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In The Rain

In The Rain

In The Rain by TheGameArtCritic
In The Rain by TheGameArtCritic

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TheGameArtCritic
no. this is not that crap song by that crap artist, Enya. I swear to god. Don't kill me, or anything.

I don't know... i think this is fun to look at, and it looks like Eclipse is saying "stay away from me"... well... not SAYING it, but probabally thinking it REALLY hard.

Do you think this is sexy? If I'm the only one who thinks this is sexy, i may have a problem...

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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 1483
Favorites... 2
Vote Score 4
Comments 95
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 hours
Reference NONE

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mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:49:24 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *manages to avoid getting hit by the blasts of energy* song switch. rosette's theme?

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:08:23 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: sure ^^

Eclipse: *eyes still red* NO!!!! DON'T YOU DARE MENTION ANYTHING RELATED TO ROSETTE!!!!! DON'T YOU DARE!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:16:52 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *grins and narrows eyes* thats it then. *takes a deep breath... and then......*
when you walk away, you dont hear me say,
please, oh baby, dont go...
simple and clean is the way that you're
making me feel tonight...
its hard to let it go......

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:28:36 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *covers his ears* SHUT UP!!!!!!!

Me: oh! This made him get pissed off faster! ha!

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:39:20 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *continues, in an amazing imitation of the actual voice*
you're giving me too many things
lately, you're all I need
you smiled at me and said,
Don't get me wrong I love you,
but does that mean I have to meet, your father?
when we are older you'll understand,
what I meant when I said no,
I don't think life is quite that simple.....

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:43:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *falls to his knees holding his ears. His voice has gotten quieter, and almost begging. He starts to tear up* please... please just stop...

Me: hmm... he seems desperate now...

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 6:21:36 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *continues, but softer*
when you walk away,
you dont hear me say,
please, oh baby, dont go,
simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight, its hard to let it go.......

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 7:48:23 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *is now on the floor, sobbing*

Me: in just a few lyrics, Mish, you managed to turn this rough baddie into a pile of mush... O_O

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 3:10:05 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *thinking* that....actually worked...... i think i'll keep going....
*softly*
the daily things that keep us all busy
are confusing me......
thats when you came to me and said,
dont get me wrong i love you, but does that mean i have to walk on water?
when we get older you'll understand it's enough, when i say so
and maybe some things are that simple.......

TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:39:58 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *still sobbing, he can't even speak*

Me: I think that the chip may be preventing him from saying how he really feels, so he bottles it up inside. Hearing Rosette's theme song kinda opened that bottle and caused Eclipse to just completely lose himself in his own sorrow.

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 6:06:32 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *stops only for a second* does that mean we killed the chip? *continues singing*
when you walk away, you dont hear me say,
please, oh baby, dont go
simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight, it's hard to let it go.....

TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 9:50:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: no. It just means we temperaroly made Eclipse become extremelly sad. And emo. Really emo.

Eclipse: *still sobbing* p-p-please s-s-stop....

mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 6:07:06 AM

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mechadragon13Me: as long as he doesnt kill us. *keeps going*
hold me,
whatever lies beyond this morning
is a little later on,
regardless of warnings,
the future doesnt scare me at all....
nothing's like before....

TheGameArtCritic on August 21, 2008, 7:17:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *is now curled up into a tight ball, and is just a complete mess*

Me: *puts a hand on Mish's shoulder, eyes full of seriousness* maybe... maybe you should stop...

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 5:01:42 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *nods and stops* i think we're safe for now......... sorry eclipse.

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:11:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *whimpers*

Me: that's... REALLY cute...

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:19:19 AM

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mechadragon13Me: is he safe to hug?

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:23:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: yes.

Eclipse: *shivering and sobbing*

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:45:49 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *sits down next to elclipse and hugs him carefully*

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:50:58 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *doesn't care about being hugged, but his sobs get quieter*

Me: you really miss her... don't you?

Eclipse: *shakes his head, but looks terrible*

mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 4:54:15 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *still hugging* eclipse..... you know you miss her. why else would you be like this?

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 6:07:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: i... i don't know... *sniffle* i don't... it has to be something else... maybe the chip is malfunctioning... *sniff* yeah... maybe that's it...

Me: hey, man. You can't find an excuse for something like that. You still love her. Sorry.

mechadragon13 on August 24, 2008, 10:07:31 AM

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mechadragon13Me: critic's right, eclipse. you know that deep down, you really miss her.

TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 1:47:11 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *completely loses it* HOW COULD I EVER LIKE - LET ALONE LOVE SOMEONE WHO HAS SECRETELY BEEN MY ENEMY THIS WHOLE TIME????

Me: ok. Yeah. Rosette's file WAS real. I can say THAT... but... she never tried to hurt you...

Eclipse: *his eyes narrow* liar. She's the worst of all of you...

mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 10:50:44 AM

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mechadragon13Me: you DO know that when she found out about inderetta's evil, she LEFT, right???

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:09:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: SHE LEFT TO SPY ON US!!! *starts to sob again* I'LL NEVER TRUST ANYONE AGAIN!!!

Me: arrgh... he's too blinded...

mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 11:18:18 AM

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mechadragon13Me: any way to bring him back? back to normal, i mean?

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:37:35 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: already told you. Near-death experience. ^^

Eclipse: *sobs*

mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 2:40:30 AM

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mechadragon13Me: .......what kind?

TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 8:53:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: any kind would work ^^

mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 9:03:34 AM

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mechadragon13Me: umm.. okay then.....

mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:36:00 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *looks closer* whoa, you're right......... he IS kinda purple-glowy......

TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:40:48 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: ii know... it's so creepy... And... and it sorta makes me fearful... like with Chaos, how he emitted a powerful energy that made people afraid of him...

mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:05:22 AM

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mechadragon13Me: mmmhmm. *tries to touch him*

TheGameArtCritic on August 10, 2008, 8:13:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *the dark aura is thick, and cold, but safe to touch. It seems to cause fear in others*

Me: n-n-no k-kidding....

mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:34:11 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *shudders* thats really f-freaky..... *withdraws hand*

TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 2:35:18 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *also shudders* why the hell am i afraid of Eclipse? I know i shouldn't be... but... brrr! *Tail puffs up*

Eclipse: *wakes up with DARK BLUE IRISES LE GASP* nnnnngh.... *slowly gets up, and steadies himself* I feel like I've been hit by a fully loaded truck...

Me: It's called a hangover! :D

Eclipse:...... da?

Me: no... wait... that's for alchohal...

Eclipse: you guys seem jumpy. *takes a step forward*

Me: *takes a step back* woooo.. it's like magnetism!

Eclipse: what the hell are you -

Me: YOU GET THE F*** AWAY FROM ME!!!

Eclipse: O_o

Me: heh... random outburst... sorry Eclipse...

Rosette: HI EVERYBODY!

Everybody: Hi Doctor Nick!

Rosette: the reason why Eclipse isn't turning back into Condemned is because I was here the whole time! *manages to get close to him without flinching*

Me: D:

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 2:52:09 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *takes a step or two back* eh....... still scared. *ears laid back, tail quivering* ehh....... doctor nick??

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:04:07 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Simpons reference *takes another step back*

Rosette: why are you scared of him?

Me: WHY AREN'T YOU????

Eclipse: scared... you're scared of me??

Me: yes.

Rosette: No! I'm not!

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 4:11:29 AM

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mechadragon13Me: your aura is really dark right now..... so dark that we can SEE it..... *takes another step back to stand next to critic*

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:21:16 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: :(..... Stupid Condemned... makes me glow purple shoot....

Me: purple glowing shoot XD

Rosette: stop talking about shoot.

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 4:29:29 AM

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mechadragon13Me: 8takes a step mback* LOL shoot XDDD

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:36:24 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: you know what it's supposed to be....

Eclipse: shoot is shoot and shoot is shoot and shoot IS SHOOT.

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 5:15:09 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *backs up again* umm..... okay then.

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 5:22:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: that's confusing.

Me: censoring is ALWAYS confusing...

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 8:30:53 AM

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mechadragon13Me; too true.......

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 9:18:20 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: paradox. *poof gone*

Me: IT BEGIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNSSSSSSSS!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 12:46:45 PM

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mechadragon13Me: NO! NOO!! bring him BAAACK!!! NUUU!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:41:33 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: um... are you sure you WANT him right now?

mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 1:14:56 PM

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mechadragon13Me: O.O not right NOW, but... yipes........

TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 3:13:53 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: that's ok. I came back on my own. >:)

Everyone: *little girl scream*

Eclipse: *causes pure chaos*

mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 6:53:22 AM

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mechadragon13Me: EEEEEEEK!!!! *hides*

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 4:37:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *hiding as well* good thing I'm a raccoon...

Eclipse: *hums the new Open Your Heart Remix while burning the whole place to the ground*

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 4:43:49 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *whispers to critic* i think this fits him more..... *starts humming "papercut" by linkin park*

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:27:00 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: hmm. Maybe you're right.

Eclipse: *catches us whispering and aims dark enegy at us*

Me: aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:44:10 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *stays totally put, now singing quietly* Why does it feel like night today? something in here's not right today, why am i so uptight today? paranoia's all i got left. i dont know what stressed me first, or how the pressure was fed, but i know just what it feels like to have a voice in the back of my head....

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:47:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *lowers his hand, and the dark energy disappears* *quietly* stop it...

Me: wow. The song really describes him.

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 6:22:36 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *continues, and sings a little louder* it's like a face that i hold inside, a face that awakes when i close my eyes, A face watches every time I lie, A face that laughs every time I fall, So I know that when it's time to sink or swim, That the face inside is hearing me, Right beneath my skin!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 9:35:32 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *growling, and shaking* i said STOP IT!!!

Me: lol you're getting him pissed...

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:23:36 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *quietly* thats the plan.....
*loudly now*
It's like I'm paranoid lookin' over my back
It's like a whirlwind inside of my head
It's like I can't stop what I'm hearing within
It's like the face inside is right BENEATH MY SKIN!!!!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:47:22 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *eyes go fully read in a threatening manner. He destroys where we were hiding and snarls loudly. Eclipse then fires as much dark energy possible at us with his ears flattened against his head*

Me: ok. you got him so pissed that he'll try to kill us, fail, then go for our OC's. Brilliant. Now what? :)

ShadzGirl on August 11, 2008, 5:45:16 AM

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ShadzGirlCreepy cool!^-^

mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 10:20:42 AM

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mechadragon13naww, i agree with you about the sexiness ^^ cuz eclipse is awesome like that ^^

........ NAAAH!! *glomps*

TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:10:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: NO WAIT! STAY BACK!! Oh wait... i don't have Condemned anymore.... ^^"

Me: yeaaaahhh, retard...

mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:20:53 AM

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mechadragon13sqweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! *lets go, runs back a bit, then glomps him again* you're so smexeh~!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:34:55 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: holy shi - AHH!!! *GLOMPED*

Me: pwned.

Eclipse: shut up and help me...

mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:41:56 AM

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mechadragon13*hisses* no touchy. *hugglez*

TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:44:40 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: omg PARADOX!!!! *tears stream down face*

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 3:07:13 AM

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mechadragon13OMG NO!!! *huggles of comfort*

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 6:36:47 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *actually hugs back* i don't know what to do... if i join with Condemned, i give Mr. Inderretta what he wants... and if i don't... then... *cries harder* GOD DAMNIT!!!

Me: he really really likes her... seeing Rosette dying like this... he can't handle it...

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 6:44:02 AM

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mechadragon13*still hugging him for comfort* i know...... i know.......... twilight felt the same about lightning........ this is cruel. it's not right.

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 6:46:54 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *can't speak anymore*

Me: yeah... Mr. Mustard is an asshole...

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 7:06:29 AM

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mechadragon13*still hugging him* too right. its people like him that make this world lousy.

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 7:19:36 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: yeah...

Eclipse: paradox! *falls down and slowly turns into Condemned* AAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 7:21:42 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *screeches in terror and backs away quickly* oh no!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 9:46:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *is Condemned*

Condemned: *is more powerful then EVUR*

Me: SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 12:31:33 PM

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mechadragon13Me: DITTO!!!! oh god im glad i got away before he killed me....... O.O did i speak too soon?

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:39:56 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: yes.

Condemned: SCREAATCH *killz*

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 1:42:57 PM

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mechadragon13Me: dang it. ima dead again. AGAIN! grrr.....

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:49:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: nraaahahaahahahaha...

Me: ECLIPSE WOULDN'T HAVE DONE THAT!!!

Condemned:*hisses* well Eclipse is GONE...

Me: *sniffle* i know...

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 1:51:42 PM

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mechadragon13Me: *monotone* what did you say?

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:55:32 PM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: hahahaha!! Eclipse can't break free! He could never from the start! He only got help from his... *hisses loudly* friendssss....

Me: .... :(

Condemned: and so, he's gone. I can feel him fighting, but it's impossible!

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 1:58:57 PM

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mechadragon13Me: .........................you're wrong.

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:09:43 PM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *walks to Mish menacingly* oh am i...? What makes you say that?

mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 4:49:47 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *holds her ground* i say that because i know i'm right. we, eclipse's friends, may have helped him in his time of need, but it was him who got rid of you.

TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 6:59:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *snarls loudly* I could have destroyed him, if you all hadn't come!! Why didn't you leave him alone??? WHY??? *smacks Twilight upside the head*

Me: HEY!! YOU STOP THAT!!

mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 7:12:46 AM

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mechadragon13((im guessing condemned hit me, cuz twilly ain't here...))

Me: *takes the hit, then faces condemned again. there is an odd glint in her eye* friendship is the strongest power there is, demekarr. it is indestructible. you can try and try, but you will never defeat us.

TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 7:21:29 AM

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TheGameArtCritic((my bad))

Condemned: HAHAHAHAHA!! "Friendship"... Next you'll be shoving this "Love" crap down my throat...

Me: well actually -

Condemned: STUFF IT, CRAZY!! *slams me into a random wall*

Me: why does everyone keep DOING THAAAAAAAAT???

mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 7:38:12 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *shakes head* thats just it...... you just dont get it.

TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 8:55:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: listen... I don't think YOU guys get it... there IS no power from "friendship"... and "love" it's all just a bunch of - *falls over, and turns into an unconcious Eclipse*

Me: helloooooo power of love and friendship...

mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 5:31:52 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: *ear-to-ear grin* see? i was right.

TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:15:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *starts to go near Eclipse, then backs away quickly* yeesh... His dark aura is so powerful right now, i can SEE it! Yo Mish! Check out that purple-y glow around Eclipse!

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 6, 2008, 8:50:08 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0I found it slighty sexy XD Though anything in the rain with that expression would be sexy 8D
The texture of the paper, it gives it a cool effect *thumbs up*

TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 9:38:47 AM

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TheGameArtCriticwhee! Thank youuuuuu!

Ok, you agreed with it being sexy... so i'm NOT crazy after all....

Falconlobo on August 6, 2008, 7:32:18 AM

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Falconloboawesome^^ nice fur and eyes