7 years

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7 years

Author
Jinx_in_Pink

Submitted
August 2, 2005
Updated
August 2, 2005
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 13k
Words: 2,609
Comments: 3
Views: 946
Faves...: 1
Rating: 0

Isabel just wants to stay young....

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Category: Miscellaneous

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: August 2, 2005 • Updated: August 2, 2005
Word count: 2609 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 233

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theWriter on January 31, 2006, 8:56:15 AM

theWriter on January 31, 2006, 8:56:15 AM (Chapter: 1)

Not only does the story start well and truly give the reader an idea of what being a 7yr. old tomboy-wannabie is like, but it heightens her pain and her thought processes beautifully. For a short story, this speaks incredible depth, and I am impressed. The finale does end rather sadly, but life is not always roses, either. This was astounding and, I must say, it's going to my favorites...which is rare. Nothing gets to my favorites.

Keep it up.

Dr_Postal on October 11, 2005, 11:44:15 AM

Dr_Postal on October 11, 2005, 11:44:15 AM (Chapter: 1)

that cuts deep.
I don't know where you get this stuff, but keep writing, I've never read anything better.
You're amazing.

Trinity_Fire on August 2, 2005, 10:33:49 PM

Trinity_Fire on August 2, 2005, 10:33:49 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow, this story is so sad and beautiful! I love the way you did it, with the descriptions and the style... this was so sad! and good, at the same time. Wonderful, I absolutely love this!
And I can't believe you didn't get any more comments, you're such of an awesome writer!
Keep writing, I love this. ^_________________^-
::heartheartheart:: +favs!