Critic Contest Entry by mechadragon13

Critic Contest Entry

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*falls over* why did it take me so long to do this? oh right. MY ORIGINAL ONE GOT RAINED ON D:<

so yeah. i sorta half-assed the coloring, cuz i probly wouldn't have been able to post it up tomorrow OR thursday, and i'm not home on friday or the rest the rest of the weekend for that matter. :P

so here's what's goin' on. Inderetta stuck Nocturnals on everyone (well, except newman :P) and set them on Eclipse + Lumi. Inderetta knows that Lumi has a demekarr, and therefore wants to take lumi from eclipse, since he knows that Eclipse will never agree to work for him. yeah, he'll bend the mind of a little kid. so basically, they're cornered. BUT!!! the full moon's risiiiiiing...... >:D

EDIT: RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! i dunno if it's just MY comppuer, but changing it to a jpg file KILLED THE COLORS D:< are the colors dead to anyone else....?

EDIT 2: fixed their eyes and the shading XD hopefully it's better nao.

EDIT 3: OMFG I GOT SECOND PLACE 8O WHEEEEEEEEEE~!

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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted May 19, 2009, 3:35:19 PM
Views 1508
Favorites... 7
Vote Score 4

Comments 38
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken too long
Reference none ^^

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_ren_tao_fan_ on July 7, 2010, 8:42:46 AM

First of all, yes. JPEG is a murderer of innocent pictures.
Second of all, OH. MY GOD. THIS IS AWESOME. And the colors don't look bad at all! I can't even tell you saved it as a JPEG. =)

mechadragon13 on July 8, 2010, 3:32:42 AM

that's cuz i fixed it XD

but wow, this picture is absurdly old. it makes me go eww. XD

_ren_tao_fan_ on July 8, 2010, 11:17:54 PM

Waaa, people always say that when I comment on slightly aged piiiics...
I don't care. I still think it's awesome. -w-

mechadragon13 on July 9, 2010, 4:10:49 AM

heheh, thanks....

Zukoinferno on May 20, 2009, 8:46:08 AM

*dies from the awesomeness and the fact that its in your legendary coloring*

mechadragon13 on May 20, 2009, 9:25:11 AM

oh come ON, this could've TOTALLY been WAY better. this SUCKS compared to the rest of my stuff.

Zukoinferno on May 22, 2009, 11:09:48 AM

Oh, come the f*** ON, girl! That shading is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. plus you got the head the right size (which i can never do).

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 9:59:02 AM

pffah. i could have made it WAYYYYY betterrrrr....

Zukoinferno on May 24, 2009, 11:43:50 AM

thrue, but its still better than mine.

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 11:51:27 AM

gyogogagogwooh!!!! XD that's the sound Giratina makes, apparently XD FINALLY beat platinum....

Zukoinferno on May 25, 2009, 4:42:17 AM

tingginggagagingginggagagiggonging. thats what Regigygas sounds like XDDDD cookies for you :D

mechadragon13 on May 25, 2009, 9:02:26 AM

XD nice. this is dialga (in my opinion) SCREEEEAAAAAH!!! D8<

Zukoinferno on May 26, 2009, 8:29:42 AM

dialga: WOWOWOAAAAA!!! >:C

me: XDDD

mechadragon13 on May 26, 2009, 8:31:19 AM

Me: XDDDDDDDDD nice......

Torterra: RAWRRREEERRROWW!! XD

Zukoinferno on May 27, 2009, 9:05:03 AM

me: im running out of pokemon! D:>

metagross: RORRAAAWAAAAAAR.

mechadragon13 on May 27, 2009, 9:30:26 AM

Me: THERE's ALMOST 500!!!! HOW CAN YOU BE RUNNING OUT?!

Rayquaza: SCREEEERWEEEEARRR!!!!!

Zukoinferno on May 30, 2009, 2:07:57 AM

i havent been playing that much now since i only have two games :P

mewtwo: RURURAWRARARARAAEE!!! >:C *translation: I AM F***ING DAN GREEN!!!*

mechadragon13 on May 30, 2009, 1:54:09 PM

Entei: RAAARAAAR. *NO, I'M F***ING DAN GREEN. I PWNS YOU AAAALL!!*

WhiteLighting681 on May 23, 2009, 6:26:51 AM

NJRDRURFMJUYRYKURKU I'M BAAAACK
Excellent perspective I see har, Mish. And the colors are fine. :3

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 9:59:30 AM

pffah. i saw you back lol. :P i can't type today DX

Falconlobo on May 19, 2009, 11:51:48 AM

very cool^^

mechadragon13 on May 20, 2009, 4:24:24 AM

thanks ^^;

Falconlobo on May 20, 2009, 10:53:29 AM

np

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on May 20, 2009, 7:44:21 AM

RUN AWAY D8< (sorry, I saw BlondeHusky's icon and immediately thought of that for this pic xD)

But anyways, awesome job! The colors are dim, but not horribly dim, I can still see them. It's a dark picture, so you wouldn't have extremely bright colors anyway lol But the lighting from the moon could be a lot brighter (moonlight tends to make things shine more than sunlight, I believe because everything is so dark to begin with!)

Grah, enough with techinical things :3 I smell a Lumi @w@ and evil, smiley Newman =w= All is good here, but it makes me upset that I actually don't know much of the info for the comic xD;; OH WELLS, one day I will. And once again, awesome job 8D

mechadragon13 on May 20, 2009, 8:14:04 AM

yeah, i don't have experience with nighttime settings.... thanks for the tips, though :) i have to fix some things, tho. gotta get to that.

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on May 20, 2009, 9:02:49 AM

Take your time, it's all part of the process of learning ;D

mechadragon13 on May 20, 2009, 9:25:29 AM

i know, right? XD

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 8:47:35 AM

you totally copied and pasted that moon :P

I like this entry! :D NOW SEND ME THE LINK ON "CONDEMNED CONTEST" DAMNIT!!

no one does... :C

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 11:13:58 AM

not copy-paste, brush! use your resources! D:

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 11:16:53 AM

faaaaaaaaaiiiiiiaaaannnn.

(fine)

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 11:17:40 AM

whoops! Forgot! The eyes themselves become black because of Nocturnal (inversed colors)

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 11:29:29 AM

DANGIT!!! umm..... i might be able to fix it later..... *facepalm* i didnt have much time to work on this at ALL...... my parents keep giving me less and less computer time......

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 12:56:14 PM

:C

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 1:51:56 PM

it's why i'm tapping so often and posting less stuff.....

ShadzGirl on May 19, 2009, 8:42:58 AM

Dun-dun-dun-dddddddddduuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnXD
This one is definitely my favoriteX3

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 11:15:18 AM

aww, thanks ^^

BlondeHusky on May 19, 2009, 10:52:13 AM

thats awesome! :D

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 11:14:20 AM

thanks ^^