two words for you… SHUT UP!!!!! *The last phrase is bellowed, as I tackle Inderretta, trying to drag the Badger away from rest. During the movement, the bomb is lit* Are you ready to depart, Mr. Devon Inderretta?? For I am…
Aria: *Rolls eyes, then mutters to herself* So dramatic… *Soars above the possessed Shadow* Fight it!! Fight it with all your heart, with all your love!! Don't let it take control!! Shadow!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 9:01:26 AM

Eclipse: *uses the opportunity to punch Shadow right in the face, and hard (wow. Workouts help)*
Demon Shadow: *falls on the ground, unconcious*
Eclipse: *runs to Fugue* STOP!!!
Mr. Inderretta: WHY STOP??!!
Eclipse: shut it, scumbag! STOP, FUGUE!!! DON'T KILL HIM!! DON'T LOSE YOUR INNOCENCE!!
Me: woah woah woah WOAH. WTF? Let's kill the Plot Point!!!
Eclipse: No! I know you hate this guy! I hate him more then i need air! But no... YOU CAN'T LET YOUR ANGER CONTROL YOU!!!
Demon Shadow: *half conscious* Eclipse's.... promise... to Sonic... *turns slightly more normal, but his eys are still pure red, and he still has fangs instead of teeth*
Mr. Inderretta: blow me up.
Eclipse: DEFUSE THE BOMB!!!!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 9:25:52 AM

Aria: Dumb %^&. *Swoops down and nabs the bomb with her talons, throwing it away, just in time for it to explode against a wall. There is now a gigantic hole in the wall where the bomb hit, and debris falls…* Don't make me scream at you, ya stupid fox demon…
Me: Why??*Is hissed out, from between clenched teeth. I'm starting to try to prevent Inderretta from escaping*
Aria: Make 'em rot in jail… torture him while he's alive, till he dies of old age. Make the rest of his days living nightmares. Take your anger out on him for the rest of your life… deprive him of all… if anything… he cherishes… I'll take my revenge too… someday… *Slight smirk* Some time…
Me: *Short terse laugh* I'm 'sposed to be smarter than you.
Aria: Ya are… your anger clouds ya brains sometimes. *Flys back and neatly touches down. She slowly walks up to Inderretta* Hey Clipsy?? Can we break his hands at least?? *Eyes Inderretta in a predatory manner, so unlike a mockingbird. Fugue's had some bad effects on the bird…*
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 9:48:02 AM

Mr. Inderretta: gaahhh... my plans.... they are ruined.... RUINED!!!! *turns full demakarr* *looks at Fugue* huh. You, girl... you have a LOT of anger to take out on something don't you...? *Evil grin* we may have something in common... *Flies out of the hole in the wall and escapes*
Shadow: *gets up, but winces as the pounding headache that has developed because of Condemned* *he drops down to his knees once more*
Me: awww... I wonder how we'll get Condemned out?
Eclipse: well.... it's not a lot... maybe Sonic can come in? His aura is pure, and he's fast... *goes on a cell phone, and tells Sonic to get his @$$ over here*
Sonic: *immedietly runs in* hiya! What's up? Why was the hallway all.... bloody... *looks at Shadow, and just stares*
Shadow: *his arm is a claw, and his eyes are pure red. He has fangs* nnn.... stop staring, you stupid faker...
Me: ok... uh... Sonic? You may want to step closer to him...
Sonic: why?
Me: JUST DO IT!!
Sonic: ok! Geez! *steps closer to Shadow*
Shadow: *an animalistic scream leaps out of Shadow's mouth as he once again clutches his head, and shivers all over*
Sonic: *a white aura is around him, and is now visible. He takes another step*
Shadow: *double-voiced, and hissing like a snake* AAAAAAGH!! SSSSSTOP!! SSSSTOP!!!
Sonic: *another step*
Shadow: *goes down fully on his hands and knees now, pain screams at every muscle he dares to move* GHRAAAAAAAUUUUGH!!!!! *his eyes turn back to normal. They are terrified*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 9:55:59 AM

Me: He's right though… I do have a lot of anger… *Looks Pensively at the hole Inderretta disappeared through…*
Aria: That's what the psychologist is for… *Scowls when she sees her words don't penetrate her friend's thoughts* Heeeeeelloooooo…
Me: *Waves her off, turning her attention to the arrival of Sonic and mutely watches the events*
Aria: *Respectively* It's like an exorcism… How's Sonic doing that??
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 10:38:24 AM

Sonic: *steps closer*
Shadow: AAAUGH!!! AAAAAGGH!!!! *writhes in pain on the ground, still clutching his head. His teeth return to normal, but he still has tenticals on his body, and arms*
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 7:00:20 AM

Demon Shadow: *he advances on Eclipse, his claw ready to lunge at Eclipse's throat. His free hand was balled into a fist. He snarls, and hits Eclipse across the face*
Eclipse: aaagh! *touches where he has been hit, and looks at his father in shock, and fear*
Demon Shadow: GRRRAAAAAARRGH!!!
Eclipse: *closes his eyes, and tries to calm himself. He then opens them once more to roll under Shadow, and punch him from underneath. He then rolls out, and gets into a fighting stace*
Demon Shadow: RRRAAAWWWGH! *is barely affected*
mechadragon13 on July 18, 2008, 7:36:36 AM

Lightning: *thinking* i need a flippin' THUNDERSTORM!!! *stripes start dimming...* *thinking* running.. out of... power.....
Neo: crap. *looks around* wait! where's acid and vera???
Mikenno: *ear twitch* mm....... *both ears twitch, then, a flash of light*
Acid: *grins widely* are we too late?
Neo: no. what took you so long??
Vera: dumb cops tried to detain us XP *sees condemned* not dead yet, huh?
Me: *ratatatatatatatatatatat!!!* NOPE!!!
Acid: *lightbulb* idea!! Vera, distract condemned.
Vera: got it. *leaps into condemned's way* hey there condemned! here i am! come and get me. *dodges around condemned's attacks*
Acid: RAAAAAAAAAGH!!! *jumps on condemned's back and sinks his fangs into condemned's neck*
TheGameArtCritic on July 18, 2008, 9:00:38 AM

Me: oh that's not nice... holy shoot! ACID! I MEAN... uh... dude?
Eclipse: *fully gets up* huff... huff...
Condemned: oh. I see my host has awakened...
Eclipse: *very very very angry and intense* shut up... *hobbles over to Condemned*
Condemned: what are you going to do? BLEED on me? You're a cripple right now! AHAHAHAHA!
Eclipse: I won't let you hurt my friends...
Me: WOOOOOOO!!!!
Eclipse: This isn't where you belong, and yet you can change everything. You can even go beyond your own transformation limits... so i fgured... why not me?
Condemned: *ears droop* no...
Eclipse: *small smile* yes...
Me: he figured it out! HA!
Eclipse: *makes a thunderstorm appear out of no where to charge up Lightning* *A light aura glows off of Eclipse. Suddenly, his wounds are gone, and his arm has been repaired*
Condemned: NO!!!
Eclipse: *turns into a glowing white version of Condemned. Instead of Condemned's wings, however, there are angel wings* *his voice echoes when he speaks* FOR THE SAKE OF ALL THAT IS GOOD, TO FINALLY FREE MYSELF OF YOUR CHAINS FOREVER, CONDEMNED, I SHALL FIGHT YOU!!!
Condemned: *eyes narrow* bring it... *pushes Acid off him* *turns into his out-of-control form*
*the scene changes. It is day. A transparant Shadow, and a transparant Rouge cuddle a transparant baby Eclipse together. The sun shines on them all*
Condemned: how symbolic... heh...
Eclipse: *turns to his friends* guys... you stalled long enough for me to regain power... don't help me fight anymore... this is MY battle...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 18, 2008, 1:33:53 PM
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 3:38:26 AM

Condemned: *lunges at Eclipse*
Eclipse: *flies up, and dodges it, then swoops down, and rips up Condemned's back from above*
Codemned: NNNRRRAAAAARRRGH!!!! *Uses a tentical to grab Eclipse's leg, and pull him down. Then Condemned pounces on Eclipse and slashes at his face*
Eclipse: agh! *mirrors Condemned's move*
*there is a big "latched on to each other rolling around and punching each other" fight*
Me: wooaaoooaaoohhh.... look at them GO!
Rosette: w-will Eclipse win..?
Me: i can't promise you that, but he now has a better chance, considering he can control his mindscape again...
mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 4:05:41 AM

Acid: *has numerous puncture wounds, but none of them go all the way through* urgh.......... agh.... hey vera.....
Vera: acid..... *hugs him*
Acid: *hugs her back* i'll be ok..... oww..... *looks and sees eclipse* wow. looks like he got his strength back.
Neo: *nods* too right. *walks over to acid and vera* hey acid, you ok there?
Acid: yeah i'm fine......oww.
Neo: *small laugh* hey, acid. i was wrong about you. and.. i'm sorry.
*both acid and vera smile*
Lightning: *is fully charged, his stripes glow brightly* oh yeah!! *turns +Lightning* i'm ready now!!
Twilight: whoa, hold it right there, light.
+Lightning: ??
twilight: *points to eclipse* it's his fight now. *sits down*
+Lightning: *looks over* oh. i see. *powers down and sits next to Twilight* so now we wait?
Twilight: *nods* so now we wait.
Mikenno: *puts his hands down and opens his eyes*
Me: mikenno? what are you doing??
Mikenno: eclipse is in control now. i no longer have to fight to keep us in place.
Shidako: *still a dragon, lands next to them* the hedgehog is right. *shrinks down into a mobian-sized blue dragon*
Mikenno: i am NOT a hedgehog!
Shidako: *confused* then what are you??
Mikenno: i'm.......
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 4:25:17 AM

Eclipse and Condemned: *still fighting*
Eclipse: NOT AGAIN!! I'M NOT GETTING KICKED OUT AGAIN!! *zaps Condemned with a powerful energy*
Condemned: *is hit* GGGRRRAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!! *crashes down to the ground*
Eclipse: heh...
*in all the smoke emitting from the ground, Condemned zooms back up with full force and smashes into Eclipse*
Eclipse: AAAAGH!! *spits out some blood*
Me: oh geez...
Rosette: ECLIPSE!!! *fumbles aaround for her gun*
Me: *blocks her* NO!! WE MUST NOT INTERFERE!
Rosette: but...
Me: no.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 19, 2008, 4:30:21 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 6:14:33 AM

Condemned: but... how? I'm stronger then you... I could easily beat you BEFORE...
Eclipse: that was before. This is now...
Condemned: I won't give up!! I CAN'T!! I need your body! I need it or I'll die!!!
Eclipse: that's really too bad...
Condemned: no... no no no....
Eclipse: your time is up. It's over. Go. Now.
Condemned: i... i... *closes eyes* maybe... maybe i really do need to leave...
Me: he won?
Condemned: *turns into his spirit form* I'm too weak to keep fighting... I must go... *fades away*
teh room: *turns white again*
Eclipse: *sends everyone, and himself, back into the real world*
*there is a SHHHHHIIIINNGGGGG noise. It's done. It's over*
In teh real world: *Eclipse gets up. The tenticals in his back sink into his fur. His straight jacket seemed to have ripped off him during his mental battle. Condemned is no where to be seen*
mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 8:53:07 AM

Twilight: .......... is it over?
Lightning: *looks around* i... i think it is.....
Neo: eclipse? are you ok?
Vera: he seems ok....... are you?
Acid: *sigh of relief* thank GOD, it's finally over!!!!!!!!!!!!
*everyone breathes a sigh of relief*
Me: yay!!! *glomps eclipse* oh whoops. *pulls away, keeping my hands on his shoulder* you are ok, right, eclipse?
Mikenno: *smiles* *thinking* it seems like our troubles are over.
Shidako: *goes back into the human form* looks like my work here is done...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 19, 2008, 9:00:13 AM

Aria: *Staring blankly out into the distance* Is it over?? Didn't that seem… a bit too easy, in retrospect?? I mean… no offense Eclipse… but I don't think a demon that's… possessed you for countless years would disappear just like that…
*Her face still blank, with a creepy, eerie look on her face, she turns to face Mish* I mean, that's a great strategy for a predator. Allowing their prey to think that they were gone, while they were simply… hiding, waiting to strike once more… when the defenses are down, and the guards aren't in the castle…
Condemned would do that… that seems just like something he would do…
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 9:46:08 AM

Condemned: *is silently watching, away from everyone. He disappears, vowing revenge*
Eclipse: *his breathing is heavy, his eyes are tired. HE is tired from his inner battle. Eclipse falls down from exhaustion*
Me: i knew that would happen... come on guys... *lugs Eclipse over my shoulders, and in one step, dissapears to the field where Eclipse left, taking everyone with me* *places Eclipse down, head on a rock* *I dump water on him*
Eclipse: *sputters a bit then comes to* C-critic...
Rosette: Eclipse?
Eclipse: *weak smile* Rosette... i... feel... GOOD... I don't.. i don't feel like killing you anymore... i-it's great... is he... i mean... is Condemned gone?
Me: we think so...
Eclipse: *leaps up and hugs Rosette tightly* thank you... *he lets go, leaving Rosette standing there and blushing* Thank ALL of you... you saved me from... from myself... I owe you all greatly.
Sonic: *runs in with Shadow*
Shadow: we heard the news!
Sonic: are we too late??
Me: how can you guys be the fastest things on earth, and STILL be LATE??
Sonic: well... it was the same for Super Smash Brothers Brawl...
Shadow: nah-ah-ah! Don't include me on that! That was all YOU!
mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 9:50:10 AM

Shidako: too right.......... *remembers* oh! mikenno...... back when we were in Eclipse's consciousness, you said you weren't a hedgehog. Then you said you couldn't say what you were in there. so i ask you again. *turns into a silver-gray-and-blue oriental dragon* what are you?
*everyone turns to mikenno expectantly*
Mikenno: i............. i am......... *sighs loudly*
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 10:49:33 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 20, 2008, 12:20:40 AM
mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 4:44:52 AM

Twilight: O.O thats why you didnt wanna say it.
Lightning: and you never told us??
Neo: *thinking* oh boy... this may not end well.....
Shidako: *roaring* I KNEW IT!!!!!! *growls slightly*
Me: oh gawd. not even i knew!!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 20, 2008, 9:21:31 AM

Eclipse: woah... she's RIGHT!
Me: are you that suprised?
Eclipse: well... uh...
Me: see, the thing is, I'm so insane, emotions don't blind me (that much). For a few seconds, i can think straight and KNOW things. Well, not before doing something completelly random...
Eclipse: ah. That sounds like you.
*there is a presence behind me. It leaks the stench of evil all over the place*
Me: *i turn around, gasp, and back way up*
Mr. Inderretta: *breathes in deeply, and sighs* is it not a lovely day?
Eclipse: what do you want, crazy?
Mr. Inderretta:*sarcastically* oh... that really hurt... it really hurt here... *points at his heart* Eclipse... i heard the news... I heard you were....... seperated?
Eclipse: that's none of your business.
Mr. Inderretta: that's ok. I already know. *holds up a glowing blue vial* He may be "gone", but he's not fully gone. (omg story arc) where is your father, Eclipse?
Eclipse: why would i tell YOU?
Mr. Inderretta: *looks offended* excuse me? I just have a "PRESENT" for him... that's all... but that's ok... I'll just find him myself... *walks off*
mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 9:51:22 AM

Mikenno: *opens eyes* that inderetta man....... he's trying to get shadow posessed.
Me: !!!!! HOW DO YOU KNOW THAAAT?????
Mikenno: *points to his head* mental powers, remember?
Twilight: so what do we do about this????
Lightning: we only just fixed THIS problem! we dont need another one!!
Neo: Lightning's right. we should go after inderetta.
Me: ok critic, what do you think?
Mikenno: *was thinking throughout the rest of the conversation* odd.... i had expected a completely different reaction from eclipse..... shidako, i understand, but i..... i could have sworn eclipse was going to get angry................. i was... wrong? *shakes head and smiles* well, there's a first time for everything.
TheGameArtCritic on July 20, 2008, 11:39:33 AM

Eclipse: I told you all before: I feel GOOD. I just... i feel like a weight on my my chest is GONE... *shakes his head* as for Mr. Inderretta and Dad, I think i know where to find them... in an hour.
Me: uh... and hour?
Eclipse: by then, he would have captured Dad and taken him into the secret hideout he keeps under his ex-company. We need to hustle after that.
Me: uhhhh.... oooookaaayy......
Rosette: stupid Inderretta.... why can't he leave us ALONE?
Me: 'cause he's a crazy old fart.
Rosette: ah.
mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 11:47:00 AM

Mikenno: *ear twitches and he closes his eyes* hmm...
Twilight: mik? you ok there?
Mikenno: *eyes snap open* i know where shadow is. at least, sort of.
Neo: where is he???
Mikenno: he's wherever he's living right now. he's lying in his bed. looks like he's trying to fall asleep.
Lightning: then we gotta go!!!
Shidako: i dont want to have to deal with ANOTHER bad demon!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 20, 2008, 12:53:14 PM
TheGameArtCritic on July 21, 2008, 10:16:05 AM

Mr. Inderretta: *laughs at Shadow, who is strapped to a hard, metalic table*
Shadow: what are YOU so cheery about, Devon?
Mr. Inderretta: oh, it's a happy day for me... Eclipse lost Condemned! I found out when i met him! I couldn't sense any bit of him! *he laughs maniacally, once more, then suddenly goes serious, and leans over Shadow* but I still have that remaining bit of Condemned... *holds up the blue vial, and swirls the contents* just enough so that you don't have Condemned's personality, but plenty of his HATE... *dumps the contents into a styringe* *gets in Shadow's face* lets see how you deal with UNcontrollable power... ahahahahaha!
Shadow: *spits in Mr. Inderretta's face*
Mr. Inderretta: *sputters a bit, then glares at Shadow* I'll get back to you in fifteen minutes... *walks off*
MEANWHILE
Eclipse: arighty... Mr. Inderretta's base... uh... I don't know where that is.
Me: neh. But WE do. We went there before. YO TWILLY!
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 5:56:02 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 6:14:54 AM

Men whial:
Mr. Inderretta: *comes back with the styringe* alright... now then Shadow... lets play in God's domain...
Shadow: hmph. You still haven't told me what you'll be doing exactly, Devon...
Mr. Inderretta: why spoil the suprise... *clears a patch of fur on Shadow's arm, and aims the needle* Oh. If you really want me to tell you... then... well... *leans over and whispers in Shadow's ear, making Shadow's eyes widen. Then he quickly injects Shadow with Condemned's contents*
Shadow: *gasps* NO! It's Condem - *he becomes dazed, and unfocused. His eyes glaze over as tiny blue tenticals the size of veins start to engulf him*
*Mr. Inderretta's insane laughter fills the room and echoes in the darkness*
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 6:57:44 AM

Me: NO! it's never too late. TWILIGHT! LETS GET A MOVE-ON!!! *takes off*
DaemonTwilight: GAWT IT!!! *runs like hell!!!!!!* *thinking* oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god!!! *wills herself to go faster* come on, twilly, RUN!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:30:17 AM
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 7:43:54 AM

Neo: YOU HAVE TO FLY FASTER MISH!!!
Me: i can only fly as fast as twilight can run!!! she's the only one that knows where the base is!! *on the speaker* Twilight!!! can you speed up a bit more????
DaemonTwilight: 8roars back* IM TRYING!!!! RAAAAWRGGGGH!!!! *wings sprout out* O.O whoa. thats a new one. okay... here goes!!!!! *leaps into the air and flies up to where the plane is* ALLRIGHT!!!! *RAAAWRG!!!! she flaps her wings powerfullly and she accelerates greatly*
Me: WHOA!! now we're talking!!! hold ooon.......... *accelerates the plane to keep up with twilight*
Everyone else: *fall back against their seats from the acceleration*
TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:49:04 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 22, 2008, 10:16:40 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 1:11:20 AM
mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 4:41:41 AM

Shidako: well??
Mikenno: i am a..... *turns away* i cannot say it. not now. not here.
SHidako: *narrows eyes* hmph. *thinking* what could he be that could be so bad to say? unless....... *eyes widen* is it possible...?
Acid: *gets up painfully* agh....... well, looks like all we can do is take a break....... i'm goin' over to Lightning and Twilight.
Vera: ok. *helps aacid walk over there*
Neo: *stays with mish* ....... i never thought i'd get involved in somthing like this.
Me: me neither. i mean, sure we fight egghead every once in a while, but fighting to save our friend's consciousness?
Neo: yeah, i know. this is big.
Me: wanna go over to everyone else?
Neo: *nods and walks to where the others are*
Lightning: ........ i hope eclipse gets through ok.
Twilight: *clings to his arm* he will. we have to believe that.
Acid+Vera: *sit down next to them*
Neo+Mish: *sit down also*
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 6:15:17 AM

*teh battle is huge, it goes on for a while, but finally,in a fight for victory, Eclipse manages to pin Condemned down*
Condemned: but... how? I'm stronger then you... I could easily beat you BEFORE...
Eclipse: that was before. This is now...
Condemned: I won't give up!! I CAN'T!! I need your body! I need it or I'll die!!!
Eclipse: that's really too bad...
Condemned: no... no no no....
Eclipse: your time is up. It's over. Go. Now.
Condemned: i... i... *closes eyes* maybe... maybe i really do need to leave...
Me: he won?
Condemned: *turns into his spirit form* I'm too weak to keep fighting... I must go... *fades away*
teh room: *turns white again*
Eclipse: *sends everyone, and himself, back into the real world*
*there is a SHHHHHIIIINNGGGGG noise. It's done. It's over*
In teh real world: *Eclipse gets up. The tenticals in his back sink into his fur. His straight jacket seemed to have ripped off him during his mental battle. Condemned is no where to be seen*
Lightning: .........i dont get it. whats going on?? why does the badger-demon suddendly care about eclipse so much????
Mikenno: *eyes widen as if he just realized something* ........... f@#$. *turns to his demon form and busts a hole in the ceiling and flies off into the night*