Minds and Hearts Are Far Apart...

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Submitted
May 1, 2005
Updated
May 1, 2005
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Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 0k
Words: 137
Comments: 3
Views: 1,078
Faves...: 2
Rating: 0

This is a poem about the battle of mind and heart. It's kind of hard to understand. But i hope you like it!

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry

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Chapter 1 - Mind V.S. Heart
Submitted: May 1, 2005 • Updated: May 1, 2005
Word count: 137 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 183

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moonlitdemoness09 on November 11, 2005, 9:28:17 AM

moonlitdemoness09 on November 11, 2005, 9:28:17 AM (Chapter: 1)

this is awesome! twas very nice! and i agree with Liedetector16. it does kinda make it "swim or sink" but what you have is good.

Liedetector16 on July 18, 2005, 1:02:30 PM

Liedetector16 on July 18, 2005, 1:02:30 PM (Chapter: 1)

I like this one ALOT! The repitition really makes it, "swim or sink." I have to fav this one. *favs*

higes_wolf on May 2, 2005, 12:11:55 PM

higes_wolf on May 2, 2005, 12:11:55 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow!this is awsome stuff!i like ur storys/poems!*favs*
~higes_wolf