A boy
A boy
A boy by punkaddict
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JamesJrz_Tribe on June 11, 2005, 1:38:51 AM
JamesJrz_Tribe on June 11, 2005, 1:38:51 AM
It seems like you have a good handle on the software you are using, I'm still trying to render things like this (I stink at photo-realism)^^; While it is off to a good start there are some issues with the picture that could be fixed very easily if you are willing to go back and work on it. ***Constructive crit ahead*** First, The whole picture should have darker dark areas and lighter light areas. This will help the bone structure (which you have already lightly defined) pop more and make it more dimensional. Some areas that need to be "pushed in" with darker tones the most are the eye sockets, under the lips, and the creases alongside of their noses. I would re-work their eyes a lot, they are very cartoony for such a realistic piece and seem a little crooked (more on the little boys face). This may be just me, but their hairlines look very high as well....
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JamesJrz_Tribe on June 11, 2005, 1:38:50 AM
It seems like you have a good handle on the software you are using, I'm still trying to render things like this (I stink at photo-realism)^^; While it is off to a good start there are some issues with the picture that could be fixed very easily if you are willing to go back and work on it. ***Constructive crit ahead*** First, The whole picture should have darker dark areas and lighter light areas. This will help the bone structure (which you have already lightly defined) pop more and make it more dimensional. Some areas that need to be "pushed in" with darker tones the most are the eye sockets, under the lips, and the creases alongside of their noses. I would re-work their eyes a lot, they are very cartoony for such a realistic piece and seem a little crooked (more on the little boys face). This may be just me, but their hairlines look very high as well....
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JamesJrz_Tribe on June 11, 2005, 1:38:49 AM
It seems like you have a good handle on the software you are using, I'm still trying to render things like this (I stink at photo-realism)^^; While it is off to a good start there are some issues with the picture that could be fixed very easily if you are willing to go back and work on it. ***Constructive crit ahead*** First, The whole picture should have darker dark areas and lighter light areas. This will help the bone structure (which you have already lightly defined) pop more and make it more dimensional. Some areas that need to be "pushed in" with darker tones the most are the eye sockets, under the lips, and the creases alongside of their noses. I would re-work their eyes a lot, they are very cartoony for such a realistic piece and seem a little crooked (more on the little boys face). This may be just me, but their hairlines look very high as well....
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JamesJrz_Tribe on June 11, 2005, 1:38:49 AM
It seems like you have a good handle on the software you are using, I'm still trying to render things like this (I stink at photo-realism)^^; While it is off to a good start there are some issues with the picture that could be fixed very easily if you are willing to go back and work on it. ***Constructive crit ahead*** First, The whole picture should have darker dark areas and lighter light areas. This will help the bone structure (which you have already lightly defined) pop more and make it more dimensional. Some areas that need to be "pushed in" with darker tones the most are the eye sockets, under the lips, and the creases alongside of their noses. I would re-work their eyes a lot, they are very cartoony for such a realistic piece and seem a little crooked (more on the little boys face). This may be just me, but their hairlines look very high as well....
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JamesJrz_Tribe on June 11, 2005, 1:38:49 AM
It seems like you have a good handle on the software you are using, I'm still trying to render things like this (I stink at photo-realism)^^; While it is off to a good start there are some issues with the picture that could be fixed very easily if you are willing to go back and work on it. ***Constructive crit ahead*** First, The whole picture should have darker dark areas and lighter light areas. This will help the bone structure (which you have already lightly defined) pop more and make it more dimensional. Some areas that need to be "pushed in" with darker tones the most are the eye sockets, under the lips, and the creases alongside of their noses. I would re-work their eyes a lot, they are very cartoony for such a realistic piece and seem a little crooked (more on the little boys face). This may be just me, but their hairlines look very high as well....
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JamesJrz_Tribe on June 11, 2005, 1:38:48 AM
It seems like you have a good handle on the software you are using, I'm still trying to render things like this (I stink at photo-realism)^^; While it is off to a good start there are some issues with the picture that could be fixed very easily if you are willing to go back and work on it. ***Constructive crit ahead*** First, The whole picture should have darker dark areas and lighter light areas. This will help the bone structure (which you have already lightly defined) pop more and make it more dimensional. Some areas that need to be "pushed in" with darker tones the most are the eye sockets, under the lips, and the creases alongside of their noses. I would re-work their eyes a lot, they are very cartoony for such a realistic piece and seem a little crooked (more on the little boys face). This may be just me, but their hairlines look very high as well....
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ronin on May 8, 2005, 4:11:24 PM
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dead_artist on April 14, 2005, 12:35:18 PM
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Overall on this picture (or the next one you try) you should consider "tightening it up" by defining areas with sharper lines.....not SOLID lines, but just a little bolder and darker.
If this is not an overlay over a photo, I think you have a good skill at realism ^__^ you just need to tweak it some more and you could be a pro eventually~ nvm check mine out 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!