My Last Breath

Chapter 1 - Unworthy Mercy
Submitted: June 5, 2005 • Updated: June 5, 2005
Word count: 1272 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 280

Chapter 2 - Struck Again
Submitted: June 11, 2005 • Updated: June 11, 2005
Word count: 851 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 246

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the_lady_eliza_faust on March 2, 2006, 7:02:50 AM

the_lady_eliza_faust on March 2, 2006, 7:02:50 AM (Chapter: 2)

Cool!!! Plez write more!

fall_of_ravens_cry on November 3, 2005, 5:08:44 AM

fall_of_ravens_cry on November 3, 2005, 5:08:44 AM (Chapter: 2)

O.O faust!*starts working with the scapel* oh ya, good work, keep it up! O.o Or ELSE!lol, jj.

Necromancer_of_Death on September 19, 2005, 4:47:11 AM

Necromancer_of_Death on September 19, 2005, 4:47:11 AM (Chapter: 2)

I love it!! Please continue!!

iluvtaoren on June 11, 2005, 2:44:42 AM

iluvtaoren on June 11, 2005, 2:44:42 AM (Chapter: 2)

nice!!!!!!!!!

Necromancer_of_Death on June 10, 2005, 8:50:00 AM

Necromancer_of_Death on June 10, 2005, 8:50:00 AM (Chapter: 1)

I LOVE THIS STORY!! Are you gonna keep writing? please do

FaustVIII on June 5, 2005, 6:04:00 PM

FaustVIII on June 5, 2005, 6:04:00 PM (Chapter: 1)

Its very nice. A great way to start out there but it seems a little rushed.... ^_^ Slow down a bit and you'll have a piece of perfection on your hands! ^_^
-faust