Fleeting Love
Submitted August 10, 2005 Updated August 10, 2005 Status Incomplete | I will paint you in silver And wrap you in gold...
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Submitted: August 10, 2005 • Updated: August 10, 2005
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Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 11:40:27 PM
Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:09:39 PM
Dr_Postal on (Chapter: 1)
Sucky poetry? To apply this label to such an obviously heartfelt work is tantamount to insanity! This is an experience to be remembered for all time, an experience that will never grow cold.
I love the descriptive things you did... like, 'imprint of kisses' and 'paper to flame turned to dust' and 'melt with these tears' it's just so beautiful!!!!!
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You are the best poet I have met. The things you write make sense. -_-;;;
I LOVE IT!!!!! ^___________^-