To Dark DP: Broken

This is for Dark DP, his request to draw how you feel about his art, so here it is! I think it turned out pretty well, but I had to crop it and it cut out the words. So here are the lyrics:

Broken by Seether and Amy Lee

I wanted you to know I love the way you laugh
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain away
I keep your photograph and I know it serves me well
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain

'Cause I'm broken when I'm open
And I don't feel like I am strong enough
‘Cause I’m broken when I’m lonesome
And I don’t feel right when you’re gone away

You've gone away, you don't feel me here, anymore

The worst is over now and we can breathe again
I wanna hold you high, you steal my pain away
There’s so much left to learn, and no one left to fight
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain

[x2]
'Cause I'm broken when I'm open
And I don’t feel like I am strong enough
‘Cause I’m broken when I’m lonesome
And I don’t feel right when you’re gone away

'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

You've gone away
You don't feel me here anymore

Anyway, Danny has died and Sam has just found him dead. She cradles his body and starts to cry. And Danny's angel/ghost appears, but Sam can't see him, and the ghost/angel Danny's upset for her and that she can't communicate with him. Anyway, please comment and no flames.