Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted August 10, 2005 Updated August 10, 2005 Status Incomplete | I will paint you in silver And wrap you in gold...
Category:
Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry |
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
I will paint you in silver
And wrap you in gold
I will make you a memory
That will never grow cold
Like my love for you did
With the frost of first light
The loss of longing
Or the silence tonight
Like the imprint of kisses
From lovers long past
Burning in the darkness
But never to last
Gone with the night
To dawn's harshest glare
Paper to flame turned to dust
Without care
I burn much like lanterns
And melt with these tears
The hidden reminders
Of love and fears
Though the memory is sliver
And wrapped up in gold
This heart is now heavy
And you are too cold…
A/N: Ummm…it depressing but that's how I feel right now. My sadness makes for sucky poetry apparently.
Comments
You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment
Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 11:40:27 PM
Trinity_Fire on
Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:09:39 PM
Dr_Postal on
Sucky poetry? To apply this label to such an obviously heartfelt work is tantamount to insanity! This is an experience to be remembered for all time, an experience that will never grow cold.
I love the descriptive things you did... like, 'imprint of kisses' and 'paper to flame turned to dust' and 'melt with these tears' it's just so beautiful!!!!!
XDDDDDDDDDD
You are the best poet I have met. The things you write make sense. -_-;;;
I LOVE IT!!!!! ^___________^-