spirit of water- my style

done with a mix of watercolour and acrylic paint. Okay, i no this looks rubbish, but i did paint it, which is my 3rd attempt of painting ppl like this, and i had to scale it down so much cause the evil scanner makes the files bigger than its memory when it scans on!! *glares at scanner* comments aprechated, and please tell me how i can improve if u can, most of the time i give comments like that, i and dont just want "OMG, this is so good" or "this is so crap", tell me why and how i can improve, otherwise i cant get any better like some of the artists on here. Thanks, c ya! ^-^