The Serpent and the Dove
Submitted February 23, 2006 Updated February 23, 2006 Status Incomplete | The Serpent is Wise, the Dove is Innocent. Two Prophets to usher in the new world...are completely different beings, yet completely the same.
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Chapter 1 - The Serpent and the Dove
Submitted: February 23, 2006 • Updated: February 23, 2006
Word count: 1745 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 305
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Dragon_Buster on March 30, 2007, 6:33:00 PM
Dragon_Buster on (Chapter: 1)
Trinity_Fire on February 26, 2006, 6:40:02 AM
Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Ohh, this is just so amazing. Like a poem, but it's got so much detail and it's not restricted by a format or stanzas.
I might not be christian, but I do love the sound of many christian words and the religion- I in no way am against it, I simply don't practice it.
Words like requiem and sabbath and such, i adore them... makes the piece so interesting and beautiful, not like some other religious pieces.
I also adore how you've made the serpent a thing of beauty and wisdom, not of evil like is often seen...
And making the Serpent like the sun and the dove like the moon... a very lovely touch, and beautiful....
I adore this piece! +favs! Absolutely amazing. :)
I might not be christian, but I do love the sound of many christian words and the religion- I in no way am against it, I simply don't practice it.
Words like requiem and sabbath and such, i adore them... makes the piece so interesting and beautiful, not like some other religious pieces.
I also adore how you've made the serpent a thing of beauty and wisdom, not of evil like is often seen...
And making the Serpent like the sun and the dove like the moon... a very lovely touch, and beautiful....
I adore this piece! +favs! Absolutely amazing. :)
Overall, good job. *favs*