I am the Remedy~{A Vampire Story}
Submitted July 30, 2007 Updated September 2, 2007 Status Incomplete | I story about a girl, Angelalie and a new guy she met, Jakaspher and a horrible secert she descovers about him. What will happen? And what is the horrible, yet intrugingly deadly secert? Read and find out. |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Story and Character Info
Submitted: July 30, 2007 • Updated: July 30, 2007
Word count: 575 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 561
Chapter 2 - The Second Chapter That is Really the First
Submitted: July 31, 2007 • Updated: July 31, 2007
Word count: 1093 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 342
Chapter 3 - Technically the 2nd chapter
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
Word count: 530 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 371
Chapter 4 - Chapter 3: Resturant
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
Word count: 1109 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 333
Chapter 5 - Chappie 4: When happiness comes sadness
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
Word count: 1194 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 557
Chapter 6 - A poll
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
Word count: 33 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 321
Chapter 7 - Teh fifth part!
Submitted: August 15, 2007 • Updated: August 15, 2007
Word count: 1238 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 324
Chapter 8 - The sixth chappie!
Submitted: August 16, 2007 • Updated: August 16, 2007
Word count: 1940 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 395
Chapter 9 - Teh 7th chapter!
Submitted: August 17, 2007 • Updated: August 17, 2007
Word count: 1001 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 316
Chapter 10 - Teh 8th chappier-ter..
Submitted: August 19, 2007 • Updated: August 19, 2007
Word count: 878 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 569
Chapter 11 - Chappie nueve
Submitted: August 26, 2007 • Updated: August 26, 2007
Word count: 828 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 303
Chapter 12 - 12
Submitted: September 1, 2007 • Updated: September 1, 2007
Word count: 849 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 323
Comments
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KiatheKali on December 9, 2007, 8:27:20 AM
MORE CHAPPIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >.<KiatheKali on September 2, 2007, 4:25:07 AM
Oooh... I see quite a resemblence!! ^-^darc on September 1, 2007, 12:49:36 PM
Nice. I had a similiar detail about vampires in my own Digimon story. xD I guess great minds think alike. Even though I don't really have a great mind.... Ah! I'm rambling. I liked this chapter. I could tell you added more details, and it made it even better. The only thing that bugs me is the 'WTF' at the end, but I suppose some people think the letters instead of the words. xD So It's not really a problem...Lol, just ignore me. xDDD Anyways, excellent chapter, and can't wait for more!
darc on August 28, 2007, 10:15:29 AM
I like it so far! :]Only thing that bothers me is the lack of details. You do have a very nice talent as a writer, so try adding a few more details. Other then that... It's awesome. Like REALLY awesome. I love vampire stories with a passion. xD I am currently writing a digimon vampire story over at fanfiction.net. x3
So keep up the excellent work and update soon!
(This is so going on my favorites..)
KiatheKali on August 27, 2007, 10:20:07 PM
O.O -has nothing to say-KiatheKali on August 27, 2007, 10:21:42 PM
Nope!! That was a lie!! ^-^ I have somethin' to say, alright. *takes deep breath* THISISTHEBESTfrackINGSTORYOUTTHEREANDIAMNOTANDIMEANNOTLYINGYOUBETTERPUTMORECHAPTERSSOICOULDFAVORITEANDPICKTHISGOTITGOOD!!!!!...
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fAnTaSyAnGeL07 on August 27, 2007, 12:49:05 PM
i am obsessed with this story i luv it and i cant stop reading it and all the praises that ur getting u deserve them and much more!!!luckylace222 on August 25, 2007, 2:53:29 AM
D: A look of despair......................luckylace222 on August 25, 2007, 2:52:59 AM
xD OH NO!!!!!! THAT SUBSTITUTE DETENTIONIST IS VERY KEEN!!!!!!KiatheKali on August 20, 2007, 8:40:23 AM
Hm... -thinking- Hm... OH! ^-^ I like Jakshper the best!! Hate.... No one... T.TKiatheKali on August 20, 2007, 8:38:46 AM
-.- More chapters. NOW.KiatheKali on August 17, 2007, 5:11:43 PM
Stop saying belligerent!! >.< I think I might become belligerent on you. XPÂ
YEY!!!!!! You actually revealed it!! Now - *-* - reveal the plot completely. I NEED to favorite/pick it!! >.<
rosecrow13 on August 17, 2007, 3:10:00 PM
Cliff hanger!!!! Write more!! And watch out for grammar!!!luckylace222 on August 16, 2007, 6:55:42 AM
"Ok, you guys can leave, I am home." I said, and gasped at what time is was. School ended at 2:15, and I had an hour and half of detention, then the two hour drive to the mall, the 3and a half hours there, the two hour drive back, plus five minutes at Mc Donalds, the five minutes spent at Zeke's and the 10-ish minutes drive home. I didn't know I was gone THAT long. Darn it! I am tired and I still need to study for a vocabulary test!"xD WHOA!!! THAT'S SOME SERIOUSLY INPRESSIVE ACCOUNT FOR TIME PROBLEM SOLVING!
luckylace222 on August 16, 2007, 3:56:49 AM
xD ROB A BANK!!! YES!!! GO!!!!!InuNaruFable2 on August 13, 2007, 12:42:36 AM
Lol. I LIKE PIE TOO!luckylace222 on August 12, 2007, 11:17:52 AM
O_o I'm seriously.........not good at discussing this type of stuff....... xD BUT I DO IN FACT LOVE PIE!!!!!!luckylace222 on August 12, 2007, 4:22:43 AM
xD LASAGNA!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOUNDS LIKE GARFEILD!!!! LOL!!!!!!luckylace222 on August 12, 2007, 4:22:08 AM
D: This is so sad.I'm glad she got the hug though....Dx I would want a hug too!!!! *sniff*luckylace222 on August 11, 2007, 12:07:51 PM
xD IT WAS NOT BORING!!!!!!!! Zeke's in it!! OMG!! HOT!KiatheKali on August 1, 2007, 2:59:27 AM
I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
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T.T Is the next chapter coming out today..?
luckylace222 on July 31, 2007, 3:08:32 AM
:D Cool!InuNaruFable2 on July 30, 2007, 5:37:38 PM
Oh and by the way, the teachers name is Mrs. KURK. I just put Foul there because she hates foul language and always catches Zeke saying it, and he is nearly the only person she catches swearing.