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The Birthpains

Trouble is on the horizon.

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Chapter 1 - The Birthpains
Submitted: February 23, 2006 • Updated: February 23, 2006
Word count: 655 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 253

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Trinity_Fire on February 26, 2006, 6:45:57 AM

Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Trinity_FireThis one is lovely... I adore the way it goes, and how you can tell a story through a piece like this...
I love the way you posed a lot of it in questions, it's really beautiful and thoughtful that way! Amazingly deep and full of expression... Lovely...
Beautiful~!