The Dragon Slayers
Submitted June 3, 2004 Updated June 16, 2004 Status Incomplete | This is a story I have been working on for a while now
Category:
Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Preface
Submitted: June 3, 2004 • Updated: June 3, 2004
Word count: 303 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 163
Chapter 2 - Chapter 1 The Slaying of the Dragon
Submitted: June 3, 2004 • Updated: June 3, 2004
Word count: 867 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 166
Chapter 3 - Chapter 2
Submitted: June 3, 2004 • Updated: June 3, 2004
Word count: 440 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 154
Chapter 4 - Chapter 3 Dragons attack
Submitted: June 3, 2004 • Updated: June 3, 2004
Word count: 605 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 165
Chapter 5 - Chapter 4 The Father
Submitted: June 3, 2004 • Updated: June 3, 2004
Word count: 483 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 138
Chapter 6 - The Challenge
Submitted: June 16, 2004 • Updated: June 16, 2004
Word count: 251 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 162
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KeboFokohj on January 2, 2008, 5:11:24 PM
I have read your story as of January 2008 and I think that you could improve in a few aspects or your story. First I would slow down the plot, events happen so fast it's like watching a fast forwarded movie. You can easily slow down your plot in the future by adding extra details, etc. Also, I'm not sure how old you are so I don't want to be hard, but to me, anyone who is willing to write something that is 3000 words long. definitally deserves notice for their effort.