Always
Submitted September 1, 2004 Updated September 1, 2004 Status Incomplete | THE BEST POEM I EVER WROTE!!!******READ ASAP!
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Chapter 1 - A
Submitted: September 1, 2004 • Updated: September 1, 2004
Word count: 159 • Size: <1k • Comments: 22 • views: 566
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Live_Like_You_Mean_It on January 12, 2006, 5:15:15 PM
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Living_Dead_Girl on November 20, 2005, 4:45:20 AM
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minerva28 on August 27, 2005, 8:24:37 PM
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nice poem!
Like thr ryhm
I write poems like that too!
Hmm.. but if u really wanna twist a persons imagination u shud use words that can be felt,seen,smell and etc. that way a person cud really picture ur poem out.Like love for example ur just reading it nothing really pops out of a persons brain ^^
My english teacher made us attend a 3 day seminar on how to write a poem. That was the main idea i think during the seminar ever since then i did really improve ^^ sure he commented my poems in a nasty way but it sure helped me realize my mistakes.
hoped it help!
Oh and please use stanzas ^^ please and thank u ^^
Like thr ryhm
I write poems like that too!
Hmm.. but if u really wanna twist a persons imagination u shud use words that can be felt,seen,smell and etc. that way a person cud really picture ur poem out.Like love for example ur just reading it nothing really pops out of a persons brain ^^
My english teacher made us attend a 3 day seminar on how to write a poem. That was the main idea i think during the seminar ever since then i did really improve ^^ sure he commented my poems in a nasty way but it sure helped me realize my mistakes.
hoped it help!
Oh and please use stanzas ^^ please and thank u ^^
_Sai_ on August 25, 2005, 9:56:02 PM
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soalone1000 on August 19, 2005, 6:30:14 AM
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Genjo_Shyazo on July 30, 2005, 5:30:14 PM
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LizzardQueeng on July 7, 2005, 11:33:43 PM
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aquajogger on June 30, 2005, 1:28:51 PM
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Very cute. ^_^
I'm not flaming you, but there are a couple lines where the rythym gets a bit thrown off. Umm... "That you'll be better than me", "But all I can do is sleep", and "I hope you're glad".
It's really nothing big, and I know that not all of the lines are the same length, I just thought I'd point those out.
I like it, though. It's sweet, in a sad way. Very nice work! d^_^b
I'm not flaming you, but there are a couple lines where the rythym gets a bit thrown off. Umm... "That you'll be better than me", "But all I can do is sleep", and "I hope you're glad".
It's really nothing big, and I know that not all of the lines are the same length, I just thought I'd point those out.
I like it, though. It's sweet, in a sad way. Very nice work! d^_^b
Hyper_Freak on May 17, 2005, 6:11:31 AM
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BlizzardComics on May 9, 2005, 11:45:59 AM
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87mazy on April 25, 2005, 1:48:56 AM
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wolf_alchemist on April 23, 2005, 5:22:55 AM
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ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:25:41 AM
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Rikus_Lover_MINE on February 25, 2005, 11:39:34 AM
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blue_dragon35 on October 16, 2004, 12:20:33 PM
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xXxYINGYANGxXx on October 8, 2004, 3:57:45 AM
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ladykagome on September 6, 2004, 10:03:17 PM
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Inu-Tasha on September 2, 2004, 6:57:23 AM
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neko_chan123 on September 2, 2004, 5:42:58 AM
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sunflower_hedgehog on September 1, 2004, 8:49:48 PM
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BloodySunAngel on September 1, 2004, 4:24:09 PM
BloodySunAngel on (Chapter: 1)
Make the lines of your poem seperate to each other, and then I'll marvel at your work ;)
(if you don't understand, e.g.
You give me reasons to cry,
Bit you always make me smile,
You tell me I should try,)