Behind you
Submitted August 5, 2004 Updated August 5, 2004 Status Incomplete | Dark i think Can`t think of a Description sorry plz Look..
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Chapter 1 - Behind you
Submitted: August 5, 2004 • Updated: August 5, 2004
Word count: 65 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 103
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Malevolent_Templar on December 23, 2004, 7:27:53 PM
Malevolent_Templar on (Chapter: 1)
Rhymer_Dante on November 23, 2004, 1:25:18 PM
Rhymer_Dante on (Chapter: 1)
Very nice! I like ^_^ it has all the dark cruel things that go through my mind. I hope you make more soon!!tiler_james on November 16, 2004, 10:20:30 AM
tiler_james on (Chapter: 1)
This is a good poem, but is it okay if i make a suggestion? It would be easier to understand if you put in puncuation. Okies? ^_^ But anyways its a good poem ^^!cookies_are_yummy16 on August 6, 2004, 1:46:24 PM
cookies_are_yummy16 on (Chapter: 1)
YAY! First to comment! It's me! Summer Maxwell! YAY! Love the poem, especially the first part where 'When I See Blood Drip From The Moon' It sounds so cool! Yay! Did you comment anything on my drawings yet? See ya!
I spose 'Forgive and Forget' doesnt apply here.
Good job, keep it up