Smile

I find this poem to be a brilliant work of near-genius caliber. The idea of a monster behind a facade is an ancient and highly valued tradition in literature and I'm glad to see it so viciously and desperately rendered in the current generation.

This is wicked sweet.
You have proven yourself to be quite the poet,
Keep up the good work!

wow, this piece was nice! ^^- I loved the way you set it up in those three parts, you fit each to the semi-kinda-topic thing well. ^^;;
+favs! You write awesome poems. :)