Apart

Chapter 1 - Apart
Submitted: November 24, 2003 • Updated: November 24, 2003
Word count: 41 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 228

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tiler_james on January 11, 2004, 2:28:23 PM

tiler_james on January 11, 2004, 2:28:23 PM (Chapter: 1)

i like it. the first 4 lines remind me of the lyrics from the song "I will always be with you" from the movie All Dogs Go To Heaven 2. ^-^

ikey on January 4, 2004, 10:37:17 PM

ikey on January 4, 2004, 10:37:17 PM (Chapter: 1)

i love it!!!i think its so pretty(don't worry im not putting my love life down again)


*Saves To Faves*

kuramas_girl on December 25, 2003, 12:10:32 AM

kuramas_girl on December 25, 2003, 12:10:32 AM (Chapter: 1)

oooooo I really like this one!!! ~.~ It makes me feel like fate will send me a dark whole of no return......(I think I'm dolushonal?)

kohaku_theblackwolf on November 27, 2003, 8:26:31 PM

kohaku_theblackwolf on November 27, 2003, 8:26:31 PM (Chapter: 1)

Thats good!

Weirdopunkwolf on November 27, 2003, 6:05:44 AM

Weirdopunkwolf on November 27, 2003, 6:05:44 AM (Chapter: 1)

very good poem i liked it ;)