Belldandy and others!
Belldandy and others!
Belldandy and others! by foltzfarm

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*heaves a big sigh* GRRR!! I HATE COLORING!!! >_< *takes in a big breath of air* allriighht.. *sigh* Well, I just finished this tonight. and sadly, I really don't think its all too grrreeaatt.. I mean, it's OK, but I kind of messed up.. MEEP! The piccy I was looking off of was from the internet^_^ I really don't know much about Ah! My goddess, except for Belldandy's name *laughs* The other two in the pic.. I really don't know about O.O I wish I did.. it looks like a nifty series!<br />
Well, anyways.. Pleez comment!! And please give out constructive critisism.. >_< I need it! ^_^Well, thanks for looking!
Well, anyways.. Pleez comment!! And please give out constructive critisism.. >_< I need it! ^_^Well, thanks for looking!
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Slippingthroughreality on April 19, 2005, 4:14:12 AM

foltzfarm on April 17, 2005, 11:18:11 AM
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foltzfarm on April 15, 2005, 10:56:45 PM
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neptuniumz on April 15, 2005, 2:58:29 PM
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foltzfarm on April 11, 2005, 6:09:51 AM
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ADDICT on April 10, 2005, 4:30:25 PM
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Anyway, the girl's elbow, the one on the lower page, seems to be a bit out. There's, something with the hands too, but otherwise, they seem fine. Her right shoulder seems kinda too long,the neck looks as if it's a bit out of place. It'snot align with the center. The right upper arm looks a bit narrow. The perspective with the girl on the upper left seems to be messed up. I couldn't understand her pose. Some of her right hand fingers are too short. There's something with the girl's elbows and/or arms,the one on the upper right. There's something with her abdomen (stomach) too.I suggest that you pratice body outlines more, they can really help out a lot, especially on perspective. Well,is that enough? I kinda like the way you do the hands though. I also love the shading. It's a really great pic! Just keep on practicing, and your work will become better!