Dead Passion

Submitted
August 27, 2004
Updated
August 27, 2004
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 0k
Words: 86
Comments: 10
Views: 1,417
Faves...: 5
Rating: 0

My 2nd poem!!!READ THIS NOW!!!

Category: Anime/Manga

Chapters

Chapter 1 - DP
Submitted: August 27, 2004 • Updated: August 27, 2004
Word count: 86 • Size: <1k • Comments: 10 • views: 256

Comments (10)

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mitsukichan on August 30, 2005, 11:24:15 PM (Chapter: 1)

i really like it

LizzardQueeng on July 7, 2005, 11:20:08 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow! I can't believe I haven't left a comment already.... This ith Awethom!! Nice and deeeeeep...

BlizzardComics on May 9, 2005, 11:51:20 AM (Chapter: 1)

I agree-Always was way better.

I actually hate this poem.It's boring-not deep enough.>.<
*shoots poem*

ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:52:49 AM (Chapter: 1)

sorry to say it but "Always" was better but it was still terrific compared to anything i could do....i meen the only thing i can do is drawl......

strawberry_kissez on March 11, 2005, 7:59:23 AM (Chapter: 1)

yay good poem! ~adds to favs~

Enjeru on November 12, 2004, 2:46:07 PM (Chapter: 1)

AGAIN! You've stole my heart! Really ya'll have! *Falls over dead*
MUFFIN: YAY! I'm FREE!!
ME: NO UR NOT!!!!!
MUFFIN: Damn!

blue_dragon35 on October 16, 2004, 12:23:03 PM (Chapter: 1)

oh,and sock_eater 2!^^

blue_dragon35 on October 16, 2004, 12:22:39 PM (Chapter: 1)

neat!this is really cool!u and Yin-Yang15 r mah fave authors!i heart u guyz!!!!!!!!!!

BloodySunAngel on September 1, 2004, 4:25:41 PM (Chapter: 1)

Well, to give you the cold hard truth i think Always was better, but this was better than i could do....

jealousy consumes me... *glare*

Yin-Yang15 on August 29, 2004, 12:02:38 PM (Chapter: 1)

Awesome!^_^ I'll advertise all of your poems k?