You Never See The Most Obvious Things
Submitted October 6, 2004 Updated August 13, 2005 Status Incomplete | Something has been irritating Zoro. What irritates him more is that he can't figure out what it is. And as if he's not having enough trouble, Luffy is just making things worse. (ZoroxLuffy)
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Beware A Bored Captain
Submitted: October 6, 2004 • Updated: October 6, 2004
Word count: 1991 • Size: 10k • Comments: 8 • views: 736
Chapter 2 - Still Irritated
Submitted: May 22, 2005 • Updated: May 22, 2005
Word count: 2175 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 470
Chapter 3 - Meat
Submitted: May 25, 2005 • Updated: May 25, 2005
Word count: 1279 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 450
Chapter 4 - Ask Dr.Chopper
Submitted: June 2, 2005 • Updated: June 2, 2005
Word count: 4016 • Size: 20k • Comments: 5 • views: 463
Chapter 5 - Sexual Frustration
Submitted: June 16, 2005 • Updated: June 16, 2005
Word count: 1470 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 462
Chapter 6 - Zoros Weakness
Submitted: June 21, 2005 • Updated: June 21, 2005
Word count: 1920 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 664
Chapter 7 - Dont Trust A Redhead
Submitted: June 21, 2005 • Updated: June 21, 2005
Word count: 2076 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 511
Chapter 8 - Competition and a Persuasive Reindeer
Submitted: July 26, 2005 • Updated: July 26, 2005
Word count: 1842 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 472
Chapter 9 - Damn Women and Their Games
Submitted: July 30, 2005 • Updated: July 30, 2005
Word count: 2556 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 419
Chapter 10 - Food Poisoning
Submitted: August 2, 2005 • Updated: August 2, 2005
Word count: 2344 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 489
Chapter 11 - Fear The Birdle
Submitted: August 3, 2005 • Updated: August 3, 2005
Word count: 2399 • Size: 12k • Comments: 6 • views: 666
Chapter 12 - She Knows a Lot of Things
Submitted: August 9, 2005 • Updated: August 9, 2005
Word count: 1369 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 624
Chapter 13 - A Thief's Confession
Submitted: August 11, 2005 • Updated: August 11, 2005
Word count: 2879 • Size: 14k • Comments: 6 • views: 442
Chapter 14 - Without Words
Submitted: August 13, 2005 • Updated: August 13, 2005
Word count: 3530 • Size: 18k • Comments: 5 • views: 505
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loppy_mad_rocker on December 21, 2006, 4:52:14 AM
loppy_mad_rocker on (Chapter: index)
loppy_mad_rocker on July 2, 2006, 1:47:08 AM
loppy_mad_rocker on (Chapter: 11)
arrrr that turtle-bird thingLETS HAVE SOME BURDLE STEW!!!
*sob* so close zolo
MandyLovsDaPeoples on June 6, 2006, 2:55:40 AM
MandyLovsDaPeoples on (Chapter: index)
please put more?YaioAnime on May 26, 2006, 1:05:52 AM
YaioAnime on (Chapter: 13)
Love this story and love Zolo and Luffy what more could anybody wantKichigaiNeko-Chan on January 16, 2006, 10:19:08 AM
KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 14)
-falls back- FINALLY!The anticapation was like TORTURE!
But youz did it!
And im SOOO glad!
~KNC
Im...so HAPPYY~~!! T____T
KichigaiNeko-Chan on January 16, 2006, 9:26:24 AM
KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 11)
-falls out of her chair-Damn...that, that...THING!
-twitches-
POR QUUUEEEEE?!?!!!!
~KNC
so close....SO close...
-twitch-
KichigaiNeko-Chan on January 16, 2006, 8:04:15 AM
KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 3)
-snort- haha! i love this! Its short but cute!
~KNC
-points randomly- Onwards! to the next Chapptah! -walks off towards the wrong direction-
KichigaiNeko-Chan on January 16, 2006, 7:53:43 AM
KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 4)
Whheeeeeeeeee! Sexual fustration rawks! Its so fun!For the readers i mean, but for poor Zoro it must be...frustrating!
~KNC
WOO!
YamiTenshi on December 11, 2005, 6:08:50 AM
YamiTenshi on (Chapter: 8)
This is the first time I've seen a kinda Luffy/Nami pairing. I've thought about writing one but I don't know what to write... Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 4:30:23 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 14)
YES!!!! Oh man, it's about time this happened!!! Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 4:18:56 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 13)
GAH!!!! HE WAS SO CLOSE!!!!well, at least Nami's being a little nicer, right?
Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 4:10:44 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 12)
WOOT!! NOW HE SHALL NOT WORRY ABOUT THEIR FRIENDSHIP ENDING AND ALL THAT WHEN HE TELLS LUFFY!!he WILL tell him, right?
Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 4:06:48 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 11)
DAMN THE BIRD-THING!!!!! they were sooo close!!
To the next chapter!
Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:55:07 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 10)
Awww, that was a fun chapter. ^_^Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:37:36 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 8)
Nah, Chopper was great in this chapter. He's both the doctor and the matchmaker of the crew. ^^Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:22:48 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 6)
Heh, I couldn't keep from laughing either during that last part. I_I Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:11:09 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 5)
ME WANTS THE CANDY!!!!!Chibichan on November 26, 2005, 3:05:41 PM
Chibichan on (Chapter: 4)
Awwww, Chopper was uber cute here! ^^wolfgirl98 on November 5, 2005, 4:35:42 AM
wolfgirl98 on (Chapter: 3)
awwwwwwwwwwwww that is soo cute dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko on October 6, 2005, 11:32:17 AM
dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko on (Chapter: 5)
Candy candy candy!-Begs- Yesh, this is sooo awesome, after a while of careful thinking, Luffy and Zolo would be cute together, but I still like the ZoloxSanji pairing-shruggs- Who knows, maybe it'll changeKrimtheCeruleanAzure on August 19, 2005, 12:26:47 AM
KrimtheCeruleanAzure on (Chapter: 13)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Clense the world of all women. I have no idea why I find that funny. God this story is so cool!Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 17, 2005, 3:58:50 PM
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 14)
Nya!!! Bunny wuvd it!!! You should do a short sequel with a lemon scene!!! Nya-ha!!shamenteen on August 14, 2005, 1:10:22 PM
shamenteen on (Chapter: 14)
Yay!! *cheers*Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 13, 2005, 1:45:25 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 14)
WHAAA!! KISSY KISSYY!! *squeal* And you are so welcome!! This story was so fricking awesome! Epilouge, or sequel pleeeease?????? *big chibi eyes*Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 13, 2005, 1:38:55 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 13)
Awww, poor Zoro... BE STRONG MY GREEN-HAIRED BUDDY!!!!Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 13, 2005, 1:34:40 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 12)
Robin, you rawk. Keep the great story running! *pumps fist*Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 13, 2005, 1:34:34 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 12)
Robin, you rawk. Keep the great story running! *pumps fist*shamenteen on August 11, 2005, 5:06:04 PM
shamenteen on (Chapter: 13)
More! You must write more! I want to know what Zoro is planing on doing! Write, for the love of god and all that is un-holly, write more!!!Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 11, 2005, 10:11:23 AM
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 13)
AHHHHH!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR ZOLO TO TELLLLLLLL!!!!!!shamenteen on August 10, 2005, 3:05:11 PM
shamenteen on (Chapter: 12)
Good to see you writting! It WAS painfully short! Oh well, makes a good teaser of what should happan right? Hope you update soon!!!Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:48:04 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 11)
That WAS a fluffy kitten! ^w^ That birdle will be haunting my dreams tonight though.... *shudder* I have the urge to draw teh birdle now.Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:39:50 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 10)
OO!! Me!! Pick me!! I like kittems!! Awesome story! Kepp up the great work!!Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:34:10 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 9)
DAMN YOU NAMI!!! I HATE YOU!!!! Go Zoro-nii-san!!!! Kick her @$$!! And oooo....kisses *makes grabbing motion for bag*Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:29:42 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 8)
Awww. Choppeh-kun..... you're so sweet! *huggles*Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 4, 2005, 8:26:41 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 7)
NAMI YOU dog!! GIVE ZORO LUFFY!!! *fume* schmalt....I like that word....schmalt... ^w^Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 4, 2005, 1:36:09 AM
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 11)
NYAAAAAA!!! Zolo and Luffy!!! C'mon, KISS!!!!!!shamenteen on August 3, 2005, 11:08:57 AM
shamenteen on (Chapter: 11)
I have a craving for turtle soup and chicken pot pie right now....dam bird-thing. I'll kill it! Anyways, good chap and I hope your next update will be soon!!! (So close Zoro, but so far)shamenteen on August 2, 2005, 5:22:36 PM
shamenteen on (Chapter: 10)
This was a really good chapter to the fic! Finally, some zoro and Luffy bonding! Sugestions? Hmmm, why don't you....put in a evil talking bunny that is a pirate who comes in in search of another guy who has a bounty o his head, and Zoro and Luffy get cought in the crossfire. Wait, make it a evil, talking, pink bunny, I hate pink. That would be really random and funny! ^.^ *favs* Anyway, hope you update soon!!!Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on August 1, 2005, 4:51:59 AM
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 9)
Mooooore please!!! I loooooove Luffy/Zolo!!!!!!!!!shamenteen on July 30, 2005, 8:57:49 AM
shamenteen on (Chapter: 9)
*puppy dog eyes* Can you write more soon please? I really like the story. Go Zoro! Don't let the girl win!shamenteen on July 27, 2005, 11:50:34 AM
shamenteen on (Chapter: 8)
Write more! I really like this story so I'm going to nag you once a week till you write more...well, atleast nag you once in a while. Hope you update soon! *favs*Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on July 27, 2005, 7:25:02 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 6)
Still an awesome story!! I love it! Ish so funny! ^^the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on July 12, 2005, 8:36:27 AM
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 7)
i have read it all at fanfictionAngie-chan on June 22, 2005, 9:39:32 PM
Angie-chan on (Chapter: 6)
Sorry! I don't know why, but none of the chapters are showing up. Or at least it's that way on my computer... I hope I don't have tp re-post. I tried replacing the chappies, but it doesn't seem to be working.Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on June 21, 2005, 10:32:43 PM
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 1)
Your last two chapters aren't showing up, can you re-submit them?!Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on June 17, 2005, 7:33:12 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 5)
CANDY!!! WH00T!!! whaa!!! Hee hee...sqeaky knees...I wanna see the squeaky knees!! >.the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on June 16, 2005, 8:16:21 AM
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 5)
WOOT CADDAY (snaches the canday) here we go oooooooooowwwwwwwwww' this on says man loveuing whoot !!!! next chap pleaseDorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on June 7, 2005, 5:35:28 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 4)
OH! OH! HE ADMITS IT!!! GO ZORO! oh, I'm working on a ZxL pic, just gotta finish coloring it!! ^^the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on June 2, 2005, 6:27:02 AM
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 4)
thats it WAH!!!!!!!Kiku:NO!!
stefen:WOW!!!kiku i didn't know you actully cared about other things but me !!! espaclly sweet lovey yoai story(tears come down stefens cheaks) it is ...just so..... CUTE!!!!!
kiku: YAH well don't read to much into it ok ..it's...just..a..good..story thats all.(truns around and wipes a tear from his eye).
stefen: AWWW it is ok kiku,i am sure angie will add more to the story ,ok kiku my love!!!
kiku:ok .. i guess
stefen:HOW ABOUT A BLOW JOB TO MAKE IT BETTER
kiku:save your energy 4 tonight!!
stefen:OK!!
me:IT IS NOT FAIR!!! the story iss no more ,next chapter!!! PLEASE!!!
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on June 2, 2005, 2:27:38 AM
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 4)
NYAAAAAAAAAAA MORE MORE MORE!!! And check out my Z/L pics!!the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on May 26, 2005, 11:25:01 AM
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 3)
awwwwww thAT is cote(cute)!!!! write more
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on May 26, 2005, 5:58:17 AM
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 3)
awwwww....Luffy-San's so sweet!! I kep meaning to do a ZoroxLuffy drawing.... I will eventually, and when I put it up, You'll know!Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on May 22, 2005, 8:07:57 AM
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on (Chapter: 1)
I've always wanted to read a Z/L Yaoi or see a pic like that!!! THANX!!the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on May 22, 2005, 5:48:19 AM
the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on (Chapter: 2)
hey whats with the cut off more were is the rest WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!WERE DOES THE STORY GO WE WANT TO KNOW!!!!Anime_Crazy_K-chan on May 14, 2005, 5:27:58 AM
Anime_Crazy_K-chan on (Chapter: 1)
That was SO awesome! I'm lovin' it! Jasmine: Zoro's cute x3
Um.. ok. Thanks Jasmine. Anyway, write more!!
“One day, I’m going to stab that woman…” He thought angrily. “Stab her in the face.”
He smiled to himself as he thought about stabbing Nami in the face… repeatedly.
IceQueen29 on March 25, 2005, 1:20:45 PM
IceQueen29 on (Chapter: 1)
Please keep writing. Its very good so far._sephiroth on October 19, 2004, 12:43:01 AM
_sephiroth on (Chapter: 1)
I want mooorreee.. it's just soo good.. I already love it ^^ +favsMizDoom on October 10, 2004, 8:56:40 AM
MizDoom on (Chapter: 1)
weres the sex!! u suck, i mean u suck HARD!!! LOL but the story was cute..i likey!!....but it would be better with some loving!! huh!! DragonicFlames on October 7, 2004, 6:39:56 AM
DragonicFlames on (Chapter: 1)
O.o; ZoroxLuffy????? well now I didn't see that coming. x-x;StrikeClaw on October 6, 2004, 8:27:34 PM
StrikeClaw on (Chapter: 1)
........more? ..More? ?_?
More to read pleasc?
Its very good.
I want to know what happens next.
ples
its sooooooooooooooooo great