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WHEN IT MATTERS

Jenny is a seventeen year old who thinks she's a girl with boring aspects and personality. She passes her time by observing her two best friends Russ and Maya who she feels are interesting and special individuals. Not believing she really matters in this

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Wake Up Call
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 2575 • Size: 12k • Comments: 1 • views: 386

Chapter 2 - Chapter 2: Mind Reading Wish
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 2767 • Size: 14k • Comments: 0 • views: 327

Chapter 3 - Chapter 3: The Magic Of Words
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 592 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 318

Chapter 4 - Finding a hobby
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 1336 • Size: 18k • Comments: 1 • views: 351

Chapter 5 - Chapter 4: Finding a hobby
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 937 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 383

Chapter 6 - When it matters, correct: ch. 1 - 5
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 8925 • Size: 47k • Comments: 0 • views: 344

Chapter 7 - Chapter 6: Theory of a player
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 1198 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 334

Chapter 8 - Chapter 7: Girlfriends
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 1370 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 392

Chapter 9 - Chapter 8: The key towards flawless
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 2555 • Size: 14k • Comments: 6 • views: 370

Chapter 10 - Chapter 8b: The Key to flawless
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 1295 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 340

Chapter 11 - Chapter 9: Calling names
Submitted: May 24, 2006 • Updated: May 24, 2006
Word count: 1532 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 340

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red-dragon on September 1, 2006, 12:57:08 AM

red-dragon on (Chapter: 11)
red-dragonLove it, Russ and Maya both are in love with Jenny isn't it? That's so cool!! (I don't know how else to express it)

StephAlanPoe on August 4, 2006, 8:12:03 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: index)
StephAlanPoewheeee! TYPOS! they taste nice with cheese...

sorry, I've just watched a lot of invader zim so i'm feeling kind of random at the mo. And i didnt notice no typos! n.n



CHEESY TYPOS!!!

StephAlanPoe on August 4, 2006, 8:09:51 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: 11)
StephAlanPoeWHEEEEEEE!! PRINCESS PEAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *drools* i shall collect them all....

err, yeeeessss...


*squee!* OmG Maya KISSED her! *shock* AnD Russ wrapped his arms around Jenn's waist! *shock* And Jenn's dad snores loud! *shock* AnD Jenn's real name is Mary! *shock* AnD I like the name Mary...

hmmm...

whats she gunna do to make herself unforgetable, then?
eat a live goat? YEAH! W00OOooo... no. ok then. youre the author! n.n update soon

Eggplant on August 4, 2006, 8:02:46 AM

Eggplant on (Chapter: 11)
EggplantI know... it's Michael JordAn.... sorry
*gets annoyed by her own typo's*

forgive me please =_0;;;

Eggplant on August 4, 2006, 7:55:29 AM

Eggplant on (Chapter: 11)
EggplantI made a little change, but Im not gonna alter this here.. the little change is too little:

“How many calories is this?” He wondered out loud.
Before accepting his offered plate, I stretched my limbs in bed and sat up.
"We can go and jog it off again.” I yawned.



see? not even necesairly better, but the voice inside my head says it is.

StephAlanPoe on August 4, 2006, 7:37:41 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: 10)
StephAlanPoe"my mother taught me well"
lol...

red-dragon on August 4, 2006, 3:42:58 AM

red-dragon on (Chapter: 10)
red-dragon:D

StephAlanPoe on August 4, 2006, 3:07:16 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: 10)
StephAlanPoelol, i would just love to see russ's catwalk walk! n.n
great chapter, loved the bit about russ's shaving... he is such a funny charachter!
*sits and waits for next chapter*

fuzzy_the_bear on August 3, 2006, 6:04:15 AM

fuzzy_the_bear on (Chapter: 10)
fuzzy_the_bearplease add more this is a awesome story way better then mine ^^

StephAlanPoe on August 2, 2006, 3:09:16 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: index)
StephAlanPoeyou can delete my comment if you like

StephAlanPoe on August 2, 2006, 3:08:50 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: 9)
StephAlanPoeAhhh, this makes a lot more sense! :-D dont fret, your story still rules! and even moreso now its fixed... and feel free to brainstorm on my profile again Xp

update soon!

fuzzy_the_bear on July 31, 2006, 4:36:40 AM

fuzzy_the_bear on (Chapter: 9)
fuzzy_the_bearMMMOOOORRRRREEEEEEEE please ^_^

Eggplant on July 31, 2006, 3:01:11 AM

Eggplant on (Chapter: index)
EggplantNO YOU DIDN'T READ THAT! YOU READ NOTHING.. Its that Im afraid to delete anyone's comment but... YOU READ NOTHING *cries* I screwed up the events in the notes with the events in the story... In my notes something happened.. and chapter 8 was written based on that event...

StephAlanPoe on July 31, 2006, 2:41:52 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: 9)
StephAlanPoeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! he kissed her! whats Maya gonna say about that? ooooh, cant wait for the next chapter... this story has me hooked...

Eggplant on July 31, 2006, 2:41:30 AM

Eggplant on (Chapter: 9)
EggplantOh, right I didn't correct that:

For the none-dutch speakers here: 'stoffen' at the end of chapter 8 is a kind of fabric that I don't know the English translation of.

Sorry for the stupidity I own =_0;;;

red-dragon on July 30, 2006, 9:59:52 PM

red-dragon on (Chapter: 8)
red-dragonJenny's populair! Are Russ and Maya in love with her? It seems so till now.

StephAlanPoe on July 18, 2006, 5:25:16 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: 8)
StephAlanPoeICE-CREAM!!! YAAAAAAAAAAY!

StephAlanPoe on July 18, 2006, 1:42:08 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: 1)
StephAlanPoe*squee* Ok, I'm proberbly the last person in the world to start reading this story, but OHMYGOSH! It is so good!
i AM jenn! Not literaly like, my name is steph, but i can just relate to her so much! It's kinda scary actualy, like your writing a story about me! I love storys like that! n.n
*reads on*

red-dragon on June 11, 2006, 4:37:26 AM

red-dragon on (Chapter: 5)
red-dragonWhat are her plans? Spying Russ? Ahh...I want to know. I like Jenny

Eggplant on May 31, 2006, 7:15:07 AM

Eggplant on (Chapter: index)
EggplantI got chapter 5 ready, but guess what... I WON;T LET ME UPDATE! frack it.
 
And I tried updating chapter 4, but that totally gave a lay-out turned out like shoot.
 
So I don;t know how to post the new chapters anymore. I'm getting less and less fond of this stupid site, and I used to love it.

Eggplant on May 31, 2006, 7:06:23 AM

Eggplant on (Chapter: index)
EggplantI NOW OFFICIALLY HATE FANART CENTRAL! I CAN;T ALTER, I CANT DELETE A CHAPTER, WHEN I POST A CHAPTER IT frackS UP THE LAY-OUT! WTF IS WRONG WITH FANART! GODDAMNIT!

Miko_the_Rabbit on May 28, 2006, 10:03:45 PM

Miko_the_Rabbit on (Chapter: index)
Miko_the_Rabbitomg this story is awesome plz write more plz plz plz plz plz *pleads with u*