fertility (revised) by jny016

fertility (revised)

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"My very first published art in De La Salle's Malate Literary Folio!
done with colored pencils on 1/4 illustration board
Much Thanks! :D"

this was the revised version of the first FERTILITY i uploaded here on FAC. i had to revise it coz our art editor said that in the first version, the background sort of ATE A LOT OF SPACE that the actual piece didn't give enoug emphasis on the subject. but i think the first version was good. here's the link to it:

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-728850.html

i scanned the actual page. i should've taken a picture of the artwork so that the details would be clearer but i forgot to. aww. anyways, the scanned page is good enough. :)

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Category Miscellaneous » Surrealism
Date Submitted May 6, 2009, 4:13:30 AM
Views 1256
Favorites... 6
Vote Score 6

Comments 13
Media Colored Pencil / Crayon
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Pegasus on June 27, 2009, 6:53:58 AM

Hm, I took a look at both of the pics, and even though they're both amazingly awesome, I do think the second one is better.

Not only the subject is clearer, I think the color/shading is better, and the hands are more realistic. I've always liked surreal art, this is awesome.

luckylace222 on June 18, 2009, 10:06:05 AM

Hmmmm actually I adore this version of Fertility better! The butterflies really add the "nature and growing" part. I think this is much better than the other. xD GOOD WORK! *favs*

Honeyhanvey on June 16, 2009, 12:40:56 AM

Wow, I am absoutly in love with your work now. I like the original but I like the detail in this one more. I love how the hands are reaching up and then the big hands reaching to the rose.

jny016 on June 16, 2009, 8:24:34 AM

thanks :) i took a picture of my hands from my cellphone for the reference of the hands on this one. :p

Tuntun422 on June 3, 2009, 2:52:40 AM

It's marvelous.
Say,if your ever interested I have some new drawings that I posted on to my gallery.Feel free come & take a look & tell me what you think of them. If you want to that is.

jny016 on June 3, 2009, 11:49:07 AM

thank you for the comment and the faves on my artS!!! and now that you said it, i'd love to take a look at your gallery! godbless! :)

Alpha777 on May 29, 2009, 11:20:10 PM

WOW!!! wonderful colours

jny016 on May 30, 2009, 12:04:03 AM

thank you very much! :)

Alpha777 on May 30, 2009, 7:18:20 AM

nope

CRwixey on May 8, 2009, 8:15:53 AM

0_0

And I thought the original one was good...

What's the De La Salle's Malate Literary Folio? It sounds impressive, anyway. Beautiful symmetry, I don't know you managed that. Amazing, again. ^_^

jny016 on May 8, 2009, 3:09:01 PM

thanks christina! :)

hmm. de la salle's malate literary folio is one of the official publications of my school, de la salle university manila. :)

thanks again :)

ShadowMagic on May 6, 2009, 6:45:49 AM

wow i love the colors and the detail ^-^

jny016 on May 8, 2009, 3:07:29 PM

thank you very much!