Childish Pleasure
Submitted March 26, 2004 Updated March 26, 2004 Status Incomplete | This is another poem, a happy one actually, that i had to include to take up space on a art project i did, i drew a small girl on a glass horse.
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Chapter 1 - Round and Round I go
Submitted: March 26, 2004 • Updated: March 26, 2004
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BlackWolf on June 26, 2004, 12:55:28 PM
BlackWolf on (Chapter: 1)
awe, very nice. ^^ yea, that was my favorite ride when i was little. i like the poem alot, it was well written and really uplifting actually. ^^Escapee_From_Bedlam on May 29, 2004, 11:26:26 PM
Escapee_From_Bedlam on (Chapter: 1)
Hmm, those words would make good lyrics to a sweet melodic song. ......At first i thought the merrie-go-round was one of those little musical carousels people keep at home. But then I realized it was the 'carnival' merrie-go-round and- well, hey you know I'm slow! Nice touch to your 'sensitive-side' ^_~ My sensitive side has a rash O.O"CheshireGoddess on April 4, 2004, 11:20:07 AM
CheshireGoddess on (Chapter: 1)
ya its about a merrie go round, forgot to put that in ^_^;;Sliver on March 28, 2004, 7:24:37 AM
Sliver on (Chapter: 1)
cool, a mery go round, rite? I know what u mean, small things liek that always mean alot to ppl.