Understand

Submitted
March 29, 2007
Updated
March 29, 2007
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Chapters: 1
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This is a small poem I wrote for something that occured, please give me your comments on it and let me know what you think about it :)

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Chapter 0 - Understand
Submitted: March 29, 2007 • Updated: March 29, 2007
Word count: 73 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 74

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Blizard66 on March 29, 2007, 2:11:20 AM

Blizard66 on March 29, 2007, 2:11:20 AM (Chapter: index)

Eager to say the forbidden words
3 words to cry out
hoping you will understand
the frustration, the self-hatred
the endless conflict, with myself.
Wishing it never happened
hoping it will go away
understanding that it wonât...
The consequences I understand
the stupidity in my mind
making me say the forbidden

I... love... you...

Killing my mind the moment I cried out
The feelings taking over
Hoping youâd understandâ¦

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p.s im doing this in a comment cuz it sucks to read a poem in the way that you see above :P