Um.... Advise? by croupted_yaoi_fan

Um.... Advise?

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This picture has a lot of room for improvement but I put it up so all of you would tell me how to improve it I used a blending stick and thats what happened I'll post a better version of it later. I LOVE ALL OF YOU WHO LOOKED AT IT!!!!!!!!!!

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Category Miscellaneous » Characters
Date Submitted October 30, 2004, 10:16:01 AM
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rabitgrimreaper on February 26, 2006, 11:51:56 AM

Dude! Congradulations!!!!!!!!!!!I love your picture too!!!!I am so gonna add you to my favorite artist list!!!!*does so & faves pic*

sis on February 12, 2006, 12:46:03 AM

DUDE thats good I love the shading!Way better than me!^^

dramaqueen101 on December 6, 2005, 9:17:20 AM

You want constructive criticism? Well here you go. His thumb on his left hand needs to be a bit smaller, but the rest is okay. His right hand needs to be a bit bigger. And if you're doing anime, make the person's eyes sparkle, make them alive with emotion. That's all I got. Otherwise his bod's pretty good.

Lady_of_the_spork on September 30, 2005, 10:06:51 PM

nice.me likey.

Nakatsu_Luver on September 22, 2005, 2:43:53 AM

I have no idea who this person is but I like how you drew him I like his tattoo the most. nyah nyah ^.~

FieldsofGrace on May 24, 2005, 9:13:24 AM

Great job with the clothes folds and wrinkles. And I love how you made his left hand! I can't do that er... 3-Dish effect. @_@x Like... his hand looking bigger 'cause it's at the front.. ^_^x;; Anyways...
The hair is cool and his.. erm.. hehe.. tummy.. HEHE.. :Blush.: GOOD STOMACH. W-WELL DONE.. ^___^x;;;

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on May 8, 2005, 11:41:49 PM

woooooowww awesome job. i think what you could do is work on the eyes, and the other hand (one to de left) great job though!!!
~Koikaji Saru

Deathelf on May 4, 2005, 4:27:11 AM

Thsi is awesome!! I LOVE da tattoo! The hands are well shaped. U r good. He does have a kawaai stumach. *pokes stumach*

Dark_Mistress_666 on April 21, 2005, 11:11:23 AM

awsome piccy I love it o.o you did a great job lets see, the body structer is awsome ^.^ it's just little things that need to be evened out (ex the fingures the eyes) try making the hair flowy instead of jagged all in all it's a really good piccy ^.^

Spartan_112 on April 20, 2005, 9:02:50 AM

nice work really cool pose

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