foedus angelus de caelum
Submitted October 22, 2005 Updated May 2, 2006 Status Incomplete | Yu-Gi-Oh story. I do not own yu-gi-oh, or any of the cahracters in this story, except Ana-Gaelle and Marc.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
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Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
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Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
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Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
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Chapter 5 - Chapter 5
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Chapter 6 - Chapter 6
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Chapter 7 - Chapter 7
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Chapter 8 - Chapter 8
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Chapter 9 - Chapter 9
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Chapter 10 - Chapter 10
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Chapter 11 - Chapter 11
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Chapter 12 - Chapter 12
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Chapter 13 - Chapter 13
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Chapter 14 - Chapter 14
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Chapter 15 - Chapter 15
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Chapter 16 - Chapter 16
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Chapter 17 - Chapter 17
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Chapter 18 - Chapter 18
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Chapter 19 - Chapter 19
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Chapter 20 - Chapter 20
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Chapter 21 - Chapter 21
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Chapter 22 - Chapter 21
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Chapter 23 - Chapter 23
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Chapter 24 - Chapter 24
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Chapter 25 - Chapter 25
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Chapter 26 - A New Chapter
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Chapter 27 - Chapter 2 again
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Chapter 28 - Chapter three...again
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Chapter 29 - Chapter the Fourth
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Chapter 30 - Chapter the fifth
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angel_of_beauty_and_light on May 4, 2006, 6:31:27 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 30)
angel_of_beauty_and_light on March 30, 2006, 4:59:53 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 29)
Oh dear god, that sounds ominous ><What the hell is wrong with Sakura? That time of the month?
angel_of_beauty_and_light on March 29, 2006, 1:15:51 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 27)
Ha ha, I was just re-reading this, and you said Kara instead of Ana. Hee heeangel_of_beauty_and_light on January 27, 2006, 6:01:25 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 28)
WHAT A SNOB! Sorry, but, what, where was it.... let me find it....."The designer shops were always good fun to get into, and with Seto, and me, we should get in."
You're kidding right?!?!?! Anyone can get into designer shops, you just need to be filthy rich to by something. It's the designer clubs you need connections to be able to get into them.
Ack, Big Brother on now, must go, but will probs finish comment in a few minutes. Bye xxxxxxx
Nemya on January 27, 2006, 4:47:42 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 28)
Ha ha sorry I did not comment before xPPUnnn yes English is Yuula's first language... She slips up a bit sometimes with her Japanese... Like me with English actually ha ha
Waaah rock pooling so fun and unnn Manning is ultra mean for hitting me with a volleyball xP Ha ha, see my computer-speaking is mega weird right? Putting together stuffs is so hardy-ward xP Actually no wait I can be literate on the computer sometimes when I am doing roleplaying though...
"heated conversation" Eh? I wonder what that is about, eh?!
AUGH leaving the poor guy with Seto, what did he do to deserve this?!? CRUEL!! You are such a meanie eh? xDD
Hee hee, should be fun^^
Tillyenna on January 27, 2006, 3:20:19 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 27)
not baby hondas.......ughTillyenna on January 27, 2006, 3:17:38 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 26)
YAYA someone gets to stay in a hotel.....away from all you scumNemya on January 25, 2006, 4:54:18 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 27)
NOOO D: Yuula doesn't hate her kids xP But ah well, this is your story eh?UGH. Honda children! "little mes" Argh how awful! Little HONDAS! Also, he mentioned Johji, what if your kids turned out to be like him eh?! Ew xP
angel_of_beauty_and_light on January 25, 2006, 1:34:17 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 27)
Wheeee, I really like the names Haru and Esme actually, so I'm gonna use them! ^^ Thankies, great names!Such a chappy dude! Yuula is a little bit strange >< Weirdo, why the hell did she marry Duke if she doesn't love him, and why the hell did they have kids? What a loser!
Hey, first to comment *looks smug* cool cool, want to read more! Yay, write more soon ^^ Pleasey weasey *begs*
Welly welly, gotta go, neighbours in a few seconds. Bye bye love it write more soon xxxxxx
Nemya on January 17, 2006, 5:54:36 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 26)
Wai wai awesome you wrote some'more, after me nagging , I am very sorry D:UGH, I can't imagine anything worse than getting married to HONDA. And becoming his WIFE. And haveing his NAME with yours. UGH. Awful. Absolutely awful.
I love the way you do descriptions^^
Also, WHO'S idea was it to have Yuula and Dook sharing a room?!?! Sure, the others are all paired up, but why do they have to share a room!?!?! Isn't this
bullying?!?!?!
angel_of_beauty_and_light on January 17, 2006, 5:50:26 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 26)
YAY! MORE STORY MORE STORY MORE STORY! YAyayayayayay!Okies, I'm confussed! At the start you say "I woke up to a coldly bright morning" and say that it's winter, and then you say "I loved the summer, with its warm sunshine that stayed in the garden all day long."
WHAT?!?!?! Is it summer or winter?!?! I'm confussed?
Wheee, it's me in it! Dude, and Seto and I get the biggest guest room! Legend ^^
You didn't use my suggestions for animal names ;____;
But Volvo's great ^^
Anyways, great chappy dude. Write more soon! LOL Bye bye
Tillyenna on December 22, 2005, 6:35:18 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 25)
YAY..... she's alive.....well she was before but hey
egh *shudders* a honda honda.....
they have started putting honda adverts on the tv again and my family think im REALLY strange now coz everytime one appears i sit there going
honda honda honda honda honda (etc)
angel_of_beauty_and_light on December 21, 2005, 7:09:26 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 25)
HOW COME YOU DIDN'T TELL ME MORE WAS UP?????!!!!!!!!! I DEMAND AN EXPLAINATION! IMMEDIATELY! OR TOMORROW BECAUSE YOU ARE ALL IN BED AND I SPENT AGES WRITING MORE HP (sauce) STORY AND HAVE JUST PUT IT UP! WHY ARE YOU ALL ASLEEP?!?! IT IS ONLY 23.09! Gawd, well, I'll speak to you tomorrow anyway, and I'll read the next chapter now *stomps off to read next chapter*Nemya on December 18, 2005, 5:36:18 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 25)
Huh? I don't understand Ani's comment... Is it story related? o.ONemya on December 18, 2005, 5:35:45 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 25)
Gwaaa haa~ Nya x3 Oh no. The Honda's counting down the time to be seeing Ana... Tooooooefestation.Make the Dook's ponytail really high? It's already... On top of his head almost xD But it is a very cute ponytail^^
"“What's wrong with him?” asked Sakura" Answer: Everything is wrong with the Honda. Everything. Everything. Ha ha. I love the thing about who would want a Honda xD Ha ha, poor ickle Dookie looks so sad ;__; But ha ha, that's his fault for being so obsessive nya ha sucker lucky he has a cute ponytail indeed, only good thing about him. *Nods*
NOOO. Honda.... Rode his Honda. xP Double Honda attack. I don't think I can take it xP I CANT TAKE IT! Awww, hugging the Honda. *Shudder*
HEY! And you passivley paired Yuula up with Dook! Grekola :K
*Shudder* "Do other things". *Shudder*. With Honda. *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* Honda *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* *Shudder* With Honda *Massive shudder*
Nemya on December 15, 2005, 10:20:45 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 24)
Gaaaah your dad died wauuu ;___; And Marc is an evil little toe who deserves to be eaten... Or subjected to Anzu's friendship speeches for the rest of his life, heh heh... *Plots*angel_of_beauty_and_light on December 13, 2005, 5:44:24 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 24)
What a BASTARD! HE WASN'T GOING TO TELL YOU?!?!?!?!?! WHAT A SON OF A dog (pardon me, I'm sure that his mother wasn't a dog, but you get what I'm saying!)! Well, I was in it, the shining star of the whole chapter, the good light at the end of the tunnel. Hey, guess what dude, if you survive the operation, you can go back to Japan and see ME! Won't that be a treat! Well, should wrap up now, courseworkds to finish UGH! lol xxxxxTillyenna on December 13, 2005, 2:42:09 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 24)
aw....blessangel_of_beauty_and_light on December 2, 2005, 5:14:00 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 23)
Awwwwwwwwwwww, I love that song! I actually stopped Windows Media Player and sung to it. I love that song sooooooooooooo much! Awwww, memories *remembers Ali and Chaz singing and playing the guitar to this whilst camping* Ha ha ha, so funny! Anyways, awesome chapter, I reckon you should come and see me in one of the chapters, it would be quite cool! Yeah, that would be awesome, come to the mansion, that would be cool! And Seto would be like "Don't you dare touch ANYTHING!" Hahaha, Seto is a control freak, who I really love very much. Ahhhhh, Honda is a bit weird, and Joey is an insensitive little jerk. HA! I get to cut him with my wedding ring, how cool is that?! He deserves it, that little piece of...... *grinds fist into palm of hand* he almost killed Melly Welly Belly kins. Waaaaaaaaa *glomnps Nemya hard* Waaa, what if he had killed her, then he'd be sorry, and would go to jail for murder. Heeeeeeeeeeeeey *plots*Okies, went completely off track, how's this comment coming along? Nice and long enpugh for you. Well, what should I say... bla bla bla, it was amazing...bla bla bla write more immediately...bla bla bla I am gonna go write more HP (sauce) story now. Bye bye LOL xxxxx
Tillyenna on December 2, 2005, 4:30:24 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 23)
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaathats real sad....we listned to that song in spanish today
weird......joey's an asshole, but we all know this anyway
Tillyenna on December 1, 2005, 3:40:23 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 22)
again....you poooor poooor darling....(oh and SOMEONE cant count)Tillyenna on December 1, 2005, 3:38:14 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 21)
poor baby....angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 30, 2005, 6:23:42 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 22)
Aww, poor Ana, it is the most boring thing in the world, espechially if you are in pain at the same time. Ahhhh, and it is my wedding! Ledgend! Wheeeeeeeeee, that is going to be so much fun to write.But, ahhhhhhh, you're paralysed?!?!?! Bloody Honda, it's all his fault, dump him and get a better boyfriend, one who does not have such odd hard. In fact, get a lot more boyfriends, and pick the one who has the best hair/taste in music/clothes style/voice/looks/and mother stuff. Ahhhhhhhh, I am gonna have to go soon and read HP, but before I go I will leave you with this short message:
Ahhhhhhhh, Cedric Diggory.....
Nemya on November 29, 2005, 6:14:51 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 21)
I'm sorry if I cannot comment for long, I have to be going D:BUT YAYAYAYAAAA t'is so awesome, ha ha, poor Ana, being 14 and subjected to the torture of being anywhere NEAR Honda.
And I love how you wrote Joey on the phone, ha ha, it sounded /exactly/ like him. Bwahahaaa.
Sorry for non long comment, I'm sorry D:
angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 29, 2005, 6:08:33 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 21)
Phew! At least she was okay, well, not really okay, but okayish.Boy, how the hell would a 14 year old bring herself to eat cake with a 16 year old (unless she is a slut), espechially if that 16 year olf is HONDA. Honestly, young children these days.
Ah, I can't wait to write about the wedding ^^ Gonna be so cool, and I have to fit in Priest Seto and Hebeny's wedding as well *sigh sigh* Well, never mind, the story is nearly coming to a close to I can focus on my HP (sauce!) story, and random one about Shiroi (such a cool name).
Anyways, la la la, mum is being annoying, making me go to bed *scowls* But I don't wanna sleep *pouts* Yes, I know I love sleep, but 10 is just a pathetic time to be made to sleep. And I was waiting for this chapter for ages. Well, it is so good, la la la, night!
Tillyenna on November 26, 2005, 2:51:05 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 20)
tee hee hee *puts hand up*ooh she's nasty, but kinda cool all the same
Nemya on November 23, 2005, 5:11:49 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 20)
Hee hee, Honda trying to speak French. Oh dear. Would he even know any French?Ah well.
No one likes the Honda anyway.
angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 21, 2005, 5:24:42 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 20)
Yeah yeah, amazing chapter, as always. Write more soon, and more HP, coz that is also a great story! LOL xxxangel_of_beauty_and_light on November 21, 2005, 5:23:47 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 20)
Another very good chapter! But, sorry, I have to say this...HANDS UP WHO WANTS TO SLAP THAT dog! *puts hand up* OI ASLAN, THAT MEANS YOU TOO! *cat is forced to put hand up too* And any of you other commenting people, yes, I mean you *points* PUT YOUR HAND UP AS WELL IF YOU WANT TO SLAP THAT dog!
Tillyenna on November 19, 2005, 2:40:37 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 19)
more pleaseNemya on November 18, 2005, 3:17:10 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 19)
Ha ha. Joey is the dumbest. Myeh.Keep writing. Awesome story. Nyeh. Great job xD
Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 6:13:32 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 19)
XD XD XD XDpeter said "sweet digs"
that is sooooo funnnny XD
Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 6:09:56 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 19)
yay the fleece ^^Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 6:07:48 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 18)
^^ honda's hondait just had to happen ^^
angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 17, 2005, 6:06:22 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 19)
YAY! MORE STORY!!! KEEP WRITING OTHERWISE *balls hands into fists* And write more Harry Potter too, and Furuba. Pleasey-weasey. Thanks, can't leave a long comment as am trying to write and read simultaneously. Lol, bye xxxLanathae on November 17, 2005, 5:57:37 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 16)
XDXD
xD
*fits of laughter*
I'm in it again ^^
YAY
Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 5:53:46 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 15)
hmmm, that is very... katyish ^^Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 5:47:17 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 14)
can honda really be honda without honda hair?Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 5:44:23 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 13)
awww >< that is sooo cutewell, not that cute but whatever ^^
Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 5:37:52 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 11)
YAY it's finnaly meeeee^^
Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 5:31:50 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 10)
>< scaryyou guys are just scary ^^
Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 5:09:55 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 7)
AWWWwwwww >< that is sooooo cuuuuuute ^^Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 5:06:35 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 6)
aww that so... sad i guessoh well ^^
angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 11, 2005, 8:31:16 PM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 18)
Tut tut tut, that will never do. School is very important, and must always be the most important thing on your list of things to do, and oversleeping is a crime. You shall be punished *attacks*Tillyenna on November 11, 2005, 3:48:21 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 18)
dude *laughs*, do you have a problem with maths.....math is GREATTillyenna on November 11, 2005, 3:46:23 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 17)
hmmm, doofus, one is not evil, I AM COOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!! *thanks kara* thankies thankies thankies, many many thankies......dude
angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 10, 2005, 4:24:39 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 17)
YAY!!!! AND... there was... wait a tic *counts* 19 lines where it was not in the 1st person *claps* I am proud of you.Anyways, greatness of chapter is really great. How long from your birthday party to this little grt together thingy??? Just wondering for story.
Okies, talk later. And...GET YOUR @$$ ON MSN THIS INSTANT!!!! *as soon as you get this, and then you will already be on msn, aww well...)
Nemya on November 9, 2005, 4:29:15 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 17)
So much for a whole page. *Counts* 9 lines. (Not including spacings between lines) Don't wind me up :KArgeh, also don't expect me to leave long comments for you if you don't on my own stories, argy it annoys me so much as you get more readers for a start D:
Aaaaanyways, Tenshi is evil. Evil I tell you. EEEEVIL.
What on earth is "kidd"?
And what's with the mega description of your /underwear/!?
You can't do that. Can't change it so Dook goes to kiss Yuula :K
Ahhh I would like to leave comment but I'm not for reason stated above. Okay, not really. I have to be going to school.
yoailover on November 8, 2005, 4:25:46 AM
yoailover on (Chapter: 1)
like itangel_of_beauty_and_light on November 7, 2005, 11:54:26 PM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 16)
Hey dude! Great chapter!!! Heeheehee, Seto's house is amazing! Garg! I HATE SCHOOL KEYBOARDS! SO HARD TO TYPE!!!!Anyways, coolness, will comment more laters, as gotta go soon. LOL Manning
Tillyenna on November 7, 2005, 10:38:56 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 16)
is it just me, but did mel just use the words -passivly suggesting.......SOMENE HAS BEEN LISTENING IN ENGLISH LESSONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! shockinganyhoooooooos how come im not there, bub...
Nemya on November 6, 2005, 5:16:50 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 16)
"We walked downstairs together, and everyone else looked similarly elegant" Hang on! This is passive suggesting that HONDA is ELEGANT!!!!
I don't think so.
Nemya on November 6, 2005, 5:15:43 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 16)
Nyeee awesomeness and YAYAYAA You wrote more!!! Thank yooouuu! I don't think this mass of parties will ever end. Hardly /anyone/ gets on with Seto. Taterhead.
Hee hee, cannot pronounce her name.
Marik: You cant either.
Mel: Shut up. :K
Aaaand, random phone call from Smeagol. Random x3
Ha ha, "Is it 'cause of that gross scar thing on your back". And Yuula gives you a huuuuge self-ego boost. So tactful^^
But, scars are fun^^ Wheee!!!
Nemya on November 5, 2005, 10:49:42 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 15)
Okie, baaack...Now, where I left off... What the?! Seto leaves BREAD CRUMBS?!?!?! I cannot imagine him doing that o.O
Typical for Seto to have so many nice rooms. Tenshi staying in the room next to Mokie?
Oh dear, Tenshi is so... Katy like. That's all that needs to be said x.X
Nemya on November 5, 2005, 7:55:58 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 15)
AHH too many parties! I think I am having an overload.Ew. Sharing a room with the Honda. He's a Honda...
Hee hee. "Too much Kaede was bad for one's health" Indeed. And surviving her phone calls xD
Why, I am unbelievably poilte! Although... Yeah, Yuula is not so much as me xP
Indeed, and Yami is better then Honda. Everyone is. (The exception being Weevil)
DONT TEASE YUULA ABOUT DOOK. :K Ahhh, tickling. Grab some clean stuff?
ARRR my mum is getting mad so shall leave a comment later as second half, okie?
Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:50:17 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 15)
seperate rooms grrrr......i am not some annoying little kid, I am the most perfect human being you will come across, as close to perfection as one can get without being.....er.....arrogant *laughs*
Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:46:07 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 14)
*laughs so much it hurts*Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:43:05 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 13)
oooooooh cheese, but sweet, teach him to be a good rider, okay?Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:40:50 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 12)
wow groovy partyTillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:39:07 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 11)
wow, fun party, how old are you now?Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:36:08 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 10)
YOU ARE AS BAD AS MANNING......tooooooo much detail my freind toooooooo muchTillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:34:36 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 9)
1930's music rocks.......btw im loving the way your story and minnings story is the same story but not....if you get me?Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:31:05 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 8)
*laughs*Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:27:51 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 7)
*laughs* 'a special place'
Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:25:39 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 6)
wow, awkwardTillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:22:26 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 5)
dude, im his.....'special freind'Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:18:58 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 4)
ew.... those kissy noises must be playing havoc with mels brain (q. does mel HAVE a brain?)Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:14:41 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 3)
urgh.....honda, *laughs*house sounds cool
Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:09:53 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 2)
dude, what a gorgeous horse......dammit i wish i could still ride *goes off on random cursing spree cursing all the doctors in the world*Tillyenna on November 4, 2005, 8:03:35 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 1)
im reading okay...........is confusing, i hate it when i unexpectedly cannot find the right language, i know how she feelsNemya on November 3, 2005, 5:54:33 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 14)
ARGRAGA NO THE HONDA NO LONGER HAS THE HONDA HAIR!!!!!!And you took him riding.. Oh dear.....
angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 3, 2005, 4:50:24 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 14)
Hahaha! Thats so good! And he didn't notice you messing up his hair? I think he would have actually thrown you off his lap if you touched his hair.angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 3, 2005, 4:42:37 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 13)
YAY! YOU PHONED ME! OUT OF EVERYBODY YOU PHONED ME!!!And may I just point out Kaede would immediately be like "What's wrong, what happened, are you okay" coz thats how she is. She has a short temper, but she always looks out for her friends if they are upset.
And why the hell would Honda do that? He is such a charming boyfriend NOT! Why did you take him back, he doesn't deserve you!!!
And he has totally weird hair!!!
Anyways, next chapter....
Nemya on November 1, 2005, 4:30:21 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 13)
Honda is such an idiot. He dumped you for THAT?!?! But I presume you start going out again? At least sometime? Awesome :3But don't just phone Manning! Phose us others too!
Oh dear, I just cannot imagine Honda doing horse riding. My arm really hurts D:
Nemya on November 1, 2005, 2:52:29 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 12)
Phew, I don't have to go with Dook, Yuula instead gets to go with RYOU AYAYAYYAAAAAA!!!!!!^^Theses big noise lots of dancing parties would scare me. Too many people *Goes to hide in the corner* But dressing up, which is very fun ;3
Ewww... It's a Honda.
Nemya on November 1, 2005, 2:50:35 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 11)
Hee hee, awesome! You really have so many parties, especially amazing ones xP Where everyone dresses up, so all must be rich!! And Marc is just a university student didn't you say? But you must have been pretty rich before, to all own horse xPLooovely chapter. Now show go to the next one^^
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 31, 2005, 5:08:37 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 12)
Aww, such a cool ending to the party. Heh heh, me and Seto being amazing at dancing! Well, I am definately, and he is good, but not as good as me, no way ^^Well, what do you expect? Being a slave girl who danced for rich men so they could get their kicks??
Anyways, it is so cool. And now I am going to read Ani's. Later.
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 31, 2005, 4:52:01 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 11)
Aww, tis great. Sorry, this comment isn't going to be that great as I am listening to a whole load of really sad songs and they are just maing me feel depressed, but it is amazing, homestly. Tis great, but I can't find anything to mention, so next chapter.Nemya on October 31, 2005, 1:19:17 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 9)
Aha ha Awesome I love costume parties, they are sooo fun! Nyuuu and Yuula came at a cattt bweee x3 I shall try to draw all of this.. Although if you draw first I shall use yours for a reference.Oooh. I dislike dancing *Twitch* Too many people. And DONT YOU EVEN THINK OF WRITING THAT ABOUT ME AND DUKE AND RYOU!!!!
Nemya on October 31, 2005, 1:17:03 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 8)
Ooooh you're going to die, and yes I am am commenting on each individual chapter! Wow, Sakura can speak too many languages *Dies* Although Yuula is fluent in English and Japanese, abut Japanese is not her first language so she would probably make stupid mistakes xPBWA HA MASSIVE NEEDLE FEEL THE PAAAIIIIIN!
Nemya on October 30, 2005, 5:39:49 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 10)
Ew. I totally agree with Ani. Apart from the sweet part. This is HONDA.Shall comment on individual chapters when I actually have time, sorry x.X
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 30, 2005, 4:37:37 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 10)
Awwwwww!!!!!!!!! You and Honda!!!! THAT IS SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is also pretty evil, but we'll over look that!!!Awww, don't really know what to say bout this chapter, except that it was amazing!!! Coolness! LOL!!! Write more immediately!!!
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 30, 2005, 4:13:51 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 9)
WOW!!!! I LOVE THAT CHAPTER SO MUCH!!!! YAYNESS! ME AND SETO CAME TOGETHER!!!! And Joey must have looked like such a prat, all on his own heh heh heh.OMG!!!! I have just realsied something!!!! Miho is a prostitute, and I came as Miho with Seto, so it was like I was his prostitute!!! OMG!!! How degrading.
Wow, that sounds like a good party. But imagine me dancing with Seto. He's like, a head taller than the tallest person I have ever met (Penny xD), so, OMG, thats scary to think about.
BUT I LOVE DANCING AT PARTIES LIKE THIS!!! Soooooooo amazing. But hang on, lets just try and immagine Seto putting on a Sean Connery accent. Is that possible? I think not! AND he went to the bar without me? And didn't get me a drink?!?! That bastard, who is actually amazing and isn't a lying cheating scumbag like SOMEONE I might mention *strangles Joey* thats 2 guys who have cheated on me *strangles Legolas as well* Ahem *lets them go and acts dignified* well, Seto is a good replacement.
YAY! THE MACARENA!!! THAT IT LIKE THE BEST DANCE IN THE ENTIRE WORLD, IS IT NOT? ESPECHIALLY WHEN YOU DANCE IT TO SOMETHING THAT ISN'T THE MACARENA.
HANG ON!!!!!!!!! WTF!!! WHERE THE **** IS YUULA? OMG!!!! SHE'S HAVING CAKE WITH DUKE AGAIN!!!
Wait a tick *scans* WHERE IS RYOU?!?!?!?!?!?! DON'T TELL ME, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! THEY'RE HAVING A THREESOME *collapses with laughter* OMG!!!! *laughs so much* I seriously am crying with laughter now! That is so funny! Please let that be what has happened, because Mel will go completely spaz!!! Heh heh heh!! No, seriously, please let that be what it was.
Please write more soon *begs*
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 29, 2005, 11:17:44 PM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 8)
Well, it is hard to find something to say, as you kept interupting me talking about Honda wallpapers and sending me links, but from what I did read it was really good.You see there you go again, sending me links. But the last two were good. Anyways, sweet chapter, and now gonna go see Mel's pics. Write more soon *begs*
Nemya on October 29, 2005, 2:23:36 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 7)
Awwww. You and... The Honda. Bleurk xPOooh, I am so tired, and your's and Manning's stories to read, I'm sorry but I shall try to leave you a long comment later? I'm so sorry, but awesome storiness. Too good at writing, and I love the last bit :3
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 28, 2005, 7:57:52 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 7)
WAAA! THAT IS SOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!! I would LOVE to sit in the rain with some extremely hot guy (not compairing any hot guy with Honda, who is a Honda and therefore cannot ever be hot) and just talk and hug and kiss and, mmmmm, better not say THAT out loud! Anyways, AMAZING!!!! Write more soon xxangel_of_beauty_and_light on October 28, 2005, 7:30:08 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 6)
You read poetry together?Under a tree?
In the scorching heat?
And in a meadow?
Walking hand-in-hand?
What has this story turned into? It is all lovey dovey? And..
YOU'VE OVERTAKEN ME?!?!?!?!?! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME????? HOW WILL I LIVE??? WRITE MORE FURUBA AND I WILL FORGIVE YOU (in time)
Well, it was a good chapter, just a little clicheish at the end. But I have to point out something that made me laugh and it wasn't even a typo, I think anyways:
"I got up off the bed, and Honda got off as well" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! THAT MADE ME CRACK BUT SO MUCH *goes serious* But it was a great chapter. Please write more soon. Please please please... *begs* And of Furuba too, coz I miss reading that.
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 28, 2005, 6:54:46 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 5)
YAY! IS AMAZING! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! YAY! I loved that beach chapter. Sooooo cool!!! YAY! Can't wait to read chapter 6 *hint hint*angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 27, 2005, 1:06:36 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 4)
Well, there is absolutely no point in me commenting seeing as you are at my house, but whatever.Tis very good, love the whole party thing. Ha ha ha, you and Honda in your hole (yes, I know I'm mean).
YAY! Party! Can't wait for another. Anyways, next chapter in my story is pretty strange, but after that there will be a chapter with a little bit of point to it, hmmm, maybe, depends......
Anyways, gotta go trampoline. LOL Great chapter.
Nemya on October 26, 2005, 6:09:40 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 4)
*glomps you*AHAHAHAHAAA It's so awesome YAYYYAAAA you wrote more, and soooo amazingly goood!
Yeah, Marc scares me, he's like Kaede's grandparents, only not THAt scary, must be something about the main characters relations...
AHHH You kiss Honda good thing Yuula stopped you from the awfulness that is kissy noises...Don't leave me with the Dook!!!! He bullied Yuula into cake! Threatened to beat her up! And then you sing the soooong oh noo x.X
AGRAGRAG You walked in on me and Dook, yes lets stay opposite sides of the room shall we Dook? Luckily you did not say what they were doing, Yuula could have been eating his head :3
AND AGARGARAGRAGAR YOU HAVE CAKE WITH HONDA NOOO WORST PUNISHMENT EVERRRR!
Yes, it's a love/hate relationship with Yuula and Dook, more hate than love...
RAGRAGA GNOMES, RUN FOR COVERRR! *Joins Ritchan*
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 25, 2005, 4:37:02 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 3)
Okay, totally amazing story so far. YAY! I'm in it! That is so totally cool (well, of course, as I make it cool^^)Anyways, YAY! You mentioned the Joey, me and Kaiba love triangle thingy! Sooooo cool.
Duke is such a creep, and its so funny coz your like "YUULA and YOU went out?" Hahahahaha!!! I love it so much. I can just the the look on your face!!!
Honda came over to your house? HONDA came over to your house? Okay, news flash, this is HONDA, the worlds biggest creep, and you INVITED him to your HOUSE???? My God, you are gonna have so insane physco stalker soon.
Okay, it was all great, until the kitchen bit. I'm sorry but this made me laugh SO much:
"I was big, and modern, with high-tech equipment."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Sorry, it is just a typo, but it is hilarious!!!! Might just be my sick mind that made it hilarious, but hey, people who don't find such sick things funny are kinda boring.
Its like that lunchtime when Penny just kept saying sick joke after sick joke and everyone was cracking up with laughter. Heeheehee, can't remember what she said but it was funny. Then Katy said something really strange and everyone stared at her and then she had to explain it, and we were all TOTALLY suprised it wasn't sick, and it just made us crack up even more.
Ahhhh, well, nice long comment for you to read eventually. Have a nice time with rest of holiday (yeah, I should really phone you about coming over to my house shouldn't I?) and see ya at school (after you come over, duh)
Ciou for now lol xxx
Nemya on October 24, 2005, 3:55:18 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 3)
Fwomping. Nyee hee^^
ARGRAGA NO LEARNING ABOUT WAVES!!! Physics is soo boring... AND YAYAYYAA Yuula gets to sit next to RYOU! AYAYAAAA!
Tch tch. You shouldn't smoke. Maybe following Gooey, although you are in different stories.....
You HAD to mention something about Yuula and the Dook, didn't you. He probably contaminated her stuff when it was at his house. come to think of it, WHY ON EARTH would she leave stuff at his house??? Mega forgetful xP
AND HONDAAAA CAME TO YOUR HOUSE! I detect You x Hondaness happening! But I must add, Honda is a freak.
Nemya on October 23, 2005, 6:32:49 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 2)
"They were stuck with me" xDDDDJoey is an iiiidiot.
Awaaa, you describe stuff so amazingly! Keep on writing! This is going on my faves for sure! And a horse called Puella? xDDD
Nemya on October 22, 2005, 9:04:29 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 1)
Oooooh, it's sooo goood! You should be burned, too good at writing stories :KWell, please write more then! I shall keep looking! And yeah, there are more guys wearing makeup then girls in Yugioh, weirdness.
I love your descriptions of everyobody :3
Tenshi is annoying *kills her*
You alchie! However, you would have found a way to fall over without being drunk, I know it!
Ha ha, I love it how you say "One by one, all the guys began to fall asleep, including Yuula"!!!!!!!!!!!!! Imply she is a guy!!! HA HA HA! AND then you say "we left the boys to it", so it is offical, Yuula is now a man!
Dook and Honda wear enough makeup anyway, they don't need anymore! Especially Dookikins! ^^
Waaa, I'm the swimming person!
Ha ha, being pregnant = no fun for 9 WHOLE months! Enjoy!!!
Brill chapter mate! Write more soon!