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Chapter 1 - Dark thoughts

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Chapter 1 - Dark thoughts

Chapter 1 - Dark thoughts
dark thoughts lurk
around in time,
my troubled soul
my tortured mind.

no one will ever
feel my pain
so i'll run away,
and hide in the shadows again.

you can lock me up
you can tie me down
but imprinted on my face
shall remain a frown.

i COULD scream,
i COULD die,
i COULD live
but i WILL cry.

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dark1567 on March 6, 2006, 4:14:59 PM

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dark1567your good i like the darkness it is a vary apelling poem you should wright more of them.

dark

Lanfear on May 16, 2005, 4:22:10 PM

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Lanfearwow, that's an awesome poem, i know how you feel there, i have quite a few of these poems in my section ;). Love how you did it in 1 stanza, really good rhythm too. Lanfear

ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:49:34 AM

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ILoveAangOMG how did you write that poem you should be a professional i meen those words were deep i know i could never have came up with your choice of words.....

Hacker_Crystal on September 10, 2004, 8:08:53 AM

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Hacker_Crystal-blink blink- whoa..... -blink blink- thats.....AWESOME!

currupted on August 9, 2004, 3:44:49 PM

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curruptedthis an awsome poem and i will defietly add this to my favs. :p

SS5DIABLO on April 24, 2004, 1:23:58 PM

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SS5DIABLOthis would make a good part in slipknot song tatterted and tourn
I dont think i spelled that right

BloodySunAngel on April 24, 2004, 4:48:05 AM

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BloodySunAngelYou rule! *sniffs* YOU ROCK!
Your the best! I'm going to make something for you!
Not sure what, but something!