dark thoughts

Chapter 1 - Dark thoughts
Submitted: April 11, 2004 • Updated: April 11, 2004
Word count: 62 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 218

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dark1567 on March 6, 2006, 4:14:59 PM

dark1567 on March 6, 2006, 4:14:59 PM (Chapter: 1)

your good i like the darkness it is a vary apelling poem you should wright more of them.

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Lanfear on May 16, 2005, 4:22:10 PM

Lanfear on May 16, 2005, 4:22:10 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow, that's an awesome poem, i know how you feel there, i have quite a few of these poems in my section ;). Love how you did it in 1 stanza, really good rhythm too. Lanfear

ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:49:34 AM

ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:49:34 AM (Chapter: 1)

OMG how did you write that poem you should be a professional i meen those words were deep i know i could never have came up with your choice of words.....

Hacker_Crystal on September 10, 2004, 8:08:53 AM

Hacker_Crystal on September 10, 2004, 8:08:53 AM (Chapter: 1)

-blink blink- whoa..... -blink blink- thats.....AWESOME!

currupted on August 9, 2004, 3:44:49 PM

currupted on August 9, 2004, 3:44:49 PM (Chapter: 1)

this an awsome poem and i will defietly add this to my favs. :p

SS5DIABLO on April 24, 2004, 1:23:58 PM

SS5DIABLO on April 24, 2004, 1:23:58 PM (Chapter: 1)

this would make a good part in slipknot song tatterted and tourn
I dont think i spelled that right

BloodySunAngel on April 24, 2004, 4:48:05 AM

BloodySunAngel on April 24, 2004, 4:48:05 AM (Chapter: 1)

You rule! *sniffs* YOU ROCK!
Your the best! I'm going to make something for you!
Not sure what, but something!