The Clash of Light and Darkness
Submitted March 13, 2005 Updated March 13, 2005 Status Incomplete | A story of a young Vampire encountering a human that he befriends. She is held special to him after his brother rejecting him almost entirely, and she somehow finds it in her own soul to accept the mysterious boy whom has roamed and haunted her villa |
Chapters
Chapter 2 - Who Are You?
Submitted: March 13, 2005 • Updated: March 13, 2005
Word count: 2694 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 351
Chapter 3 - Vampires and Apples Don't Mix
Submitted: March 13, 2005 • Updated: March 13, 2005
Word count: 2546 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 322
Chapter 4 - A School Dane and A Loving Brother
Submitted: March 13, 2005 • Updated: March 13, 2005
Word count: 2862 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 332
Chapter 5 - Here's Kono
Submitted: March 13, 2005 • Updated: March 13, 2005
Word count: 1793 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 292
Chapter 6 - It's A Pony!
Submitted: March 13, 2005 • Updated: March 13, 2005
Word count: 2443 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 335
Chapter 7 - Dancing 'Til the Sun Comes Up
Submitted: March 13, 2005 • Updated: March 13, 2005
Word count: 2653 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 330
Chapter 8 - Why We Don't Pet Vampires
Submitted: March 13, 2005 • Updated: March 13, 2005
Word count: 2603 • Size: 14k • Comments: 0 • views: 304
Chapter 9 - No One Deserves This
Submitted: March 13, 2005 • Updated: March 13, 2005
Word count: 2708 • Size: 14k • Comments: 9 • views: 347
Comments
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xkaitlyn25x on October 5, 2007, 9:14:50 AM
it's sooooooooo gooood you should publish it like trinity_fire should publish Iris..... ^_^xkaitlyn25x on October 5, 2007, 9:12:40 AM
ppppppppplllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee wwrite more!!!!!!!!!!!! T_T ^.^ XDRandomGuy on May 30, 2007, 8:58:20 AM
ok i like the detail alot more in this one u did well on the descriptions. The chr's names i also liked cause thier creative enough but the reactions ur chr's are giving are kinda...not real..if u know what im saying. Maybe its because thier isn't a first chapter up yet but if u where really to have met a vampire im pretty sure standing thier wouldn't be ur reaction on top of that i know life isn't like anime but in real life girls do something other then blush when a guy sees a girl naked. Thier isn't much on how the two really met and if thier intoducing names still it means that had to have just met so the naked thing isn't really real either. Your also suppose to space and then indent after the speaker changes no matter what and u didn't do that at all. Its actually a chore to find who is saying wat. If it where more then 2 ppl it would be pretty impossible since you never specify who is talking when they go back in forth. Overall its got a nice ring to it the title and the plot and all but the chr's true realism is pretty easily fake. I'm not commenting bad because i want to but it helps to see a problem and im pretty sure u don't act like this in real life so how would you expect someone else too even if thier made up. Btw i apologize for my last comment on the other story but it is my opinion after all and i do mean most of the words about itMandyLovsDaPeoples on August 2, 2006, 10:46:37 AM
awsome youve got to put more up
PLEASE
PLEASE
PLEASE finish it
PLEASE
Gelarwing on June 20, 2006, 9:34:31 PM
Why no more chapters for ages? I love this story! Sure I ahven't commented on any chapters before but now it's getting really interesting and I have better things so say other than saying awesome job all the time.PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I keep going back and reading a few chapters when I'm bored.
Christmas on June 7, 2006, 6:19:54 AM
Love your story! I've read the 2 first chapter, and so far so good, you really leave each chapter on a cliffhanger, wich makes me want to read more :)I was wondering what kind of hair colo/lenght does Karu have? Mabye I missed it.
I was thinking about mabye doing some fan art of Karu one day, I'm not sure, but if I do get a kick, do you mind if I draw him? I will print on the pic that the chara belongs to you.
FATE_The_Pirate on March 12, 2006, 8:28:12 AM
mmm so good write more on the last chapter ^_^ ~FATE the PirateSoul_Keeper on October 27, 2005, 7:00:37 AM
Please can you write more of this story? FATE_The_Pirate on September 14, 2005, 9:42:52 AM
WRITE MORE!!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeassssssssssssseee O_O i will love you forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more more more moreFATE_The_Pirate on September 13, 2005, 10:25:57 AM
OMG you are like one of the best authors i have read so far i love your storys ^_^ ~loves FATEFATE_The_Pirate on September 13, 2005, 9:05:30 AM
^_^ that was a good story to you need to write more >.>vam-girl on July 15, 2005, 12:37:05 PM
oh come on please do more!!!!____Yomiko____ on May 16, 2005, 3:34:16 PM
Only one commet???.. This story rocks ^^ Do more please! *claps*DemonessofRedSnow on March 27, 2005, 11:37:08 AM
Thank you very much. I have a lot more, but I am too lazy to load it right now ^_^vam-girl on March 19, 2005, 6:14:03 AM
oh my god i cant belive no one has comented yet this is great! please please please keep going!