Twin Neko (yaoi)4

uhh.its no ones fault!i should have not asked for corrections

Ahhhh! It's my fault! I shouldn't have said anything! Bad me bad me! *zips lips so no more rudeness escapes them* *looks at her mother's shoes* ....... *unzips mouth* Ahhh! Those are so ugly! *slaps self*

Why are you freaking out I said it was good 0__o and you ASKED for suggestions don't freak out if u asked for it............chill out i said i liked it!

where's jack? jack!? jaaaaack!!! just kidding. but you should'nt put yourself down like that. you'r one of the best artists i've ever seen!

When are you going to draw number 5?

*pulls out a box of tissues and get ready to cry*MY DRAWING ARE NEVER GOING TO BE PERFECT!!WHAAAAH!*thow pencil down and stomps on it rapidly*

Ooooo Kuri ish liking dis!!! ^____^ MORE!!! squee

welllllll you said to point some things out so I will cause i wanna help, even though it would be a dog to go back and erase, these are just suggestions,the hands are fine its just that you made there heads a tad to big for the body thats why the hands look a little small but the whole body is in good shape so don't worry, like in the first picture they are kissing, like the neck is kinda long thats all, try to lower the eyes and the nose thats all! Everything looks fine to me though like i said these are suggestions, i like how you draw anatomy like in the third lil manga caption box.

ok i'll look at your art!!-^.^- i'll comment on some of them too

well, anywayz, nice pic *yes and I mean the hands* look at my art *if you could call it that* sometime if you like. CIRCLES RULE!