The Eye Of Shadow

Home » Aquamancer » Stories » The Eye Of Shadow

The Eye Of Shadow

Author
Aquamancer

Submitted
July 18, 2004
Updated
July 18, 2004
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 9k
Words: 1,749
Comments: 3
Views: 518
Faves...: 0
Rating: 0

Please i would love some feedback on this =)

Read this story >>

Category: Fantasy » Misc. Fantasy

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Submitted: July 18, 2004 • Updated: July 18, 2004
Word count: 1749 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 195

Comments

Comments (3)

You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment

Honjetan on September 28, 2005, 12:51:06 PM

Honjetan on September 28, 2005, 12:51:06 PM (Chapter: 1)

Not bad dude, not bad! In fact I enjoyed it. Lucky for me, I don't like saying things like this 'OMRF! I LOVE IT! FAVS'. They creep me out. Anyways, I'm looking foward to your 2nd chapter.

Aquamancer on November 30, 2004, 7:49:01 AM

Aquamancer on November 30, 2004, 7:49:01 AM (Chapter: 1)

ok, paragraphed it and spell cheked it *phew* O_o

Watchful_Sphinx on November 25, 2004, 12:35:22 PM

Watchful_Sphinx on November 25, 2004, 12:35:22 PM (Chapter: 1)

It sound good so far. Though I would consider using paragraph form to make it easier to read. But thats I like to write.