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Chapter 1 - Untitled

...Smile...Smile...

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled


A Smile

You thought,

When I smile, I am amused,

When I smile, I am happy,

When I smile, all are fine.

ooo

You thought,

With this smile, I am vulnerable,

With this smile, I am naïve,

With this smile, I'll follow where you lead.

ooo

But, you never knew,

With this smile that you thought was weak,

I wait and bear and smile again,

Until you leave all defences down,

And I smilingly will crush you entirely,

And leave you wondering what hit you so,

And I will wait and smile again,

For others who thought me

A smiling fool.


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Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:21:10 PM

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Dr_PostalI find this poem to be a brilliant work of near-genius caliber. The idea of a monster behind a facade is an ancient and highly valued tradition in literature and I'm glad to see it so viciously and desperately rendered in the current generation.

AmbiguousMonk on August 10, 2005, 9:09:19 AM

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AmbiguousMonkThis is wicked sweet.
You have proven yourself to be quite the poet,
Keep up the good work!

Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 8:07:55 AM

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Trinity_Firewow, this piece was nice! ^^- I loved the way you set it up in those three parts, you fit each to the semi-kinda-topic thing well. ^^;;
+favs! You write awesome poems. :)