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Rachael of Light ~Volume 1~

When young Rachael finds a Rainbow Charm in the river one day, she earns the power of a Light Sorceress.
*Based on dreams I had recently.
For 10+ for mild swearing, violence, and blood.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - Prologue: Average Girl
Submitted: January 6, 2011 • Updated: January 6, 2011
Word count: 121 • Size: <1k • Comments: 27 • views: 406

Chapter 1 - Enter "Rae of Light!"
Submitted: January 7, 2011 • Updated: January 8, 2011
Word count: 184 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 626

Chapter 2 - First Darkness Card
Submitted: January 8, 2011 • Updated: January 8, 2011
Word count: 212 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 307

Chapter 3 - Katrena
Submitted: January 8, 2011 • Updated: January 8, 2011
Word count: 189 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 358

Chapter 4 - ♪A Love we Never Knew♪
Submitted: January 8, 2011 • Updated: January 8, 2011
Word count: 189 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 358

Chapter 5 - Cassie's Bracelet
Submitted: January 8, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2011
Word count: 205 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 611

Chapter 6 - Oh Noez
Submitted: January 9, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2011
Word count: 197 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 314

Chapter 7 - Andrew's Birthday
Submitted: January 9, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2011
Word count: 226 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 321

Chapter 8 - The Beginning of the Trip
Submitted: January 16, 2011 • Updated: January 16, 2011
Word count: 274 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 324

Chapter 9 - Haunted Pizza
Submitted: January 18, 2011 • Updated: January 18, 2011
Word count: 218 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 328

Chapter 10 - New Student
Submitted: January 25, 2011 • Updated: January 25, 2011
Word count: 220 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 323

Chapter 11 - ♪Speak Now♪ --Part 1--
Submitted: January 25, 2011 • Updated: January 25, 2011
Word count: 372 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 263

Chapter 12 - ♪Speak Now♪ --Part 2--
Submitted: January 25, 2011 • Updated: January 25, 2011
Word count: 169 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 316

Chapter 13 - Short, Crappy Chapter
Submitted: February 12, 2011 • Updated: February 12, 2011
Word count: 103 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 318

Chapter 14 - Happy! Smile! Hello!
Submitted: March 1, 2011 • Updated: March 1, 2011
Word count: 273 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 268

Comments

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Anime_Ellie on January 26, 2011, 8:03:59 AM

Anime_Ellie on (Chapter: 12)
Anime_EllieDelaney is right! No one can be 'normal',since being normal is different to everyone.

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 27, 2011, 9:09:21 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 12)
CreamandPoppufan166Yeah. :)

waluigiguy22 on January 25, 2011, 10:55:16 PM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 12)
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waluigiguy22 on January 25, 2011, 1:22:11 PM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 12)
waluigiguy22Rachael doesn't have to be "normal." She can be her cute, artistic, loving, angelic, autistic self.

Powerful words :)
Well played, Delaney! :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 25, 2011, 1:24:02 PM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 12)
CreamandPoppufan166Yes! 8D
Autistic people also need to be more appreciated.

waluigiguy22 on January 25, 2011, 1:15:18 PM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 11)
waluigiguy22That's cool how you put part of the story in a song! :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 25, 2011, 1:19:41 PM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 11)
CreamandPoppufan166I sometimes do that. X3
I'm trying to get back Delaney in the scene! XD

waluigiguy22 on January 25, 2011, 12:26:51 PM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 10)
waluigiguy22AWESOME CHAPTER!! :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 25, 2011, 12:28:33 PM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 10)
CreamandPoppufan166Yeah, Aaron appears! :)
Next chapter'll be a Taylor Swift song!

waluigiguy22 on January 25, 2011, 12:31:54 PM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22She's cool! :D

waluigiguy22 on January 18, 2011, 9:36:50 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 9)
waluigiguy22"Mind Cleaner! Forget this moment!"

That is just epic :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 19, 2011, 6:43:50 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 9)
CreamandPoppufan166I KNOW, RIIIIGHT?

waluigiguy22 on January 20, 2011, 7:13:20 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 9)
waluigiguy22"Oh, no. That brown hair... and those shiny teeth... it's Rachael!" XD

waluigiguy22 on January 9, 2011, 9:38:19 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 7)
waluigiguy22He IS a pervert XD

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 9, 2011, 9:47:30 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 7)
CreamandPoppufan166You said it.

waluigiguy22 on January 9, 2011, 10:03:48 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22This story makes you look heroic :D

I like that :3

Anime_Ellie on January 9, 2011, 9:17:43 AM

Anime_Ellie on (Chapter: 7)
Anime_EllieMan,the attack-sequence-thing was short...good thing it didn't get any longer,I guess.

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 9, 2011, 9:38:10 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 7)
CreamandPoppufan166Yeah. In volumes 2 and 3, they'll be longer.

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 2:19:34 PM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 5)
waluigiguy22Mrs. DuFour I assume? XD

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 8, 2011, 2:20:45 PM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 5)
CreamandPoppufan166Yes XD
But the f isn't capitalized.

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 2:23:47 PM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22I assume Katrena's kinda cute too :3

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 8, 2011, 2:29:23 PM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166Yeah. 8D
What'd you think of the chapter? o3o

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 2:31:12 PM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22It really brought out your inner troublemaker! (random lightning flashes) >:D

[That's a good thing, by the way XD]

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 5:50:03 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 4)
waluigiguy22In the story, does Rachael know Jon has a crush on her?

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 8, 2011, 5:56:22 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 4)
CreamandPoppufan166At the end.

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 5:58:15 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22Throghout the story, Jon should wink at Rachael at times to show her (and the reader) he likes her :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 8, 2011, 6:02:24 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166Maybe...

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 5:48:28 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 4)
waluigiguy22Jake's adorable! :D

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 4:06:16 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 3)
waluigiguy22"Thank you, Santa!" :P
Love at first sight X3

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 8, 2011, 4:34:06 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 3)
CreamandPoppufan166Yeah, she wished for a boyfriend XD

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 5:25:58 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22:D A cute one I bet :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 8, 2011, 5:45:40 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166YESH!

waluigiguy22 on January 8, 2011, 5:49:01 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22Do they kiss in the story? :D

Anime_Ellie on January 7, 2011, 9:05:26 AM

Anime_Ellie on (Chapter: 1)
Anime_Ellie:D Awesome so far! XD

waluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 7:36:03 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: 1)
waluigiguy22OMG I'm in this one!! :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 7:39:33 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: 1)
CreamandPoppufan166That's what I like to do: foreshadowing. |3

waluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 7:40:51 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22Foreshadowing's awesome! :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 7:44:05 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166Plus, there'll be a song called "A Love we Never Knew" from Pop'n Music... search it on YouTube. It's epic. 8D

waluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 7:46:19 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22I sure will :D
(I have a feeling that song is in the story X3)

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 7:57:37 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166It is X3

waluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 7:58:55 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22Heard it ;) <3

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 10:57:12 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166Did you like it? XD

waluigiguy22 on January 7, 2011, 11:22:57 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22It's really cute! :D

Anime_Ellie on January 6, 2011, 12:25:56 PM

Anime_Ellie on (Chapter: index)
Anime_EllieHmm...there's someone I know named Cassie that's also an idiot...strange.

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 7:08:46 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166OMG... wierd. o.0
I will post Chapter 1!

waluigiguy22 on January 6, 2011, 8:43:30 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22"For example, in a stuffed toy, a cow, or even a boy!"
Uh oh XD

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 6, 2011, 8:48:35 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166You're full of light in the story.

waluigiguy22 on January 6, 2011, 8:50:06 AM

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CreamandPoppufan166 on January 6, 2011, 8:58:46 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166I think you would be the Prince of Light!

waluigiguy22 on January 6, 2011, 9:00:52 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22Prince?? :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 6, 2011, 9:03:07 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166OH, YEAH!!

waluigiguy22 on January 6, 2011, 9:05:25 AM

waluigiguy22 on (Chapter: index)
waluigiguy22You da princess? :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on January 7, 2011, 7:07:11 AM

CreamandPoppufan166 on (Chapter: index)
CreamandPoppufan166No... T^T
But you're the future King of Light!