Where The Shadows Lie
Submitted July 10, 2006 Updated July 10, 2006 Status Incomplete | In a community where magic has been forbiddden for generations, a young, part-elven girl- Maliwen- see's something strange near The Forest. Maliwen seeks this strange thing- a heavenly light- for days after, until something horible happens... Her home is
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Chapter 1 - The Light
Submitted: July 10, 2006 • Updated: July 10, 2006
Word count: 974 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 167
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Shadow_Dance on July 27, 2006, 3:12:04 AM
Shadow_Dance on (Chapter: index)
Write MORE!Irken_Akire on July 10, 2006, 9:08:34 AM
Irken_Akire on (Chapter: 1)
Oh, thats a very good story...eh....chapter. Nice details and written nicely. Very good. If i try too hard on my story it turns out horrible! :) Heh-heh, well, great story, i love it! I hope you will make more chapters! *Gives you a cookie and walks off stupidly* Bye!Dark_Light on July 10, 2006, 5:43:57 AM
Dark_Light on (Chapter: 1)
Oh yeah, I'm also sorry about how all of the quotations, apostraphes, hyphens, etc. got messed up... I don't know what happened...Dark_Light on July 10, 2006, 5:37:03 AM
Dark_Light on (Chapter: 1)
Squee! Please comment! All are appreciated! Oh yeah, bye the way, Mal's hair is supposed to be brown, not blonde... heh-heh... oops. n_n'