Her Last Thoughts.
Submitted October 31, 2005 Updated October 31, 2005 Status Incomplete | I'll love you, even in death.
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Chapter 1 - Not Worthy of a Mausouleum
Submitted: October 31, 2005 • Updated: October 31, 2005
Word count: 306 • Size: 1k • Comments: 12 • views: 391
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crazy_jamaican_gurl on October 12, 2006, 6:07:42 AM
crazy_jamaican_gurl on (Chapter: 1)
That is very good...i like the line about waiting in Hell. Tis written like a masterpiece!niou on January 13, 2006, 12:39:04 AM
niou on (Chapter: 1)
this was my favorite line :"Darling, will you be waiting in Hell for me?"
nice work ^^
orianajones on January 12, 2006, 12:31:49 PM
orianajones on (Chapter: 1)
this is really sad and seems to be about having the heart blinded by love. sad but beautifulluv ya orianajones
p.s. thanks for the coment on *dance of tears*, i may colour it in.
TsunachiSpiritHolder on January 1, 2006, 9:40:17 AM
TsunachiSpiritHolder on (Chapter: 1)
so sad...i like it...greatest ever ^_^ heres a cookie *gives cookie*dramaqueen101 on December 21, 2005, 10:42:16 PM
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Love this poem! *favs*CodeCrush on November 14, 2005, 1:00:18 PM
CodeCrush on (Chapter: 1)
Wow....... again..... LOL, i gotta get something new up in my head....dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko on November 6, 2005, 11:29:11 AM
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That's beautiful, full of emotion, I heart it!*faves*rinygrin on November 2, 2005, 2:08:54 PM
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Great Job! =( sad yet prettyNessa51189 on November 1, 2005, 11:00:07 AM
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I am so glad you can. I'm glad I am getting through to someone out there.Immortally_Broken on November 1, 2005, 12:22:57 AM
Immortally_Broken on (Chapter: 1)
Ooo nice! It's creepy and sad but so good...My vocabulary isn't big enough to rhyme like that. Excellent poem/song thingy!