Dead Inside pg 1
Dead Inside pg 1
Dead Inside pg 1 by TheGameArtCritic
Description
Description
First page. It's... yay.
YAY.
NOW, ONTO PAGE TWO!
YAY.
NOW, ONTO PAGE TWO!
General Info
General Info
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Comics (Doujinshi)
Date Submitted
Views 1604
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 6
Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Comics (Doujinshi)
Date Submitted
Views 1604
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 6
Comments
15
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 3 days
Reference none
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 3 days
Reference none
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2sdude on May 25, 2009, 9:28:37 AM
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whats up with his hand in panel 4? other than that great job!TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2009, 2:38:46 PM
that was my own mistake ^^; bad Critic! *slaps self*Kirbyt on May 17, 2009, 8:59:00 PM
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Very mysterious. Yet so interesting.TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 1:20:52 AM
you might want to see page two, now :DShadzGirl on May 16, 2009, 1:27:19 AM
ShadzGirl on
Dun-dun-dun-ddddddduuuuuuuuuuunnnnXDGReat jobX3
ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on May 15, 2009, 12:07:53 PM
Grah the words xD;; I know that you didn't do that on purpose, cause I've never seen that before. Did you have the anti-aliasing method on crisp? (it's the menu next to the font size xD Don't worry, I actually had to open my photoshop to see what it's called.) If not, set it to crisp, and if it's already that, it might be the format you saved it in o.o I don't know if I'm helpful, cause this usually only happens when using paint...ANYWAYS, Very nice start :3 I hate flickies cause of a bad experience with Sonic 3D Blast, but now I feel sorry for the little bugger xD I sense moar of this comic will come soon so I wish you the best of luck with your photoshop! God knows it's the buggiest program in existence @_@
TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 1:01:55 PM
THANK YOU! :DAlso, you're wrong, ArcSoft is. XD
Falconlobo on May 15, 2009, 11:56:55 AM
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cool but poor bird and poor Sonicmechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 10:10:41 AM
*fangirls* EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE!!!!!!!! HOLY CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!!!!!!ok, now is time for serious commenting.
grass=skill. you can seriously work that brush, girl. petal=SKILL. that blue streak could have been a bit neater.... the shading is very nice, simple but nice. love how you have the ability to draw sonic's spikes from behind :D i know I can't. poor bleeding flicky. Sonic's hand looks a bit funny in the fourth panel.....?
ok, that's all the critiquing you'll get for now ^^; overall=VERY GOOD
TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 10:20:11 AM
hand - yes I know... was too lazy to fix that. the pinky is longer than the index.Blur - tried to fix it. Couldn't
Word blur: WHY DID THAT HAPPENNNNNN?????????
overall: thank you, thank you! Prepare for more!
mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 10:21:41 AM
The words look fiiiiiiiiiine.... *prepares* :DTheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 10:34:42 AM
:Dmechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 10:39:46 AM
oh, i just noticed. sonic doesnt have an inner ear XD to tan triangle XD his ears are a bit long, too....TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 10:44:35 AM
actually, he DOES have an inner ear part... it's not shown in this page.His ears, I made long on purpose... I found that a long-eared Sonic seemed rather interesting.
mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 10:47:55 AM
his ears don't seem to be flipped back..... and okay ^^ he does seem more interesting with pointy pointy ears ^^;