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Chapter 2 - Seize the Dei(dara)

I know there's probably about a million stories like this on the internet, but...
Anyway, please read and comment!!!! ^^

Chapter 2 - Seize the Dei(dara)

Chapter 2 - Seize the Dei(dara)
Deidara slowly opened his big, blue eyes as he awoke to a loud ringing noise. "Un...?" He rubbed his eyes and sat up in his bed. "Un..."
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"Un!!!" Deidara said loudly as he sat down next to Konan.
"What are you so happy about?" She asked.
Deidara smiled. "Eh, just got over my artist's block is all, un. I though it would never end, un. You wanna see?"
Konan shrugged. "Sure."
Deidara pulled a sketchbook out of his bag, and flipped to a dog-eared page. "See how I drew a bird on this page? It's totally misshapen, and it's eyes are to complicated, too detailed, un." He turned the page. "But here, it's head and body are just the right size, and the lines aren't so crooked, un. And the eyes are so simple, just little circles, un. Giving it that cute, stupid kinda look."
"Huh...."
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Deidara sat down in the back of the classroom, taking out his sketchbook once again.
I'll draw something real fine, un!!! It will be fantastic, un!!! Cool, modern, un!!! It'll just pop! out at you!!!! Un, yeah!!!

He took out a ballpoint pen and drew himself, in solid, crisp lines. Un!!! Now, to color myself in, un!!!
After coloring in the black parts of his drawing, the unexpected took place, un. Splat!!! The ink shot out, making messing blots on his paper. Un?! Un!!! I know, un!!!! He patiently waited a good 15 minutes or so for the ink to dry, then pulled a light blue pen out of his pocket. Un, this'll be unbelievable!!! He thought, drawing lines mimicing those of the ink blots, but slightly bigger. Needs more, un... He drew wide, expanding lines extending from the blue blots, yet, they were not connected. Un... More white, un... Definately more white!!! He took out a bottle of liquid white-out from his bag, then carefully wrote "BANG" on the black blots. Hm... Not quite done, un... Deidara colored in his eye and the cloud on his cloak. Perfect!!! Un!!!


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"Tobi, check this out, un!!! Look!!!" Deidara ran down the hallway.
"Sempai?"
"Look at this masterpiece, look at it, un!!! My new style!!!!!! Un!!!!"
Tobi gasped. "Oh, it's awesome, Deidara-sempai!!! It's, um... Pop-art!!! That's what it is!!!"
"Pfft!!! Pop-art?! My style is super-flat!!! Un!!!"
"Um, yeah!!! Super-flat!!!"
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Deidara sighed as he walked up the stairs to his room. "Well, today was pretty good, un..."
He took out his sketchbook and pulled the picture he drew earlier out, then picked up a tack off of his desk. My little masterpiece, un!!! I shall call you... "Seize the Dei(dara)!!"
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Author's note: I'm sorry the individual characters chapters are kinda short, I'm a very busy person and I don't have a lot of imagination. If you have an idea for my story or some tips to help with my writing skills, please tell me; I would really appreciate it. And I'd like to thank you all for your support, with your comments and favoriting this story. Love ya!!! ^_^

ATTENTION!!!!!!! I'm having trouble deciding who should fight in the next chapter, so please make a vote!!!!!!

Sasori vs. Sakura Haruno
Hidan vs. Shikamaru Nara
Kakuzu vs. Naruto Uzumaki or Kakashi Hatake
Itachi Uchiha vs. Sasuke Uchiha
Kisame vs. Suigetsu

One vote per person, please!!!! Also, if you are voting for [Kakuzu vs. Naruto Uzumaki or Kakashi Hatake], please say if you would like Kakuzu to fight Naruto or Kakashi in your vote.

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TTfan1 on June 19, 2008, 4:41:46 AM

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TTfan1I think Itachi should call Sasuke out on being gay.

(I would laugh SO hard. Then email it out. :D)

I have a lot of imagination, so just ask.
(I could plan it out now, as long as you don't mind my using the phrase "booze-fueled roll in the hay".)

ShadowsGirl101 on April 1, 2008, 6:07:39 AM

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ShadowsGirl101Sasori should beat up Sakura! since she's such a wimp she'd lose...

NightWing101 on December 3, 2007, 9:58:39 AM

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NightWing101Sasori vs. Sakura Haruno
thats what I think.

BadgerofPancakes on December 8, 2007, 8:42:41 AM

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BadgerofPancakesHidan vs. Shika is winning, sorry. However, I might do a Sasori vs. Sakura chapter sometime.

digimonlover06 on November 2, 2007, 6:12:45 AM

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digimonlover06Hidan vs. Shikamaru Nara Fighting...

BadgerofPancakes on November 2, 2007, 5:04:26 PM

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BadgerofPancakesSo your making a vote? ^^'

digimonlover06 on November 18, 2007, 1:43:52 AM

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digimonlover06Are you almost done with the next chapter?

BadgerofPancakes on November 21, 2007, 11:11:11 AM

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BadgerofPancakesNo, and far from it. TT_TT Still trying to think of how Hidan and Shika meet and how they end up fighting. Forgive me...

Lanayru on November 26, 2007, 5:44:05 AM

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LanayruI know!!! I know!! That's a simple answer! Hidan's walkin' through the halls and Shika 'accidently' bumps into Hidan. then, Hidan gets all overreacted and P.Oed. Shika tries to apologize but Hidan starts bullying him and they end their conflict in one dramatic battle!

BadgerofPancakes on November 30, 2007, 10:27:41 AM

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BadgerofPancakes*just thought of the exact same thing 20 seconds before seeing this comment* Yeah!!! I'll do that!!! :D

Lanayru on December 4, 2007, 9:56:40 AM

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LanayruYay! :D
U must be pisykick! :O (my word for psycic^^)

BadgerofPancakes on December 8, 2007, 8:40:44 AM

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BadgerofPancakes*tries to use pisykick powers* Nope, nothing going on in there. *points to head*

digimonlover06 on November 22, 2007, 10:54:39 AM

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digimonlover06Damit.... Want me to help u on that?

digimonlover06 on November 9, 2007, 5:32:42 AM

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digimonlover06yes!

BadgerofPancakes on November 11, 2007, 2:27:24 PM

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BadgerofPancakesOkay. ^^

cashmoneyUknowit on October 19, 2007, 5:57:34 AM

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cashmoneyUknowityeah, i draw in class a lot too.GO DEIDARA!!!

as for da vote, i say hidan vs shikamaru!THAT will be a sight to see!!! XD

Lanayru on October 21, 2007, 6:47:04 AM

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Lanayruthat would be a sight to see! O.o
I guess something else funny would be Kakuzu selling drugs or sumting in the hallways... Or a school project which everyone has sumthin diffefrent. (example) Sasori's project had an act out with puppets. Deidara drew out his project. Zetsu ate his project, kakuzu sold his... ect. yeah.

BadgerofPancakes on October 26, 2007, 6:02:51 AM

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BadgerofPancakesI'll put that in, then!!! ^^ Expect it the next chapter.
Also, is your vote for Hidan vs. Shikamaru?

Lanayru on October 27, 2007, 9:24:38 AM

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Lanayruyes. I'd very much like to see that.^^

BadgerofPancakes on October 27, 2007, 12:35:29 PM

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BadgerofPancakesOkay. ^^

rainbowfox16 on November 2, 2007, 7:44:34 AM

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rainbowfox16...Hidan? Whos that? I don't think I've heard of him...*feeling stupid* .....

BadgerofPancakes on November 2, 2007, 5:06:30 PM

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BadgerofPancakesHe's a guy who walks around with his cloak half open and has silver hair that's been slicked back. Carries a scythe and he's immortal. Has foul language and obsessed with his religion, called Jashinism.

BadgerofPancakes on October 20, 2007, 5:20:29 AM

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BadgerofPancakesYour vote has been added!!! :)

Arenelle on October 18, 2007, 2:18:31 PM

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ArenelleCan we haf Sasori n Deida for art-arguments?

BadgerofPancakes on October 20, 2007, 5:20:10 AM

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BadgerofPancakesYeah, I'll be sure to put those in. ^^

rffraff05 on October 17, 2007, 11:45:06 AM

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rffraff05nice! liked how you imcorporated pictures!

BadgerofPancakes on October 18, 2007, 5:37:48 AM

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BadgerofPancakesThank you!!! ^^

digimonlover06 on October 17, 2007, 5:10:50 AM

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digimonlover06Keep updating!!!

BadgerofPancakes on October 18, 2007, 5:37:34 AM

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BadgerofPancakesOkay and thanks for the comment!!! ^^