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Why does everything in the universe spin?

God and the devil are playing pool.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: August 2, 2005 • Updated: August 2, 2005
Word count: 424 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 389

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theWriter on January 31, 2006, 8:58:34 AM

theWriter on (Chapter: 1)
theWriterIt is apparent there that is an incredible sybolism and amusing twist on life in your tales. Both God and Satan are likely prone to playing pool...What the stakes are, God knows (pun intended), but this story itself was incredibly amusing to read. Clearly you are a writer.

Gaz on August 26, 2005, 12:17:12 AM

Gaz on (Chapter: 1)
GazLOL

Trinity_Fire on August 2, 2005, 10:36:19 PM

Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Trinity_FireThis is an interesting take on it all. ^^- I love the realism and symbology and such that you always put into your stories, it's great! This is a very cute piece. You've got to keep writing, you have amazing talent. ^_________^