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Shatter

I hold on to nothing because sentimental value is a trap...

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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: August 10, 2005 • Updated: August 10, 2005
Word count: 210 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 179

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Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:18:32 PM

Dr_Postal on (Chapter: 1)
Dr_PostalRight, you're way better than Robert bloody Frost. "Two roads diverged in a yellow wood" and I'm a pompous bastard. I like this poem. I feel the need to phrase my compliment simply because of the simple nature of the grief outlined in this work, the total defeat and abject ruin that plagues the mind of the written word.
The only way to hurt a man who has lost everything, is to give him back something broken.

AmbiguousMonk on August 10, 2005, 9:04:14 AM

AmbiguousMonk on (Chapter: 1)
AmbiguousMonkNot bad!
Not bad at all!
I like it!
Awesome work.

Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 7:58:04 AM

Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Trinity_Firewow, this was awesome! Poetry, too. ^^-
The descriptions and personification and such that you used are awesome! ^____^-
+favs, I liked to read this one over again. beautiful!